Hc2 ((Focus)) Vs 7

[Criticize]

due thur. checks in prior.

10 bars

norm rules apply

[7..]

check

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/187-v...=1#post1228740 (187 vs ((phelon)))

[bizzy.]

Its time for me to re-mount theese stunters
only time you hear seven ate nine's when countin numbers
This herb aint ready, watch me dismantle and use this idol
I mean I must be sumthing to you, my abreviations your usertitle
Its kinda easy to tell you cant reach ten I see..like kentucky states
So i gently snap 7 in half...lets just call it a lucky break



Quick key,all i got..take it or leave it... on the sneak tip..I'll be back!

[7..]

3 bars???

sure ill match that

i just stopped writtin and ill post what i had so far

got damn....focus

kickoff focus like a coin flip loss toss leave a holt to focus and this man like i press paus(pause).. `much loss`//no homie aint straight cause u kno backwards ni99a ``suc-of``//1

*(suck off)(focus backward)

fuk off..focus aint comin thru like a headache in a hot long `drought`/
he aint known im leavin focus skull and bones like heavy metal cars ``chromed out``//2

*focus-car-skull and bones and heavy metal and chrome is the rims as well as the gun

sold out.. somethin like a player on hold out the way his pen and paper `dont move`/and kinda like signing owens the focus `gon lose`

*hold out is when players arent happy with contract and havent been re signed so the pen dosent move to sign there name

[S.Caugh]

Its time for me to re-mount theese stunters
only time you hear seven ate nine's when countin numbers-Dope
This herb aint ready, watch me dismantle and use this idol
I mean I must be sumthing to you, my abreviations your usertitle-LOL
Its kinda easy to tell you cant reach ten I see..like kentucky states
So i gently snap 7 in half...lets just call it a lucky break-damn

3 bars yet i loved them all.they were simple but dope.



kickoff focus like a coin flip loss toss leave a holt to focus and this man like i press paus(pause).. `much loss`//no homie aint straight cause u kno backwards ni99a ``suc-of``//1
ight
*(suck off)(focus backward)

fuk off..focus aint comin thru like a headache in a hot long `drought`/
he aint known im leavin focus skull and bones like heavy metal cars ``chromed out``//2
umm ok

sold out.. somethin like a player on hold out the way his pen and paper `dont move`/and kinda like signing owens the focus `gon lose`decent

for a 3 bar battle this was ok but to me FoCus killed this.7 your bars were decent but i think u put 2 much thought into them.

vote Focus he just had a better verse

[Thesis-]

Its time for me to re-mount theese stunters
only time you hear seven ate nine's when countin numbers
~played

This herb aint ready, watch me dismantle and use this idol
I mean I must be sumthing to you, my abreviations your usertitle
~lol nice

Its kinda easy to tell you cant reach ten I see..like kentucky states
So i gently snap 7 in half...lets just call it a lucky break
~good


kickoff focus like a coin flip loss toss leave a holt to focus and this man like i press paus(pause).. `much loss`//no homie aint straight cause u kno backwards ni99a ``suc-of``//1

....no

*(suck off)(focus backward)


fuk off..focus aint comin thru like a headache in a hot long `drought`/
he aint known im leavin focus skull and bones like heavy metal cars ``chromed out``//2

~decent

*focus-car-skull and bones and heavy metal and chrome is the rims as well as the gun


sold out.. somethin like a player on hold out the way his pen and paper `dont move`/and kinda like signing owens the focus `gon lose`

~decent

overall/focus

[spookes]

Its time for me to re-mount theese stunters
only time you hear seven ate nine's when countin numbers-Dope
This herb aint ready, watch me dismantle and use this idol
I mean I must be sumthing to you, my abreviations your usertitle-LOL
Its kinda easy to tell you cant reach ten I see..like kentucky states
So i gently snap 7 in half...lets just call it a lucky break-damn

Ok,,, i dont think i needa break this down, it had it all, liked it props man . . .



kickoff focus like a coin flip loss toss leave a holt to focus and this man like i press paus(pause).. `much loss`//no homie aint straight cause u kno backwards ni99a ``suc-of``//1

this was iight , could of been better,

*(suck off)(focus backward)

fuk off..focus aint comin thru like a headache in a hot long `drought`/
he aint known im leavin focus skull and bones like heavy metal cars ``chromed out``//2

iight man, , ,

sold out.. somethin like a player on hold out the way his pen and paper `dont move`/and kinda like signing owens the focus `gon lose`decent

ok this battle was simple and sweet,

V/ Focus, Reason : came with a stronger, and down to the point verse, , ,

[7..]

0-3 ko good battle focus