HW Crit vs. ((Phonix))

[Plot]

10-12 bars due Friday
please check & play nice,
& match your opponents length

[Criticize]

hello.

[Phonix]

what do you mean tba


alright crit

goodluck

[Phonix]

are you able to post tonight?

[Criticize]

shit no. away at uni

with 2 bars thought up.

[Phonix]

KO...

Used to roll with the best masters, supposedly posesed a vets mantra
But nowdays crits out of the circle like supermodels with breast cancer
Punching consistancies is invaluable, combos where dust screams coughing
Simmons isn't getting bored of golf, so why are you so Russ tee off one swing?
The odor of accomplishment, Chop has a blatant no smell
Cus every punch has this mango into retreat like Jamaican hotels
your re-noun as a liar so why are you so proud to be dyer
re-constructing your jaws the only time his would go down to the wire
[Chopper style]
nobodies scared of this maggot, whose compared to a faggot
because when asked to combat..
He's 'Go wingspread on the table' without drawingboards for aero dynamics
[Chopper style]
Since Irwin disaster, OZ's allegiances is a disease ridden secret
Now we can see 'Plots famine over his head' like Treasonous demons
Bareknuckle biting, haemotoblin injections won't surpass though
When your left spread doubt on the canvas..next to a pessemistic Picasso
Believe in reincarnation? you will..as gore projects here
Pho'll have you Bourne a gain without Matt Damon beating anorexia
dialasis of your styles angle, with your veins protraction
You need to visit state fairs if you want to be the Maine attraction
I can't comprehend these biters, constantly offending writers
Since he'll 'Seizure ways to cheat' like breakdancers with meningitis
'Crits lyrics are from the heart', n i'll leave this corpse around hursts
As I drown your internal organs..explains his watered down verse
Defining the epitome of misery since now your kidneys must be maimed
then have your cider road...as i tour Dublin country lanes

[Criticize]

sorry for the delay.

this is a workout kid and il sting you with crunches,
n drop a fatal (Phate'l) hit like biting ya fellow englishmans punches
so il have your death insight and your coffin on show,
best put ice in ya girls mouth to soften the blow
hot w/da flow; n my lighters have the l spark,
emotion flowing
when i bring an animated death like kenny in south park
so il rock ya writtens n have the stone shook,
whn i hit w/ mo hands than the german phone book/
listen you runt, in 12 bars il be hitting this cunt,
your creative edge is sad- tis a pity its blunt/5
this is a walk in the park when i destress the,
il have my hands on your jugular- juggling balls dont impress me/

il end your period bitch its a sentance anoinment,
i told pho to brace himself he booked a dentist apointment
a blantant rupture, when i rape and fuck ya
il pass ur defence leave you open for blows like your facial structure (reminsce of his picture here)
i ko'd you last time n dismantled your broad frame,
so your torsos been "hit b4" like "battle ships board game'/(think about it)
im a scavenger..christ, one fist will carry your life,
til your well beings in harm like charity strikes/
shit im an athiest kid who will comotose christians,
until i announce/an-ounce your death like overdose victims
your a hollafront gay refrence dont try and pen diss,
or il av your stomach in knots n hang you by your appendix

[Vor Ax]

Used to roll with the best masters, supposedly posesed a vets mantra
But nowdays crits out of the circle like supermodels with breast cancer

mantra and cancer really dont rhyme but i see where you were going and its coo

Punching consistancies is invaluable, combos where dust screams coughing
Simmons isn't getting bored of golf, so why are you so Russ tee off one swing?

lol nice

The odor of accomplishment, Chop has a blatant no smell
Cus every punch has this mango into retreat like Jamaican hotels

decent its pronuonced differently but i get ya

your re-noun as a liar so why are you so proud to be dyer
re-constructing your jaws the only time his would go down to the wire

lol nice

[Chopper style]
nobodies scared of this maggot, whose compared to a faggot
because when asked to combat..
He's 'Go wingspread on the table' without drawingboards for aero dynamics

nice

[Chopper style]
Since Irwin disaster, OZ's allegiances is a disease ridden secret
Now we can see 'Plots famine over his head' like Treasonous demons

irwin lines are played miss...

Bareknuckle biting, haemotoblin injections won't surpass though
When your left spread doubt on the canvas..next to a pessemistic Picasso

lol sic

Believe in reincarnation? you will..as gore projects here
Pho'll have you Bourne a gain without Matt Damon beating anorexia

ok

dialasis of your styles angle, with your veins protraction
You need to visit state fairs if you want to be the Maine attraction

ok

I can't comprehend these biters, constantly offending writers
Since he'll 'Seizure ways to cheat' like breakdancers with meningitis

lol ok

'Crits lyrics are from the heart', n i'll leave this corpse around hursts
As I drown your internal organs..explains his watered down verse

ehh

Defining the epitome of misery since now your kidneys must be maimed
then have your cider road...as i tour Dublin country lanes

sorry i dont get it...

this is a workout kid and il sting you with crunches,
n drop a fatal (Phate'l) hit like biting ya fellow englishmans punches

ehh

so il have your death insight and your coffin on show,
best put ice in ya girls mouth to soften the blow

nah

hot w/da flow; n my lighters have the l spark,
emotion flowing
when i bring an animated death like kenny in south park

weak

so il rock ya writtens n have the stone shook,
whn i hit w/ mo hands than the german phone book/

ok

listen you runt, in 12 bars il be hitting this cunt,
your creative edge is sad- tis a pity its blunt/5

ehh

this is a walk in the park when i destress the,
il have my hands on your jugular- juggling balls dont impress me/

played concept

il end your period bitch its a sentance anoinment,
i told pho to brace himself he booked a dentist apointment

ok lol

a blantant rupture, when i rape and fuck ya
il pass ur defence leave you open for blows like your facial structure (reminsce of his picture here)

neva seen his pic

i ko'd you last time n dismantled your broad frame,
so your torsos been "hit b4" like "battle ships board game'/(think about it)

i got it decent

im a scavenger..christ, one fist will carry your life,
til your well beings in harm like charity strikes/

lol nice

shit im an athiest kid who will comotose christians,
until i announce/an-ounce your death like overdose victims

ehh

your a hollafront gay refrence dont try and pen diss,
or il av your stomach in knots n hang you by your appendix

i like it but not a real punch here

anyway

vote - pho

your verse seemed rushed crit ive seen much betta from ya pho just came way too strong

good battle yal

[Phonix]

thnks for the vote man, and for future voters, cider road/side erode

upping

[Plot]

uppin for votes

[Con]

Used to roll with the best masters, supposedly posesed a vets mantra
But nowdays crits out of the circle like supermodels with breast cancer

^nice

Punching consistancies is invaluable, combos where dust screams coughing
Simmons isn't getting bored of golf, so why are you so Russ tee off one swing?

^ok, woulda been nice if da wording was well put

The odor of accomplishment, Chop has a blatant no smell
Cus every punch has this mango into retreat like Jamaican hotels

^man and mang dont sound alike, nor mhan or mango. ok nonetheless

your re-noun as a liar so why are you so proud to be dyer
re-constructing your jaws the only time his would go down to the wire

^ok

nobodies scared of this maggot, whose compared to a faggot
because when asked to combat..
He's 'Go wingspread on the table' without drawingboards for aero dynamics

^ok

Since Irwin disaster, OZ's allegiances is a disease ridden secret
Now we can see 'Plots famine over his head' like Treasonous demons

^ok

Bareknuckle biting, haemotoblin injections won't surpass though
When your left spread doubt on the canvas..next to a pessemistic Picasso

^nice

Believe in reincarnation? you will..as gore projects here
Pho'll have you Bourne a gain without Matt Damon beating anorexia

^ok, tho again and a gain dont sound alike, forced.

dialasis of your styles angle, with your veins protraction
You need to visit state fairs if you want to be the Maine attraction

^i used this concept b4. ok

I can't comprehend these biters, constantly offending writers
Since he'll 'Seizure ways to cheat' like breakdancers with meningitis

^da punch got kinda blurry on dis

'Crits lyrics are from the heart', n i'll leave this corpse around hursts
As I drown your internal organs..explains his watered down verse

^wording needs work, but ok

Defining the epitome of misery since now your kidneys must be maimed
then have your cider road...as i tour Dublin country lanes

^ok


this is a workout kid and il sting you with crunches,
n drop a fatal (Phate'l) hit like biting ya fellow englishmans punches

^huh? his name is phonix or yit, i dont see da connection

so il have your death insight and your coffin on show,
best put ice in ya girls mouth to soften the blow

^ a bj punch? cmon now

hot w/da flow; n my lighters have the l spark,
emotion flowing
when i bring an animated death like kenny in south park

^how many kenny plays r there to use?

so il rock ya writtens n have the stone shook,
whn i hit w/ mo hands than the german phone book/

^mo hands? wtf's happenin to u?

listen you runt, in 12 bars il be hitting this cunt,
your creative edge is sad- tis a pity its blunt/5

^eh

this is a walk in the park when i destress the,
il have my hands on your jugular- juggling balls dont impress me/

^ok

il end your period bitch its a sentance anoinment,
i told pho to brace himself he booked a dentist apointment

^lol, funny..not hard

a blantant rupture, when i rape and fuck ya
il pass ur defence leave you open for blows like your facial structure (reminsce of his picture here)

^weak punch

i ko'd you last time n dismantled your broad frame,
so your torsos been "hit b4" like "battle ships board game'/(think about it)

^i like this

im a scavenger..christ, one fist will carry your life,
til your well beings in harm like charity strikes/

^ok

shit im an athiest kid who will comotose christians,
until i announce/an-ounce your death like overdose victims

^bad wording

your a hollafront gay refrence dont try and pen diss,
or il av your stomach in knots n hang you by your appendix

^ok


v=phonix

chopper went..well, i dont even kno where he went..

[Tyrant.]

Phonix
Used to roll with the best masters, supposedly posesed a vets mantra
But nowdays crits out of the circle like supermodels with breast cancer
haha Great opener^

Punching consistancies is invaluable, combos where dust screams coughing
Simmons isn't getting bored of golf, so why are you so Russ tee off one swing?
ok,

The odor of accomplishment, Chop has a blatant no smell
Cus every punch has this mango into retreat like Jamaican hotels
Pretty good^

your re-noun as a liar so why are you so proud to be dyer
re-constructing your jaws the only time his would go down to the wire
lol pretty creaive good^

nobodies scared of this maggot, whose compared to a faggot
because when asked to combat..
He's 'Go wingspread on the table' without drawingboards for aero dynamics
Ok Bar^

Since Irwin disaster, OZ's allegiances is a disease ridden secret
Now we can see 'Plots famine over his head' like Treasonous demons
lol nice^

Bareknuckle biting, haemotoblin injections won't surpass though
When your left spread doubt on the canvas..next to a pessemistic Picasso
nice bar man

Believe in reincarnation? you will..as gore projects here
Pho'll have you Bourne a gain without Matt Damon beating anorexia
Heh nice

dialasis of your styles angle, with your veins protraction
You need to visit state fairs if you want to be the Maine attraction
Pretty good^

I can't comprehend these biters, constantly offending writers
Since he'll 'Seizure ways to cheat' like breakdancers with meningitis
i like the set up line punch was ehh to me^

'Crits lyrics are from the heart', n i'll leave this corpse around hursts
As I drown your internal organs..explains his watered down verse
Little played but good

Defining the epitome of misery since now your kidneys must be maimed
then have your cider road...as i tour Dublin country lanes
Meh ok Ender

Criticize
this is a workout kid and il sting you with crunches,
n drop a fatal (Phate'l) hit like biting ya fellow englishmans punches
Yea... cant connect Phate and Phonix... Good punch tho^

so il have your death insight and your coffin on show,
best put ice in ya girls mouth to soften the blow
Nice flow but ok bar^

hot w/da flow; n my lighters have the l spark,
emotion flowing
when i bring an animated death like kenny in south park
meh think kenny is played concept but sounded cool...^

so il rock ya writtens n have the stone shook,
whn i hit w/ mo hands than the german phone book/
Lol wtf?...

listen you runt, in 12 bars il be hitting this cunt,
your creative edge is sad- tis a pity its blunt/5
^Meh dun like it accept the creative edge/blunt. whats wit da 5

this is a walk in the park when i destress the,
il have my hands on your jugular- juggling balls dont impress me/
uhh.... nah man u slippin^

il end your period bitch its a sentance anoinment,
i told pho to brace himself he booked a dentist apointment
^lol i like it but the set up is little played and bar didnt hit hard^

a blantant rupture, when i rape and fuck ya
il pass ur defence leave you open for blows like your facial structure (reminsce of his picture here)
meh kinda weak punch^

i ko'd you last time n dismantled your broad frame,
so your torsos been "hit b4" like "battle ships board game'/(think about it)
Prob best bar^ nice

im a scavenger..christ, one fist will carry your life,
til your well beings in harm like charity strikes/
meh its aight^

shit im an athiest kid who will comotose christians,
until i announce/an-ounce your death like overdose victims
i liked it^ but self aprasel^

your a hollafront gay refrence dont try and pen diss,
or il av your stomach in knots n hang you by your appendix
meh didnt like it...^

V// Pho he came alot harder nice battle tho

[Criticize]

lol at you losers. fate/phate. not phonix.
i guess you guys dont know your germans hans and frits.

good shit pho- make me proud.

[Phonix]

i know a hands
i call him hunds though

btw i got ur fate line but i thort dude was called phade?

good battle g

[DOPE ART]

nice battle guys. i was going to vote, i can still do so if you want =\

congrats Phonix.