HW Fluent(1-0) vs Con(2-0)

[Con]

8-10


Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.

go all out Masticate!

[Fluent]

8..

[Con]

i guess..

[Fluent]

I decided to mention a gun for shits and giggles. Dropping early because I doubt I'd be able to drop friday or saturday.

Con's ruining Crit's league and this dude better sweat the haters
Cuz he has more trouble carrying out orders than forgetful waiters
Expect to leave barely breathing but try seeking health advice
To live, become a cyronic's test subject and put yourself on ice
Last week had to be a fluke when ya style's old and not fresher
You treat battles like origami competitions and fold under pressure
Your murder stabs are weak and I'll have the glock ground you
Become a WNBA ticket scalper if you wanna provide Shock value
Your audio's sound wack and if you battle, no one will judge it
Turn down the reception without trimming your wedding budget
They ain't got no appeal because they're too bland and lack flare
Make girls double fist a Hilton if you wanna get they hands in the air (heir)
Don't gas yourself into thinking you can take out strong rhymers
Remove ya head from the clouds like descending mountain climbers
He was a fake champ, no one should've thought this guy's tighter
Now become a game show contesant if you want to be a prize fighter

[Con]

Fluent's name is Anthony=used to work or is working at Dominos flippin
doughs to make pizza.




heres ya unruly scorn, textile treatments im leavin dis bully torn
trade-marks on the rise? only when Flu wears his dominos uniform!
dont think i wont blow back, have time hault n fill u wit slow slaps
against me? 'Anthony's arguin wit death' like 'Hopkins meeting Joe Black'
fuck winnin! Flu's verses are hygeine freaks wit da most floss
mite as well clerk claim booths coz ur -sitting on a lost cause-
so y r u wit us? ya satements r more fake detailed than an allegory
n ya skills a crowd-threat wit sparklers, far from da Terra category
4get frees delivering ya punch amateur, take it to da lower rings
a just comin out fag, Flu's more PrePuce' than overgrown genital coverings
advices? editors become shitless compared to ur bar by bar revises
but wit me, ur 'Maiden to a blood bath' like vampires on virgin sacrifices
coz long as the worlds in transmission there'll always be wack sent
and he's Fluent? he cant even do audio wit his fucked up accent!
ur not even good, aint even elevated enuf..ya talents in stillness
go dip mail in plagues so u can finally feel 'envelope'd in illness'

[Quest-1ON]

BrEaKdOwN-----
Con's ruining Crit's league and this dude better sweat the haters
Cuz he has more trouble carrying out orders than forgetful waiters
HMMM decent wasnt feeling first line but second was 2gether
Expect to leave barely breathing but try seeking health advice
To live, become a cyronic's test subject and put yourself on ice
ummm understand it just wasnt feeling it
Last week had to be a fluke when ya style's old and not fresher
You treat battles like origami competitions and fold under pressure
<<>> but I know Ive spit something like that b-4 I WANT ORIGINALITY OR CREATIVITY KID
Your murder stabs are weak and I'll have the glock ground you
Become a WNBA ticket scalper if you wanna provide Shock value
Ok Nice actually watch the females leagues
Your audio's sound wack and if you battle, no one will judge it
Turn down the reception without trimming your wedding budget
hmm ok still not getting any hits
They ain't got no appeal because they're too bland and lack flare
Make girls double fist a Hilton if you wanna get they hands in the air (heir)
Understand it just Not feeling it
Don't gas yourself into thinking you can take out strong rhymers
Remove ya head from the clouds like descending mountain climbers
OK.......
He was a fake champ, no one should've thought this guy's tighter
Now become a game show contesant if you want to be a prize fighter
OK FINISHER????

^^^^^ YOU SEEM LIKE AN OPEN MIC CAT^^^ NONE OF YOUR PUNCHS WERE FELT... YOU GOTTA GET A LIL MORE NASTY WIT IT DUKE^^^^^^

>>>.NEXT<<<<<<
heres ya unruly scorn, textile treatments im leavin dis bully torn
trade-marks on the rise? only when Flu wears his dominos uniform!
NICE... GOOD PERSAONAL ALSO
dont think i wont blow back, have time hault n fill u wit slow slaps
against me? 'Anthony's arguin wit death' like 'Hopkins meeting Joe Black'
NICE SET UP JUST DONT GET IT ???
fuck winnin! Flu's verses are hygeine freaks wit da most floss
mite as well clerk claim booths coz ur -sitting on a lost cause-
AGAIN DONT GET IT
so y r u wit us? ya satements r more fake detailed than an allegory
n ya skills a crowd-threat wit sparklers, far from da Terra category
NICE.. IM GOING TO ASSUME THAT THATS A SQUAD AND HE CANT CUT IT
4get frees delivering ya punch amateur, take it to da lower rings
a just comin out fag, Flu's more PrePuce' than overgrown genital coverings
HAHAHAH LMAO
advices? editors become shitless compared to ur bar by bar revises
but wit me, ur 'Maiden to a blood bath' like vampires on virgin sacrifices
NICE BEST FLIP SO FAR>
coz long as the worlds in transmission there'll always be wack sent
and he's Fluent? he cant even do audio wit his fucked up accent!
HAHAH ANICE PERSONAL
ur not even good, aint even elevated enuf..ya talents in stillness
go dip mail in plagues so u can finally feel 'envelope'd in illness'
^^^^NICE FINISHER^^^^

^^^ OVERALL NICE VERSE NOT AS MURK AND GO GET EM AS I REMEMBER YOU BUT..... EFFECTIVE CAUSE HE REALLY WASNT READY ^^^^^^


MAH VOTE = CON ....For a better verse fulll of personals and BATTLE WINNERS***PUNCHLINES*** hahaha ((For kids that didnt know))

Take It Or Leave It

Thee Lyrical Phenom

[Fluent]

wtf @ the fake personals, who told you my name was anthony or i worked at domino's? both of those are FALSE. no one on here knows about shit about what i do offline.

I'm NOT masticate, I just noticed that in the first post also.

Did a IP scan of mine match whoever that is or what?

0-0 because that last dude voted thinking your personals were legit.

and for my ender, prize fighter/fight for prizes in case it seems loopy.

[Con]

Originally Posted by Fluent

wtf @ the fake personals, who told you my name was anthony or i worked at domino's? both of those are FALSE. no one on here knows about shit about what i do offline.

I'm NOT masticate, I just noticed that in the first post also.

Did a IP scan of mine match whoever that is or what?

0-0 because that last dude voted thinking your personals were legit.

and for my ender, prize fighter/fight for prizes in case it seems loopy.

^what? i saw a post admittin u was masticate a few months ago! and dats da reason i let u in Terra da first place, but calm down.


shit, here, since were on da sway moods.

claim booth clerks.. they handle the 'lost and found' items.
Terra= Terror = Fluent isnt as active or much of a participant in da crew.

[Quest-1ON]

hahahah srry for freepost but fluent your dumb because EVERY ONE THAT VOTES IS GOING TO BASE THERE VOTES OFF THAT VERSE YOU STUPID FUCK SO IT DOES COUNT


WTF??????? why would you try to explain a line If Some one doesnt understand it means they didnt get it not going to change vote once you explain what you are thinking because in that case Id be like 100-0 because I think Every verse is fucking murk hahahahaha u LAME ass Fuck---Its like a comedian telling a joke and then explaining what was funny DOESNT WORK THAT WAY DUKE

1-0 CON HAHAHAHAHA


Thee Lyrical Phenom Has Spoken

[Con]

0-0

[Mo LoCke]

Originally Posted by Fluent

Your murder stabs are weak and I'll have the glock ground you
Become a WNBA ticket scalper if you wanna provide Shock value
^Dope
Your audio's sound wack and if you battle, no one will judge it
Turn down the reception without trimming your wedding budget
^wow
They ain't got no appeal because they're too bland and lack flare
Make girls double fist a Hilton if you wanna get they hands in the air (heir)
^whoa..!

^nice verse...quotables were dope, the rest of the verse was decent
nice personal on the second quote.

Originally Posted by Con

heres ya unruly scorn, textile treatments im leavin dis bully torn
trade-marks on the rise? only when Flu wears his dominos uniform!
^ok personal..could made better i think
dont think i wont blow back, have time hault n fill u wit slow slaps
against me? 'Anthony's arguin wit death' like 'Hopkins meeting Joe Black'
^Damn..!
fuck winnin! Flu's verses are hygeine freaks wit da most floss
mite as well clerk claim booths coz ur -sitting on a lost cause-
^wow..!
coz long as the worlds in transmission there'll always be wack sent
and he's Fluent? he cant even do audio wit his fucked up accent!
^good personal

i read it as if the personals were correct, decent verse if the personals were true...it might have won this

VOTE:FLUENT

Reason: False personals

[Con]

^he hasnt told me if i was wrong about him posting admittance..spon comes out da woodwork? lol, nah.. plus u need to break each bar down, coz u voting for him but u got more quotes of mine..wth..

0-0

[Steel.el.Bullet]

Vote= Con
for a HW bout this was very dissappointing. Fluent came with more of an half assed open mic than a hardcore battle verse. this is nothing like he was doing b4 when he held the title. Con came with fake personals which werent that cleverly worded and some of his punchlines failed to connect due to the lack of supporting content. that is just bad wording.. i guess you were trying a lil too hard to be complex. w/e the case the verse was weak. on both parts. this battle isnt worht a bar by bar breakdown.

[Criticize]

4get frees delivering ya punch amateur, take it to da lower rings
a just comin out fag, Flu's more PrePuce' than overgrown genital coverings
heres ya unruly scorn, textile treatments im leavin dis bully torn
trade-marks on the rise? only when Flu wears his dominos uniform!
dont think i wont blow back, have time hault n fill u wit slow slaps
against me? 'Anthony's arguin wit death' like 'Hopkins meeting Joe Black'
__________________
Flu-Con's ruining Crit's league and this dude better sweat the haters
Cuz he has more trouble carrying out orders than forgetful waiters
Last week had to be a fluke when ya style's old and not fresher
You treat battles like origami competitions and fold under pressure
They ain't got no appeal because they're too bland and lack flare
Make girls double fist a Hilton if you wanna get they hands in the air (heir)

He was a fake champ, no one should've thought this guy's tighter
Now become a game show contesant if you want to be a prize fighter
______________

ahh pretty dissapointing battle on the real, con i dont about this verse, i read it as if the personals rang true they were pretty cool, but then the majority of your other punches i didnt get, well i got them the wordplay and mets but i mean they werent hard hitting and just seemed like forced meta's rather than strong punches.
fluent didnt come his usual self either, he had some cool metas a few played lines and nothing really outstanding,
overall iv gota give this to flu he just seemed to throw more punches.

vote-flu.

[Fluent]

What's the vote total now? Memnoch didn't break down his vote either so is it either 2-1 or 1-0? Discounting Klutch's vote is kinda wack, I only discounted Questions because I had to otherwise I let them all slide unless it's some 2 post newbie.