HC ((Veracious)) vs. Nazty

[Plot]

8-10 bars due Friday,
please check & play nice..
& match your opponents length.

[J.Night]

check

[Veracious]

check

[J.Night]

Bored.....ahhh

Spray this herb like botanicals, Then I smoke em' like marijuana-
Free would only have a hot flow, If his broke ass bought a suana-
I contain flow just like a llama, You piss pants just like a toddler-
The only ill shit that Free ever spat, was breast milk from his momma-
So call me Jack the Ripper, how I'm known to tear this dude-
Making his crew vanish till everyone quotes his sig, saying "The Terra, Who"?-
Free's like using pennies to trick themometors, he's faking the sick-
The way I beat up this pussy , TF gon' make V get off of they dick-
Leave you open like a Seven Eleven,The only shit you rocking is boats-
You're a joke, Free couldn't make us laugh, if he popped in a roast-
I'ma smoke this turkey like a Rotissiery, and eat his raps like thanksgiving-
Closest this kid has ever came to hip hop, was watching MTV's how I'm living-
I'ma Tear The Firm up, like their best and respected attourney just quit-
You talk shit, But like Anjelina Jolie....you just a bitch who stretched lips-
I gamble Veracious fate like Vegas, Have him touching the deck-
Free's punches are hit and miss, Just like a game of Russian Roulette-

[Veracious]

really busy lately this is quickest key ive done

ayo.
haha nasty i got my lights on so night aint a threat
just a dude unable to drop keys like he lost a bet
V'll conquer savage lands playing the part of a whiteman
cuz even with 90 degree knuckles you cant hit right man
jumping from crew to crew and thinking hes solid?
an easy win,
shudda noshowed it'd wudda been harder to call it
ill snatch ur wallet and take the only green you seen
this kids chances are like giving middlefingers, just obsene
flip the light, steal ur name and cast nasty into darkness
see J'll never match terra like when flight 93 didnt hit its target
now watch this nasty homo run in terror of this basher
cuz Ver's joints be high while this herb's weed-whacker
thoughts divided,
ill put lines to your dome jus designing 59fifty hats
this dude cudnt play hardball so he got left carrying bats
ya verse's dull so night cant see the light like he blinded
yo J you just a fool in this game stuck in an april mindset

no edit no time it is wat it is

votes?

[Vor Ax]

Spray this herb like botanicals, Then I smoke em' like marijuana-
Free would only have a hot flow, If his broke ass bought a suana-

nah

I contain flow just like a llama, You piss pants just like a toddler-
The only ill shit that Free ever spat, was breast milk from his momma-

lol ok

So call me Jack the Ripper, how I'm known to tear this dude-
Making his crew vanish till everyone quotes his sig, saying "The Terra, Who"?-

ehh ok

Free's like using pennies to trick themometors, he's faking the sick-
The way I beat up this pussy , TF gon' make V get off of they dick-

first parts worded wierd, seconds blah

Leave you open like a Seven Eleven,The only shit you rocking is boats-
You're a joke, Free couldn't make us laugh, if he popped in a roast-

OooOoh ok blah but i get it

I'ma smoke this turkey like a Rotissiery, and eat his raps like thanksgiving-
Closest this kid has ever came to hip hop, was watching MTV's how I'm living-

no

I'ma Tear The Firm up, like their best and respected attourney just quit-
You talk shit, But like Anjelina Jolie....you just a bitch who stretched lips-

ehh

I gamble Veracious fate like Vegas, Have him touching the deck-
Free's punches are hit and miss, Just like a game of Russian Roulette-

your best bar

ayo.
haha nasty i got my lights on so night aint a threat
just a dude unable to drop keys like he lost a bet

first lines coo seconds decent

V'll conquer savage lands playing the part of a whiteman
cuz even with 90 degree knuckles you cant hit right man

not bad

jumping from crew to crew and thinking hes solid?
an easy win,
shudda noshowed it'd wudda been harder to call it

nah

ill snatch ur wallet and take the only green you seen
this kids chances are like giving middlefingers, just obsene

blah

flip the light, steal ur name and cast nasty into darkness
see J'll never match terra like when flight 93 didnt hit its target

ok

now watch this nasty homo run in terror of this basher
cuz Ver's joints be high while this herb's weed-whacker

braggy

thoughts divided,
ill put lines to your dome jus designing 59fifty hats
this dude cudnt play hardball so he got left carrying bats

ehh

ya verse's dull so night cant see the light like he blinded
yo J you just a fool in this game stuck in an april mindset

not bad

vote - vera

nights verse was decent but not strong enough to take this from vera

vera your verse started strong but died after like the 4th bar but strong enough to take this

[Veracious]

1-0 up

[Criticize]

ah, pretty bad battle no qoutables from either of you so its a hard-call. but i think the best punch was the flight 93 line from veracious which wasnt even that good, so i gota give him the edge just.

id like to see you both take longer with your verses and drop some better wordplays. lets played out basic punchlines and see what you can come up with

vote-veracios

[Veracious]

yeah ill have more time to drop i was gonna drop on thursday cuz i had time but Rf wasnt working

2- 0 lets get more votes

[STRONGARM]

MY VOTE = Veracious

Nazty, your 1st, 2nd, 4th, and last bars are sadly played with no creativity added to flip the concept. I've noticed this trend from you as of late, in this battle and that audio battle I think vs. Con. You're not a bad battler, but you need to step up your lyrics, specifically your concepts, to stand a chance against the more decent heads on here. Veracious, next time put more effort into it. Like crit said the flight 93 line was your best and even that kinda sucked. But compared to Nazty's verse it seemed THAT much iller.. lol. Terrible battle guys.. keep trying and up your shit next time. A+ for effort though..!