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**Noggah** · 12-12-2006, 06:40 PM

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/histo...ml#post1264838 (History Making Discorvery)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/dead-...ml#post1264840 (Dead Weight - Sever Diss)

im sick with a fever...twistid n demented with bad mental receivers...
I glitched my cerebrum...now blood n wit drips from the tips of my fingers...
cross me n u might wanna build a bomb shelter for a hide away...
cause when i black out my actions are the difference of night and day...
i'll go into autistical seizures...noone lives that witnessed the teeter...
next second figuring out hidden written sequential encrypted procedures...
thinkin beyond thoughts plotted to conquer I renaissanced the art of war...
circled targets dont respond when Nog goes beyond what the purple heart is for...
im rambo mixed with a little alien and predator, skin with built in camo...
sendin chills down spines like Deliverence kids pickin banjos...
i got a swayed vision, the way my prizm relays isnt normal...
with one thought thought the colors break and are made inta portals...
send portions of tormented bloody corpses listed in order...
never caught, this clever nogs already gone - twistin the border...
never the same time and place, witness diffrent scientific rates...
from heiroglyphics to systems hidden you cant find that exist to date...
im well versed in em all...with knowledge unsurpassed and growin....
at a rate that by today my brain will disintegrate in a vast explosion...

**Chris The Man** · 12-12-2006, 08:36 PM

i'll go into autistical seizures...noone lives that witnessed the teeter...
next second figuring out hidden written sequential encrypted procedures...

Damn, that was dope as hell.

Not your normal punchline oriented verse.

Heavy on the multis, very fuckin dope multis.

This was just a well written verse, cant really point out mistakes.

Nice shit old man.

**Noggah** · 12-15-2006, 04:31 PM

thanks honkey.... more

**Vulgar** · 12-15-2006, 05:38 PM

Rookie of the Year - and you've got my vote. It won't make a difference and it never will. Your previous open mics had scattered rock formations developing, and now any reader can see that there are iron ore deposits everywhere they should be. The rhythm works itself at an unsweatable pace, and I hope it continues in this way. Mountains in the future?

"im rambo mixed with a little alien and predator, skin with built in camo..."

I have to log out right now, I'll check out your other open mic this week.

"im sick with a fever...twistid n demented"

Twisted*

Have fun.

Keep doing you

**Veracious** · 12-17-2006, 10:09 AM

i'll go into autistical seizures...noone lives that witnessed the teeter...
next second figuring out hidden written sequential encrypted procedures...
dope

im rambo mixed with a little alien and predator, skin with built in camo...
sendin chills down spines like Deliverence kids pickin banjos...
nice shit

never the same time and place, witness diffrent scientific rates...
from heiroglyphics to systems hidden you cant find that exist to date...
im well versed in em all...with knowledge unsurpassed and growin....
at a rate that by today my brain will disintegrate in a vast explosion...
decent closer

overall this shit was fire, havnt seen too many of your open mics seen your battles tho and this shit came real nice..multis were dope

keep droppin

stay up

**Noggah** · 12-18-2006, 09:58 PM

thanks fellerz

**Dirty D** · 12-19-2006, 12:52 AM

sick rymes....some of those multies where clean as hell, tha flow pretty consistant...some lines seemed too long but ya prolly had ya own rythm in ya head when ya wrote it ya know...it might fit for you

**DaVe E BuRnOuT** · 12-19-2006, 03:08 PM

im sick with a fever...twistid n demented with bad mental receivers...
I glitched my cerebrum...now blood n wit drips from the tips of my fingers...-Dope
cross me n u might wanna build a bomb shelter for a hide away...
cause when i black out my actions are the difference of night and day...lol
i'll go into autistical seizures...noone lives that witnessed the teeter...
next second figuring out hidden written sequential encrypted procedures...SIck
thinkin beyond thoughts plotted to conquer I renaissanced the art of war...
circled targets dont respond when Nog goes beyond what the purple heart is for.....Nice
im rambo mixed with a little alien and predator, skin with built in camo...
sendin chills down spines like Deliverence kids pickin banjos...LOL
i got a swayed vision, the way my prizm relays isnt normal...
with one thought thought the colors break and are made inta portals...
send portions of tormented bloody corpses listed in order...
never caught, this clever nogs already gone - twistin the border...nice
never the same time and place, witness diffrent scientific rates...
from heiroglyphics to systems hidden you cant find that exist to date...dope
im well versed in em all...with knowledge unsurpassed and growin....
at a rate that by today my brain will disintegrate in a vast explosion...DAMB

Word multi's out the ass..I love reading your work nog..You got Flow
your word usage is sick..You Are Just a very talented writer..No other way to put it.
Props my dude..Nice work fosho

**Noggah** · 12-20-2006, 02:19 AM

good looks dave and dirty

**rhymephest** · 12-20-2006, 04:34 AM

this was some intellectual shit but it was hot took a second to understand what what uou was sayin but i think i got it

**Joel VeNoM.** · 12-20-2006, 08:56 AM

this shit wuz ill this is my favoritespitteronthis sitebecause of his imageryand puretalent good shit bulkeep it up....

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