H'Core Belt: Gazoon vs. ((Half Wit It))

[Plot]

8-10 bars. Due on Sunday
Please check, match, & Pm your opponent

[GaZooN]

10 lines

good luck.

[1/2 Wit It]

10 lines? lmfao. nah, i'm going more, just to make it interesting. i might go the limit man.

[GaZooN]

ooh lala.. 20 lines it is homeslice

[GaZooN]

Stab you with the pencil that aint stoppin til ya brain leaks
Cuz In battles I'll Out Line you.. like Stencil Copies of your AV

*will edit with entire verse if he shows.

[1/2 Wit It]

i don't think i've ever asked for an extension before, so would it be alright if i was granted one just this once? if so, i'll drop my verse as soon as i get on the computer in the morning. let me know quickly, please.

[GaZooN]

go for it. I'll drop after you though.

[1/2 Wit It]

elevates an eyebrow: "..You are the best they have for me?.." bursts out laughing.

he's a fuckin' bum; he doesn't work or hustle.
so why fight for your life? it isn't worth the struggle.
he makes images and verses; a beast wit avy's?
nope. cuz either way, the quality's equally as crappy.
related to a dumpster? cuz everythang is trash.
so i'm like a bikerider, because i'd never pay for GaZ!
this fag's sweet, but all he spits is sour text.
so i'll just drop G quick, like a thousand dollar bet!
he's a fuckin comedian, obviously the jokin type.
so his sexuality's more confusing than a Vulgar open mic!
i'm a giant in the game, spittin tall tales to perfection.
while he's a midget, go contribute to the short story section!
you can spit second, either way, i'm droppin this fake.
cuz he's more of a steppin stone, than rocks in a lake!
ya skills are too poor, so go ahead and surrender, peasant.
his verses consist of more highlights than a sportscenter session!
i'm authentic, that's why i don't hang wit fakers, cuz..
he's a bigger ass, than that chick from flavor of love!
is that ironic or what? i mean her nick name is fittin'..
..cuz i just ate him alive, so let's name this bitch Delishus!

..your turn..

[GaZooN]

Stab you with the pencil that aint stoppin til ya brain leaks
Cuz In battles I'll Out Line you.. like Stencil Copies of your AV
Slay me? LOL, no.. Snatch the win an take the belt home
Cuz Half always ends up standin Nex-Te-L's like Cell Phones
Lines is well flowed; U just scramble to grasp a breathe
Beat you to 50% of ya life, then scare you- 'Half' to death
Even a baby spittin into a rattle could battle you
In battles Gaz'll Knock out ya lights, matches, an candles too
I'll handle you; Leave you meetin Christ up in the afterlife
Cuz this fag must be scottish....
The way he tries to put his hands an mouth up on my bag an pipe
I've master'd rhymes; That route bitches, I swear that I'LL kill em
Cuz the flows must be retarded, The way Gaz just Outs 'Wit It'(outwitted)
U aint bout shit kid; A str8 homo.. a fukin reject
Leave ya RNA on the floor an DNA on the ceiling.. Split ya Double Helix
Punk gets beaten; Like that guy from the Chicago marathon, When Battling
He Thought he made it to the Finish Line.. But then slipped on reality
Cuz GaZy's speech; Is true heat, To become a Champ its through me
An you wont.. but dont worry....
Cuz when Its retired, you'll have an honest to God chance.. In two weeks

[S.Caugh]

he's a fuckin' bum; he doesn't work or hustle.
so why fight for your life? it isn't worth the struggle.-ok
he makes images and verses; a beast wit avy's?
nope. cuz either way, the quality's equally as crappy.-lol
related to a dumpster? cuz everythang is trash.
so i'm like a bikerider, because i'd never pay for GaZ!-nice name flip
this fag's sweet, but all he spits is sour text.
so i'll just drop G quick, like a thousand dollar bet!-nice
he's a fuckin comedian, obviously the jokin type.
so his sexuality's more confusing than a Vulgar open mic!-lol
i'm a giant in the game, spittin tall tales to perfection.
while he's a midget, go contribute to the short story section!-ok
you can spit second, either way, i'm droppin this fake.
cuz he's more of a steppin stone, than rocks in a lake!-lol
ya skills are too poor, so go ahead and surrender, peasant.
his verses consist of more highlights than a sportscenter session!-i liked this
i'm authentic, that's why i don't hang wit fakers, cuz..
he's a bigger ass, than that chick from flavor of love!-ehh
is that ironic or what? i mean her nick name is fittin'..
..cuz i just ate him alive, so let's name this bitch Delishus!-ight

nice direct punches,flow was ok no multi's but it was def a good read. Some lines i thought were funny others were safe,others coulda been worded alil different to hit harder.Nice drop regardless


Stab you with the pencil that aint stoppin til ya brain leaks
Cuz In battles I'll Out Line you.. like Stencil Copies of your AV-decent
Slay me? LOL, no.. Snatch the win an take the belt home
Cuz Half always ends up standin Nex-Te-L's like Cell Phones-nice flip
Lines is well flowed; U just scramble to grasp a breathe
Beat you to 50% of ya life, then scare you- 'Half' to death-lol
Even a baby spittin into a rattle could battle you
In battles Gaz'll Knock out ya lights, matches, an candles too-decent
I'll handle you; Leave you meetin Christ up in the afterlife
Cuz this fag must be scottish....
The way he tries to put his hands an mouth up on my bag an pipe-LOL
I've master'd rhymes; That route bitches, I swear that I'LL kill em
Cuz the flows must be retarded, The way Gaz just Outs 'Wit It'(outwitted)-ehh
U aint bout shit kid; A str8 homo.. a fukin reject
Leave ya RNA on the floor an DNA on the ceiling.. Split ya Double Helix-nice
Punk gets beaten; Like that guy from the Chicago marathon, When Battling
He Thought he made it to the Finish Line.. But then slipped on reality-safe
Cuz GaZy's speech; Is true heat, To become a Champ its through me
An you wont.. but dont worry....
Cuz when Its retired, you'll have an honest to God chance.. In two weeks-ight

Nice verse gaze,flow was good,punches had thought but i think some may have had 2 much but still was a nice verse.

Now this is a really close battle. Both of your flows were decent.Both had hot spots and other safe spots.But i think that half might have took it with more of a personal verse then tryn to use so much word play.

My Votes For Half..But this can go ether way depending on who's reading it

[PhorShadow]

he's a fuckin' bum; he doesn't work or hustle.
so why fight for your life? it isn't worth the struggle.
~2 basic nig
he makes images and verses; a beast wit avy's?
nope. cuz either way, the quality's equally as crappy.
~it ont ryme dog
related to a dumpster? cuz everythang is trash.
so i'm like a bikerider, because i'd never pay for GaZ!
~coo nameflip n ish
this fag's sweet, but all he spits is sour text.
so i'll just drop G quick, like a thousand dollar bet!
~notha coo nameflip
he's a fuckin comedian, obviously the jokin type.
so his sexuality's more confusing than a Vulgar open mic!
~dis was ok
i'm a giant in the game, spittin tall tales to perfection.
while he's a midget, go contribute to the short story section!
~not impressive in dis bit nig
you can spit second, either way, i'm droppin this fake.
cuz he's more of a steppin stone, than rocks in a lake!
~nice ish
ya skills are too poor, so go ahead and surrender, peasant.
his verses consist of more highlights than a sportscenter session!
~nah
i'm authentic, that's why i don't hang wit fakers, cuz..
he's a bigger ass, than that chick from flavor of love!
~so mny nigs dun did dis wit diff ppls names
is that ironic or what? i mean her nick name is fittin'..
..cuz i just ate him alive, so let's name this bitch Delishus!
~u sayin he delicious? das gay nig

Stab you with the pencil that aint stoppin til ya brain leaks
Cuz In battles I'll Out Line you.. like Stencil Copies of your AV
~coo seem a bit forced doe
Slay me? LOL, no.. Snatch the win an take the belt home
Cuz Half always ends up standin Nex-Te-L's like Cell Phones
~bita. u bit dis concept off 40 Cal
Lines is well flowed; U just scramble to grasp a breathe
Beat you to 50% of ya life, then scare you- 'Half' to death
~ok nameflip
Even a baby spittin into a rattle could battle you
In battles Gaz'll Knock out ya lights, matches, an candles too
~basic
I'll handle you; Leave you meetin Christ up in the afterlife
Cuz this fag must be scottish....
The way he tries to put his hands an mouth up on my bag an pipe
~el oh el
I've master'd rhymes; That route bitches, I swear that I'LL kill em
Cuz the flows must be retarded, The way Gaz just Outs 'Wit It'(outwitted)
~bita. u stole dis idea from adderall when dey battled
U aint bout shit kid; A str8 homo.. a fukin reject
Leave ya RNA on the floor an DNA on the ceiling.. Split ya Double Helix
~nah
Punk gets beaten; Like that guy from the Chicago marathon, When Battling
He Thought he made it to the Finish Line.. But then slipped on reality
~nice
Cuz GaZy's speech; Is true heat, To become a Champ its through me
An you wont.. but dont worry....
Cuz when Its retired, you'll have an honest to God chance.. In two weeks
~basic

~Half Wit It got dis in muh opinion

[GaZooN]

yo if this fag calls me a biter just one more time..

POW BOOM STR8 TO THE MOON


i'm high.

0-2 uppin for the come from behind victory

[GaZooN]

uppin once again for the come from behind..