Hw ((Phonix)) Vs Con

[Criticize]

due thur. checks in prior.

12 bars

norm rules apply

[Phonix]

Wanna make this one for you're title too mate?
Since i am next in line n all

im going 12

goodluck

[Con]

of course.

lets post early coz i gotta do aero..

say..in 2 dayz?

[Phonix]

yeh man i'll post up tomorrow

Since this is for the HW TITLE of the site too..i would appreciate votes from people like crit.plot.flu.pem.strong.malone etc as opposed to pharmacist,dopeart etc
thanks.



First and formost i would like to direct your attention to con and his fam

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/code-956-a-114111.html (code 956)

cute..

Originally Posted by Con

wat can i say, i indulge in food a lot.

Must slump your regrets on your fam, who were supposedly myth
but now we see they're Just 'a bunch of rejects'
......from the fast and the furious: Tokyo drift
straight out of the frying pan..con's favouring chips
when he steps up to the buffet
It's no wonder the Kuwaits all night..guess it explain this Asian eclipse
saw Aero say your a bitch, pinkslip and provoke the fist probation
would of waited for the HW shot
but you won't be a round necks tweek..fixing Oprah's dislocations
Agent Robotica! my mechanisms slay your tone with knifes
so put your life in your suggestions and then take your own advice
a new biting talent, under DopeA's talons, coincidence? ok if you say so
otherwise it seems u've taken Raykwon'do..but this ain't Wu's payroll
Actual knowledge of music, no grounds to rap like mismatchin' coffee
Since Con's idea of a boom box is an Islamic coffin
Dance the green mile, flexible with death as you abide earths denial
guess he'll paint hyrogryphics in palaces so Con can die versatile/diverse a tile
1 trick poney..battles his heart out..on to my fist with a blast hey,
in topicals he's unable to poor tray a situation without homeless cafe's
let's say Con plateau'd as good and bypassed the next phase
there's more 'Dustin in his changing positions' than screeches sex tape
A murderous zombie..the Sensei of persians and armies
slice him so he's 'BRO KEN UP IN BOXES' ..delivering hood versions of barbie
how can i seriously fear Bathala whose 2 stepping in sandles calm
currently he's like grieving Amish cults how he's struggling to handle Pharm
string barbedwire from nostril to nostril, padlocked with a few miserable blisters
so just watch the 'blood slip through the loophole' like the judicial system

Eaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasy like sunday moooorning

[Con]

so u dont become clueless..

he's = Pho-nix, Mill-kill
Cesar Millan- famous dog trainer
Aero-phos best friend, aero-beds sells out fast
Tack- The harness for a horse, including the bridle and saddle.
A Morpho butterfly may be one of over 80 described species of the
genus Morpho. They are neotropical butterflies found mostly in South America
Colin Farrell- starred in Alexander


........think u can?


see, ur non intimidation, even Pho's friends landing on quick sedations
u loyal? bitch 'sells-out on Aero' faster than Matress Liquidations
u aint no HW VET hand, comin wit generics led to ya grave, dammed
so go become Capone's Butler, only way to say ur a 'known maide-man'
and here u aint authorized, cant own me, get ya wacness epitomized
fact is, u couldnt 'Aspire-in owning da Street' with a ford customized
fuck a retry, in ya death i dont see lies, cram u in a coffin? kno it'll b 'I'
knowin knucks'll leave u 'stackd-in a rest-case' like an incompetent P.I.
u know, i'll blow cells, he comin from a word play site..let dis ho tell
plus ya fake punches just 'Vague-as Mirage' n it aint Nevada hotels
even come wit ya crew, u kno my swing'll make ya crew running ducks
and just fuk Labs, i'll make 'DC an explotion' witout Dexter fuckin up
each verse, same'ol'trick, death on ya conscience once da fear shifts
mann, even ya punches couldnt 'surprise a-Tack' wit horse Gear gifts
hey! i fuckin own ya sector! smash dis bitch till he yells out his protector
my grasps'll 'MorPho in pieces' faster than estute butterfly collectors
hear this, u aint got a chance, tryina swing? shit, u get hit by my tora
kid, i'd make u 'Colin ya Savior', but u dont have an Alexander aura
and truth is, if rf had stretch penalties, u got badplay motion fines
as always, Pho 'elasticate, more release' than Bowflex caution signs
u aint good enuf, around dis time? truth is, all ya work lacks session
and im not talkin Art Veterans but Phonix's 'A-mateur in self expression'
then fuck relations! my Brass'll make ya medulla oblangotta plea vacations!
steady showing 'Mill-an, incomplete form!' like Cesar's greencard applications

[Malone]

[quote=Phonix;1229193]yeh man i'll post up tomorrow

Since this is for the HW TITLE of the site too..i would appreciate votes from people like crit.plot.flu.pem.strong.malone etc as opposed to pharmacist,dopeart etc
thanks.



First and formost i would like to direct your attention to con and his fam

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/code-956-a-114111.html (code 956)

cute..




Must slump your regrets on your fam, who were supposedly myth
but now we see they're Just 'a bunch of rejects'
......from the fast and the furious: Tokyo drift
LOLOLOLOLOL
straight out of the frying pan..con's favouring chips
when he steps up to the buffet
It's no wonder the Kuwaits all night..guess it explain this Asian eclipse
Ok
saw Aero say your a bitch, pinkslip and provoke the fist probation
would of waited for the HW shot
but you won't be a round necks tweek..fixing Oprah's dislocations
LOL OMG
Agent Robotica! my mechanisms slay your tone with knifes
so put your life in your suggestions and then take your own advice
ok
a new biting talent, under DopeA's talons, coincidence? ok if you say so
otherwise it seems u've taken Raykwon'do..but this ain't Wu's payroll
Eh, Thats Ok
Actual knowledge of music, no grounds to rap like mismatchin' coffee
Since Con's idea of a boom box is an Islamic coffin
Lol
Dance the green mile, flexible with death as you abide earths denial
guess he'll paint hyrogryphics in palaces so Con can die versatile/diverse a tile
Witty
1 trick poney..battles his heart out..on to my fist with a blast hey,
in topicals he's unable to poor tray a situation without homeless cafe's
Nice
let's say Con plateau'd as good and bypassed the next phase
there's more 'Dustin in his changing positions' than screeches sex tape
LOLOLOL
A murderous zombie..the Sensei of persians and armies
slice him so he's 'BRO KEN UP IN BOXES' ..delivering hood versions of barbie
Sick
how can i seriously fear Bathala whose 2 stepping in sandles calm
currently he's like grieving Amish cults how he's struggling to handle Pharm
omg
string barbedwire from nostril to nostril, padlocked with a few miserable blisters
so just watch the 'blood slip through the loophole' like the judicial system
hmm
Eaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasy like sunday moooorning






see, ur non intimidation, even Pho's friends landing on quick sedations
u loyal? bitch 'sells-out on Aero' faster than Matress Liquidations
Nice
u aint no HW VET hand, comin wit generics led to ya grave, dammed
so go become Capone's Butler, only way to say ur a 'known maide-man'
Nice
and here u aint authorized, cant own me, get ya wacness epitomized
fact is, u couldnt 'Aspire-in owning da Street' with a ford customized
Nice
fuck a retry, in ya death i dont see lies, cram u in a coffin? kno it'll b 'I'
knowin knucks'll leave u 'stackd-in a rest-case' like an incompetent P.I.
LOL
u know, i'll blow cells, he comin from a word play site..let dis ho tell
plus ya fake punches just 'Vague-as Mirage' n it aint Nevada hotels
Cool
even come wit ya crew, u kno my swing'll make ya crew running ducks
and just fuk Labs, i'll make 'DC an explotion' witout Dexter fuckin up
LOLOLOLOL
each verse, same'ol'trick, death on ya conscience once da fear shifts
mann, even ya punches couldnt 'surprise a-Tack' wit horse Gear gifts
Cool
hey! i fuckin own ya sector! smash dis bitch till he yells out his protector
my grasps'll 'MorPho in pieces' faster than estute butterfly collectors
Nice
hear this, u aint got a chance, tryina swing? shit, u get hit by my tora
kid, i'd make u 'Colin ya Savior', but u dont have an Alexander aura
OK
and truth is, if rf had stretch penalties, u got badplay motion fines
as always, Pho 'elasticate, more release' than Bowflex caution signs
OMG
u aint good enuf, around dis time? truth is, all ya work lacks session
and im not talkin Art Veterans but Phonix's 'A-mateur in self expression'
WOW, Sick Bar
then fuck relations! my Brass'll make ya medulla oblangotta plea vacations!
steady showing 'Mill-an, incomplete form!' like Cesar's greencard applications
Nice



First of all, i want to say big ups to phonix and con, both of you guys were semi par when i left, now both of you have serious talent.. Phonix, your verse was awsome - your wordplay has gotten ten times better than the last time i seen it.. Great bars, with the setup,wordplay,punches, ect. ect. you did have some off bars though, seems like you rushed part of your verse.. Con you came really really good - punchlines were solid and you had some witty wordplay in there yourself.. i honestly didnt think you would ever make it to this level.. you proved me wrong.. Even though phonix didnt really have that many hard bars, the ones he had were absolutly ridiculous.. So Basically I Had To look at what bars i liked the most and 2 out of three came from Phonix.. So Vote-Phonix..

[Criticize]

Must slump your regrets on your fam, who were supposedly myth
but now we see they're Just 'a bunch of rejects'
......from the fast and the furious: Tokyo drift
saw Aero say your a bitch, pinkslip and provoke the fist probation
would of waited for the HW shot
but you won't be a round necks tweek..fixing Oprah's dislocations
Agent Robotica! my mechanisms slay your tone with knifes
so put your life in your suggestions and then take your own advice
Actual knowledge of music, no grounds to rap like mismatchin' coffee
Since Con's idea of a boom box is an Islamic coffin


murderous zombie..the Sensei of persians and armies
slice him so he's 'BRO KEN UP IN BOXES' ..delivering hood versions of barbie

string barbedwire from nostril to nostril, padlocked with a few miserable blisters
so just watch the 'blood slip through the loophole' like the judicial system
__________________________________
fuck a retry, in ya death i dont see lies, cram u in a coffin? kno it'll b 'I'
knowin knucks'll leave u 'stackd-in a rest-case' like an incompetent P.I.
u know, i'll blow cells, he comin from a word play site..let dis ho tell
plus ya fake punches just 'Vague-as Mirage' n it aint Nevada hotels
hey! i fuckin own ya sector! smash dis bitch till he yells out his protector
my grasps'll 'MorPho in pieces' faster than estute butterfly collectors
steady showing 'Mill-an, incomplete form!' like Cesar's greencard applications
________________________


the battle of stretched wordplay heres my thoughts, phonix comes with that warped out of this world wp were you read it and your thinking, how many mushrooms did this consume after bolton smashed liverpool. some of it works some of it doesnt, you love to seperate words such as well see BOWL-TON smash liverpool like warney taking 100 wikets on the pools hometurf. but yea some of them are effective as hell, and some of them you need to lay off the acid.

con comes with the wordplay where im like wtf, half of it doesnt really formulate to a punch in any sort, like i read it and im like ok badly worded wordplay that isnt even a punch. some of them are cool, but you need to make them more direct, fancy wordplay only works when it delivers a healthy hit.

iv got to give this battle to phonix reason he had more punches i liked, con your bad wording pulls down the enjoyment of your verses, and also makes it hard to follow and figure out exactly what your trying to say, phonix had some fresh wp and some good hits, con had a few of these but not as many as pho

vote-pho

reason more consistant harder lines.

good day.

[Plot]

PHONIX
Must slump your regrets on your fam, who were supposedly myth
but now we see they're Just 'a bunch of rejects'
......from the fast and the furious: Tokyo drift
~ok
straight out of the frying pan..con's favouring chips
when he steps up to the buffet
It's no wonder the Kuwaits all night..guess it explain this Asian eclipse
~KU? meh
saw Aero say your a bitch, pinkslip and provoke the fist probation
would of waited for the HW shot
but you won't be a round necks tweek..fixing Oprah's dislocations
~forced.. but fuckin dope..! loving that cryptic shit.
Agent Robotica! my mechanisms slay your tone with knifes
so put your life in your suggestions and then take your own advice
~pre cool.. not real hard
a new biting talent, under DopeA's talons, coincidence? ok if you say so
otherwise it seems u've taken Raykwon'do..but this ain't Wu's payroll
~lol
Actual knowledge of music, no grounds to rap like mismatchin' coffee
Since Con's idea of a boom box is an Islamic coffin
~nice!
Dance the green mile, flexible with death as you abide earths denial
guess he'll paint hyrogryphics in palaces so Con can die versatile/diverse a tile
~ehh. not feeling it (what the hells die versatile mean)
1 trick poney..battles his heart out..on to my fist with a blast hey,
in topicals he's unable to poor tray a situation without homeless cafe's
~nice!
let's say Con plateau'd as good and bypassed the next phase
there's more 'Dustin in his changing positions' than screeches sex tape
~lol. nice wp.
A murderous zombie..the Sensei of persians and armies
slice him so he's 'BRO KEN UP IN BOXES' ..delivering hood versions of barbie
~FUCKIN DOPE. (coulda left the 'up' out)
how can i seriously fear Bathala whose 2 stepping in sandles calm
currently he's like grieving Amish cults how he's struggling to handle Pharm
~ehh. just ok
string barbedwire from nostril to nostril, padlocked with a few miserable blisters
so just watch the 'blood slip through the loophole' like the judicial system
~ok, coulda had a harder closer.

CON
see, ur non intimidation, even Pho's friends landing on quick sedations
u loyal? bitch 'sells-out on Aero' faster than Matress Liquidations
~mmm, good
u aint no HW VET hand, comin wit generics led to ya grave, dammed
so go become Capone's Butler, only way to say ur a 'known maide-man'
~nice!
and here u aint authorized, cant own me, get ya wacness epitomized
fact is, u couldnt 'Aspire-in owning da Street' with a ford customized
~ehh, forced, & is Aspire a model of American Fords?
fuck a retry, in ya death i dont see lies, cram u in a coffin? kno it'll b 'I'
knowin knucks'll leave u 'stackd-in a rest-case' like an incompetent P.I.
~ehh, dont like
u know, i'll blow cells, he comin from a word play site..let dis ho tell
plus ya fake punches just 'Vague-as Mirage' n it aint Nevada hotels
~dope. (shoulda been plural on the mirages)
even come wit ya crew, u kno my swing'll make ya crew running ducks
and just fuk Labs, i'll make 'DC an explotion' witout Dexter fuckin up
~ehh, ok
each verse, same'ol'trick, death on ya conscience once da fear shifts
mann, even ya punches couldnt 'surprise a-Tack' wit horse Gear gifts
~meh
hey! i fuckin own ya sector! smash dis bitch till he yells out his protector
my grasps'll 'MorPho in pieces' faster than estute butterfly collectors
~meh, like the last line the references are such stretches Im not feeling it.
hear this, u aint got a chance, tryina swing? shit, u get hit by my tora
kid, i'd make u 'Colin ya Savior', but u dont have an Alexander aura
~nice
and truth is, if rf had stretch penalties, u got badplay motion fines
as always, Pho 'elasticate, more release' than Bowflex caution signs
~HUH?
u aint good enuf, around dis time? truth is, all ya work lacks session
and im not talkin Art Veterans but Phonix's 'A-mateur in self expression'
~nice!
then fuck relations! my Brass'll make ya medulla oblangotta plea vacations!
steady showing 'Mill-an, incomplete form!' like Cesar's greencard applications
~ok.

V-Pho.

[DOPE ART]

saw Aero say your a bitch, pinkslip and provoke the fist probation
would of waited for the HW shot
but you won't be a round necks tweek..fixing Oprah's dislocations

new biting talent, under DopeA's talons, coincidence? ok if you say so
otherwise it seems u've taken Raykwon'do..but this ain't Wu's payroll

Actual knowledge of music, no grounds to rap like mismatchin' coffee
Since Con's idea of a boom box is an Islamic coffin

vs

see, ur non intimidation, even Pho's friends landing on quick sedations
u loyal? bitch 'sells-out on Aero' faster than Matress Liquidations

u aint no HW VET hand, comin wit generics led to ya grave, dammed
so go become Capone's Butler, only way to say ur a 'known maide-man'

u know, i'll blow cells, he comin from a word play site..let dis ho tell
plus ya fake punches just 'Vague-as Mirage' n it aint Nevada hotels

hear this, u aint got a chance, tryina swing? shit, u get hit by my tora
kid, i'd make u 'Colin ya Savior', but u dont have an Alexander aura

vote=Phonix.
i really liked the boom box line best.
hot ass battle.

[country boy]

werd thys is the battle of the week since i wasnt aloowed to vote :*(
but i think PHO wins 3-0 k.o.