((HellRazor)) vs. 7th Cresent -HorrorCore

[Plot]

12 bars due Friday. please show & vote

[HellRazor]

Hope you know HC 7th...hope so...lol...Good Luck brother...

[7th Crescent]

horrorcore...what the fuck....lmao....


Hell ive never done HC before whats the general idea on it i mean..

[HellRazor]

*Enters Atum Rah*

He's been fed so much bullshit to the point where he doesn't get fatter...you'll never get better...it won't even matter...and I'll shatter your ribs til the point where you liver collides with you bladder...

7th's Head clicks in the clasp...scalple his face vicious and fast...rip a six pack from his abs....now thats a BUDWeiser(Bud WIse Ya) Thought Like gettin high with an Elderly dad...

You think you PISS HOT? shit not, I'm completing the scenes of you bleeding in
jeans...your brain oozing in streams...Taking a bat...Beating your knees, until your bones crack and evaporate...in a puddle of steam...

He's the host of the plate? I'll COVER for him cuz we all know 7th INNATE...Never been great...He has a chip on his shoulder...so I dipped into the side of his case... until the point he needs reconstructive surgery and only manages Accounting for david lettermans face.

You're not a contestant..Poke his spleen with Razor Blades..Keeping him guessing, Tickle his brain with a fork....Asking him questions...Stuff your stomach with your lower intestines...just to prove that I can Play with organs
without any Musical Lessons..

Leave you soaked in Pathogens...take you back to the beginning, reminenscing of me slicing your amniotic sac, you choking on corotid fluid...Granny out in back...father..taping the vision...fast forward to the present, and You still haven't managed to get out of the fetal position...

Next I'll give him a kiss, fuck him gently, rubber...*CHECK* but no mutual sentiments...as I Shove a spike plated dildo into his anal cavity until his Rectum Hemorraghes...

Take a wooden broom...take you to a wooden room...fuck you with the broom...until your tonsils spew towards your parents point of view, watch em smell the fumes...as your mother eats your leftovers with a wooden spoon...

leave this pussy fucked up...like having sex with a tall cat...rip your nuts from your small sack...give the pitcher your ball pack...and make your jaws fall flat...as I proceed to smash all that...with a wiffle ball bat...

[7th Crescent]

id post if i were you...

[ReaLyfe]

haha don't sleep on 7th.... hahaa don't slip Hell... lol

[7th Crescent]

They Say every dog has his day.....well BITCH this ain't yours!..
Pummel this piss fuck with a hammer till puss pours from his pores..
You'll swallow your tongue, puncture your lung..Shit in your drawers..
The instant my guilitine glare declares THIS IS All Out War!!!!..
Marked you to bleed.. goodnight ..watch your arteries leak..
With a razor from hell..remove skin off your carcass..use it for sheets..
Expose your vocals..chokehold...poke holes around your neck...
Stomp this vet..dislodge his throat..leave him teething, bleeding, pleading for breath...
Turned Hell instant light-weight when I removed numerous pounds of his flesh..
gorged on his epidermis, sucked fatty cells thru straws.. chewing chunks that's left...
It'll be like Hanibal in an elevator, the way im removing Hell's skin..
Wear his face like a mask..rob a bank for cash ..get caught and say it was me not him.
Im not here to win, duck tape seven grenades to your ribcage..
Starve for seven days.. detonate..then feast on your chared remains..
The fact remains im tryin to separate your skull from your spinal..
Turn ALL your chances for survival into being, at best, dead on arrival..
Thoughts primal.put a fist through your jaw..discard shards of your kin...
This battle will be archived as "7th demolishes Hell-Razor" with "Largest-Margin-of-Win!"..

[Schematic]

7th-

Best Lines:

Marked you to bleed.. goodnight ..watch your arteries leak..
With a razor from hell..remove skin off your carcass..use it for sheets..
^ Nice!

Turned Hell instant light-weight when I removed numerous pounds of his flesh..
gorged on his epidermis, sucked fatty cells thru straws.. chewing chunks that's left...
^ Nasty

Im not here to win, duck tape seven grenades to your ribcage..
Starve for seven days.. detonate..then feast on your chared remains..
^ Grisly

Overall- This was pretty damn good for your first horrorcore piece. Some bars were kinda mild though. Overall the bars above were best for me... nice verse


HellRazor-

Best Lines:

shit not, I'm completing the scenes of you bleeding in
jeans...your brain oozing in streams...Taking a bat...Beating your knees, until your bones crack and evaporate...in a puddle of steam...
^ cool...

You're not a contestant..Poke his spleen with Razor Blades..Keeping him guessing, Tickle his brain with a fork....Asking him questions...Stuff your stomach with your lower intestines...just to prove that I can Play with organs
without any Musical Lessons..
^This whole section was nasty..

Leave you soaked in Pathogens...take you back to the beginning, reminenscing of me slicing your amniotic sac, you choking on corotid fluid...Granny out in back...father..taping the vision...fast forward to the present, and You still haven't managed to get out of the fetal position...
^ Damn..

Next I'll give him a kiss, fuck him gently, rubber...*CHECK* but no mutual sentiments...as I Shove a spike plated dildo into his anal cavity until his Rectum Hemorraghes...
^ 0.0

Overall- Nasty shit Razor... kind of perverted arent you? The wooden one was kinda homo my dude lol but it was pretty good too. You know how this horrorcore shit works. Plenty of oozy visceral fluids and shit.

Vote- Razor

Good battle.

[Plot]

Uppin

[Jay-Rede]

hell - i liked your approach to the whole HC shit, even though i know you hate doing them lol.. props enjoyed your verse - some nasty quotations in there lol

7th - considering this is your 1st horrorcore battle im gonna props you, this was fire for a first time - much respect - flow was on 99.9% of the time... so props

V// HR - i felt he had more experience in the HC - he produced a lil more sickness - litterally lol

[STRONGARM]

ugh.. I already told Hell I hate this whole, fake-ass Insane Clown Posse Horrorcore Bullshit.. but here goes:

Both verses were wack as fuck imo. And it's a shame because you're both much better writers than what you were allowed to display here.

HellRazor
Um.. damn near your whole verse is filled with HF-Style "bars" that actually stretch to new lengths..! Lots of gory descriptions... but ultimately I didn't think anything was really creative or witty: Main reason I hate these type of battles.

7th Crescent
I got the impression you didn't really know what to do.. good effort but nowhere near as nasty as HellRazor.


MY VOTE = HellRazor


Handled the Horrorcore bullshit better. No disrespect fellaz.. I just know you guys write better than this normally so this battle was a complete letdown from the jump (like when it was announced that it would be Horrorcore..!)

[7th Crescent]

close this thread...please...

[Thanatoid]

flow: 7th
horror: hell
punches: hell
w/p: hell
.
.
u get the pictur..
7th was decent but his horror was not really there...it was some old played out lines.

Hell is the victor no doubt.

[Pembroke]

I thought STRONGARM would love horrorcores.

Take a wooden broom...take you to a wooden room...fuck you with the broom
^LMAO..