HC Archive(1-0) vs Klutch(4-1)

[Con]

8-10


Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.

[Archive]

check

[KlutCh.]

o-kAaay..!

[Archive]

I wake up n bake, break up this fake
write this shit in Islam an still not Mecca mistake
you imbecile dorks, perished wit swords
aint gettin a second win unless its CPR at the medical ward
it aint child abuse when I kick the butt of this joke
finally understand your name when I'm clutching your throat
fucks wit it hoe, im bustin scars
call u nelson mandela, since u 30 years behind rusty bars
i mean just look at what ya gay scheme is
flow more spaced out then astronauts day dreamin
stop with that bitch ass flow slut
call u Hersheys Original since this kid has no nuts
I seen your raps, put a few more nigga's in
cuz your rhymes're like not telling a bitch a secret..filler in
this faggot just guessin, grabbin erections
drivin more voters away then cabs at elections
my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
while ya spits rub us the wrong way like a bad masseuse
think you winnin, better open a vast jar of hope
after I win I'll rub it in more than your last bar of soap....

[KlutCh.]

...
key'd..

i take aim, measure, to take out this gay heifer
this loser ‘Never Leaves Home’ like he ‘Plays Catcher’!! (think baseball)
get split in sectors, N put together so u can sit N listen
u rush to step, ull experience a ‘Brush with Death’ like a ‘Prep Mortician’!!
get knock’d into another dimension, end up as a sloppy kill
by let’n him state check, i in-vite’m in to death like OD’n Pop’n Pills!! (vitamin to death)
i got the chills cuz of how bad this dudes chance
with one swing ull receive a ‘Stomach Full Of Punch’ like a ‘School Dance’!!
ur done man… u aint got no real talent
after they count threw ballots, votes will put an ‘End to Arch’ like ‘New Balance’!! (“N” to arch*)
im too malice N to this losers despair
so ‘On That Note, Take A Seat’ like this is ‘Musical Chairs’ !!

*arch of ur foot

[Fluent]

Archive

I wake up n bake, break up this fake
write this shit in Islam an still not Mecca mistake
Islam isn't a language, I would've just gone with arabic and worded this into a punch, I liked the idea.
you imbecile dorks, perished wit swords
aint gettin a second win unless its CPR at the medical ward
Played on Win/Wind and comes off forced to me anyway
it aint child abuse when I kick the butt of this joke
finally understand your name when I'm clutching your throat
Not bad
fucks wit it hoe, im bustin scars
call u nelson mandela, since u 30 years behind rusty bars
Decent
i mean just look at what ya gay scheme is
flow more spaced out then astronauts day dreamin
Decent
stop with that bitch ass flow slut
call u Hersheys Original since this kid has no nuts
Nope
I seen your raps, put a few more nigga's in
cuz your rhymes're like not telling a bitch a secret..filler in
Wording seems kinda loopy, nice idea though
this faggot just guessin, grabbin erections
drivin more voters away then cabs at elections
Ok flip on voters/elections
my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
while ya spits rub us the wrong way like a bad masseuse
Nice
think you winnin, better open a vast jar of hope
after I win I'll rub it in more than your last bar of soap....
Nope

Klutch

i take aim, measure, to take out this gay heifer
this loser ‘Never Leaves Home’ like he ‘Plays Catcher’!! (think baseball)
Catchers leave home when they're batting and get hits
get split in sectors, N put together so u can sit N listen
u rush to step, ull experience a ‘Brush with Death’ like a ‘Prep Mortician’!!
Nope
get knock’d into another dimension, end up as a sloppy kill
by let’n him state check, i in-vite’m in to death like OD’n Pop’n Pills!! (vitamin to death)
Wordplay wasn't bad but when read like I in vitamin it's forced
i got the chills cuz of how bad this dudes chance
with one swing ull receive a ‘Stomach Full Of Punch’ like a ‘School Dance’!!
Decent, it kinda sounds a little weird to me though and a little played with Jin's punchlines/prom waiting for drinks line being done and punch/school dance being an old idea in general
ur done man… u aint got no real talent
after they count threw ballots, votes will put an ‘End to Arch’ like ‘New Balance’!! (“N” to arch*)
Not bad
im too malice N to this losers despair
so ‘On That Note, Take A Seat’ like this is ‘Musical Chairs’ !!
Hot

Vote: Archive

Klutch went too far under the limit to make up the difference. Klutch had the standout bar at the end but Archive had a higher percentage of better ideas and decent lines. Klutch probably could've taken this though if he went 10 bars instead of 6, put him at too much of a disadvantage.

[KlutCh.]

damn...

i was pressed for time.

uppZ..!

[Ruck]

I wake up n bake, break up this fake
write this shit in Islam an still not Mecca mistake
alright
you imbecile dorks, perished wit swords
aint gettin a second win unless its CPR at the medical ward
lol played but cool
it aint child abuse when I kick the butt of this joke
finally understand your name when I'm clutching your throat
nice
fucks wit it hoe, im bustin scars
call u nelson mandela, since u 30 years behind rusty bars
decent
i mean just look at what ya gay scheme is
flow more spaced out then astronauts day dreamin
lol cool
stop with that bitch ass flow slut
call u Hersheys Original since this kid has no nuts
alright
I seen your raps, put a few more nigga's in
cuz your rhymes're like not telling a bitch a secret..filler in
lol nice
this faggot just guessin, grabbin erections
drivin more voters away then cabs at elections
nah
my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
while ya spits rub us the wrong way like a bad masseuse
nah
think you winnin, better open a vast jar of hope
after I win I'll rub it in more than your last bar of soap....
eh alright

VS

i take aim, measure, to take out this gay heifer
this loser ‘Never Leaves Home’ like he ‘Plays Catcher’!! (think baseball)
cool
get split in sectors, N put together so u can sit N listen
u rush to step, ull experience a ‘Brush with Death’ like a ‘Prep Mortician’!!
nice
get knock’d into another dimension, end up as a sloppy kill
by let’n him state check, i in-vite’m in to death like OD’n Pop’n Pills!! (vitamin to death)
nah
i got the chills cuz of how bad this dudes chance
with one swing ull receive a ‘Stomach Full Of Punch’ like a ‘School Dance’!!
nice
ur done man… u aint got no real talent
after they count threw ballots, votes will put an ‘End to Arch’ like ‘New Balance’!! (“N” to arch*)
cool
im too malice N to this losers despair
so ‘On That Note, Take A Seat’ like this is ‘Musical Chairs’ !!
nice

v-klutch..take it or leave it

[Simagine]

Archive will take this

*will edit with vote if crewvoting gets out of hand

[KlutCh.]

ehh..its no biggy

dont count clicks vote

[Con]

1-1

[Copious]

flow - Archive
multies - Archive
punches - Klutch
personals - Klutch
complexity - Klutch

my vote - Klutch

[Blaze'n Beatz]

I wake up n bake, break up this fake
write this shit in Islam an still not Mecca mistake

-lol uhh i saw where this was going but it dont make sence..

you imbecile dorks, perished wit swords
aint gettin a second win unless its CPR at the medical ward
-not bad NOTHING personal..


it aint child abuse when I kick the butt of this joke
finally understand your name when I'm clutching your throat
-ehh no.

fucks wit it hoe, im bustin scars
call u nelson mandela, since u 30 years behind rusty bars

-filler??

i mean just look at what ya gay scheme is
flow more spaced out then astronauts day dreamin

-not that bad but woulda worded diff.

stop with that bitch ass flow slut
call u Hersheys Original since this kid has no nuts

-gay.just no....

I seen your raps, put a few more nigga's in
cuz your rhymes're like not telling a bitch a secret..filler in

-not bad flow but still, nothing good

this faggot just guessin, grabbin erections
drivin more voters away then cabs at elections

-dont rap about dick grabbing....

my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
while ya spits rub us the wrong way like a bad masseuse

-lol @ this bein probably the best line

think you winnin, better open a vast jar of hope
after I win I'll rub it in more than your last bar of soap....

-ehh...




KLUTCH



i take aim, measure, to take out this gay heifer
this loser ‘Never Leaves Home’ like he ‘Plays Catcher’!! (think baseball)
-not bad

get split in sectors, N put together so u can sit N listen
u rush to step, ull experience a ‘Brush with Death’ like a ‘Prep Mortician’!!
-better

get knock’d into another dimension, end up as a sloppy kill
by let’n him state check, i in-vite’m in to death like OD’n Pop’n Pills!! (vitamin to death)
-nice but forced

i got the chills cuz of how bad this dudes chance
with one swing ull receive a ‘Stomach Full Of Punch’ like a ‘School Dance’!!
-nope

ur done man… u aint got no real talent
after they count threw ballots, votes will put an ‘End to Arch’ like ‘New Balance’!! (“N” to arch*)
-I really actually liked this bar

im too malice N to this losers despair
so ‘On That Note, Take A Seat’ like this is ‘Musical Chairs’ !!
-nice ender

**** vote= Klutch

[KlutCh.]

who tha fuck is Copious N are we counting that???

2-1 or 3-1 me..?

[Plot]

ARCH
I wake up n bake, break up this fake
write this shit in Islam an still not Mecca mistake.
~Dope wp. bad wording
you imbecile dorks, perished wit swords
aint gettin a second win unless its CPR at the medical ward
~ehh, bad wording
it aint child abuse when I kick the butt of this joke
finally understand your name when I'm clutching your throat
~nah
fucks wit it hoe, im bustin scars
call u nelson mandela, since u 30 years behind rusty bars
~No no no
i mean just look at what ya gay scheme is
flow more spaced out then astronauts day dreamin
~ok
stop with that bitch ass flow slut
call u Hersheys Original since this kid has no nuts
~no no
I seen your raps, put a few more nigga's in
cuz your rhymes're like not telling a bitch a secret..filler in
~coulda been goos. wording again
this faggot just guessin, grabbin erections
drivin more voters away then cabs at elections
~ok
my punchlines wrap around your head.. let me add a noose
while ya spits rub us the wrong way like a bad masseuse
~ok
think you winnin, better open a vast jar of hope
after I win I'll rub it in more than your last bar of soap....
~ok
~seen much better, some ok bars, but some pre bad ones man.


KLUTCH
i take aim, measure, to take out this gay heifer
this loser ‘Never Leaves Home’ like he ‘Plays Catcher’!! (think baseball)
~ehh, ok. nothing at all standout or hard tho
get split in sectors, N put together so u can sit N listen
u rush to step, ull experience a ‘Brush with Death’ like a ‘Prep Mortician’!!
~ok.
get knock’d into another dimension, end up as a sloppy kill
by let’n him state check, i in-vite’m in to death like OD’n Pop’n Pills!! (vitamin to death)
~cool wp
i got the chills cuz of how bad this dudes chance
with one swing ull receive a ‘Stomach Full Of Punch’ like a ‘School Dance’!!
~soo played
ur done man… u aint got no real talent
after they count threw ballots, votes will put an ‘End to Arch’ like ‘New Balance’!! (“N” to arch*)
~cool
im too malice N to this losers despair
so ‘On That Note, Take A Seat’ like this is ‘Musical Chairs’ !!
~nice, seen Stockton use it tho..

v-Klutch,
just some of Archs stuff was not good in my eyes,