HC#2 Icyman(4-2) vs Shadow(0-0)

[Con]

8-12

Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd BUT! u better have a verse ready incase ya opponent does show!!!
those single bars r only da guarantee that yall showing up..COME READY EVERYTIME.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.





yo read the fukin rules.

[...IcyMan...]

8 bars gl gawd

[Thesis-]

g/l fam holla at ya boi.........8 bars is nice

yo its friday n he ain drop ima gahead n drop 1 bar will edit with verse if he shows

ur fake a bitch a fag/
1 bar already killed ur ass/

lol i'll edit if he drop

[...IcyMan...]

i'll beat yu at yur best or worst doesnt matter i'm bare rough
i'll chop yu even at shadow's peak like a thorough hair cut
shove mcdonalds in yur neck – 99 cts with a “foreign model car”? what deal!
cuz one bite’ll “rip out yur tray kia” like ‘children’s first reactions to happy meals’!
i'll pick yur brain for food..battle me? O now yu wanna kill yaself too?
i’ll watch yu “commit sioux a side” like “giving tribes a wing of a mental institute”
i'm the master of exploiting flaws n exposing a scam..lets put yur dick under the cam
cuz yur proof.. “even the little ones poke out!” like girl’s asses in pajama pants!
battle me? slice n dice yu into a many piece ..yup! Here's my guarantee
i'll end yur life “Viao Lent, Lee” like “a christian bruce giving up his sony”!
i’m yur master I’ll tell yu what to do as i please
proof? shit all I have to do is step outside.. “to prove that shadows following me”!
i’ll shove yur head down yur throat until yu come out of yur ass flaming hot
n prove that yur more “cotton yourself” than the fruit of the loom mascots
compare yur bars to my truck cuz yur verse is just a bad as yur pick up lines
look at the time- before I leave, I’ll shove these bars through S like a dollar sign

$$$$$$......

tray kia – trachea..sioux a side – suicide..viao lent lee – violently.. .cotton – caught in

g/l gawd

[Thesis-]

yo icy man quit pretendin u hard spittin fake bars next time come hard//
nigga cause i'll "drive u insane"like"two year olds with matchbox cars"//

yo dawg go to hell u can eat shit as if u was "assy-man//"
nigga leave me in shadows i live in the dark i "give u a shiner"makin u "glassy the flashy man"//

nigga i "lyrically cream u" i be basket robins i got "ice cream"
given me g'luck dawg i wont need "puttin niggas in the sky" like i was a "flight team"

i signed fo LW but im HC so ima "come at u hard core"//
u make no sence ima make u aks me "y u hit so hard for"//

yea ima ghost a shadow but i ont follow people "people follow me"//
thinkin u could beat me with those lines betta type more "thur-o-ly''

damn dawg 5 bars n its already ''ova''
see nigga ima judge n this is a murda "closieya"//

yo this is bar numba 7 still goin strong with many bars "left in me"
yo homeboi ya bars dindt hurt or phase me at this very moment they "helpin me"

final bar havent fell of in the "slightest bit"
i barely tried still won gainst ur "highest shit"

no hate 1

^uppin

[AcRoMeGaly]

i'll beat yu at yur best or worst doesnt matter i'm bare rough
i'll chop yu even at shadow's peak like a thorough hair cut
^^NA WEAK OPENER

shove mcdonalds in yur neck – 99 cts with a “foreign model car”? what deal!
cuz one bite’ll “rip out yur tray kia” like ‘children’s first reactions to happy meals’!
^^^EH

i'll pick yur brain for food..battle me? O now yu wanna kill yaself too?
i’ll watch yu “commit sioux a side” like “giving tribes a wing of a mental institute”
^^^BETTA

i'm the master of exploiting flaws n exposing a scam..lets put yur dick under the cam
cuz yur proof.. “even the little ones poke out!” like girl’s asses in pajama pants!
^^^LOL

battle me? slice n dice yu into a many piece ..yup! Here's my guarantee
i'll end yur life “Viao Lent, Lee” like “a christian bruce giving up his sony”!
HAD TO THINK, BUT IGHT

i’m yur master I’ll tell yu what to do as i please
proof? shit all I have to do is step outside.. “to prove that shadows following me”!
^^^LOL, HARD

i’ll shove yur head down yur throat until yu come out of yur ass flaming hot
n prove that yur more “cotton yourself” than the fruit of the loom mascots
^^^UM OK

compare yur bars to my truck cuz yur verse is just a bad as yur pick up lines
look at the time- before I leave, I’ll shove these bars through S like a dollar sign
^^^NA,WEAK CLOSER

OVER ALL=OK ATTEMPT AT PUNCHES THA SHADOW FOLLOWING ME LINE WAS HOT,LOL,NICE

yo icy man quit pretendin u hard spittin fake bars next time come hard//
nigga cause i'll "drive u insane"like"two year olds with matchbox cars"//
^^^NA WEAK OPENER
yo dawg go to hell u can eat shit as if u was "assy-man//"
nigga leave me in shadows i live in the dark i "give u a shiner"makin u "glassy the flashy man"//
^^^LOL FUNNY
nigga i "lyrically cream u" i be basket robins i got "ice cream"
given me g'luck dawg i wont need "puttin niggas in the sky" like i was a "flight team"
^^^NO
i signed fo LW but im HC so ima "come at u hard core"//
u make no sence ima make u aks me "y u hit so hard for"//
^^^NO
yea ima ghost a shadow but i ont follow people "people follow me"//
thinkin u could beat me with those lines betta type more "thur-o-ly''
^^^OK,

damn dawg 5 bars n its already ''ova''
see nigga ima judge n this is a murda "closieya"//
^^^OK

yo this is bar numba 7 still goin strong with many bars "left in me"
yo homeboi ya bars dindt hurt or phase me at this very moment they "helpin me"
^^^OK

final bar havent fell of in the "slightest bit"
i barely tried still won gainst ur "highest shit"
^^^NA,WEAK CLOSER

OVERALL= U GETTIN BETTA,BUT STILL SIMPLE WORK ON YA WORD PLAY AN COMPLEXITY

*MY COMMENTS*
THIS WAS AN OK BATTLE,BOTH EMCEE SHOWED CREATIVE NESS AN ATLEAST YALL CAME FRESH,NOTHING PLAYED AN SHADOW THIS NOT A HATE VOTE ITS AN HONEST ONE IGHT
IM NOT GONNA VOTE FO A CAT JUST CUZ I DONT LIKE THA PERSON HE BATTLEN AGAINST AN I NEVA SAID I DIDNT LIKE U,WE COOL IN MY EYES, SO W/E
IF U WANNA DISCOUNT THA VOTE DATS FINE,....WE HAVE BIN BEEFIN BUT IN MY EYES ICY GOT THIS ONE,SO YALL CAN TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT

VOTE=ICYMAN
REASON I LIKED HIS METAS MORE,HIS FLOW WAS OFF ALIL BUT IGHT

UNO

[Thesis-]

0-1 uppin^

[Ruck]

i'll beat yu at yur best or worst doesnt matter i'm bare rough
i'll chop yu even at shadow's peak like a thorough hair cut
lol decent
shove mcdonalds in yur neck – 99 cts with a “foreign model car”? what deal!
cuz one bite’ll “rip out yur tray kia” like ‘children’s first reactions to happy meals’
! cool
i'll pick yur brain for food..battle me? O now yu wanna kill yaself too?
i’ll watch yu “commit sioux a side” like “giving tribes a wing of a mental institute”
nah
i'm the master of exploiting flaws n exposing a scam..lets put yur dick under the cam
cuz yur proof.. “even the little ones poke out!” like girl’s asses in pajama pants!
nope...
battle me? slice n dice yu into a many piece ..yup! Here's my guarantee
i'll end yur life “Viao Lent, Lee” like “a christian bruce giving up his sony”!
hmm decnet
i’m yur master I’ll tell yu what to do as i please
proof? shit all I have to do is step outside.. “to prove that shadows following me”!
cool
i’ll shove yur head down yur throat until yu come out of yur ass flaming hot
n prove that yur more “cotton yourself” than the fruit of the loom mascots
hmm alright
compare yur bars to my truck cuz yur verse is just a bad as yur pick up lines
look at the time- before I leave, I’ll shove these bars through S like a dollar sign
nice

V

yo icy man quit pretendin u hard spittin fake bars next time come hard//
nigga cause i'll "drive u insane"like"two year olds with matchbox cars"//
no
yo dawg go to hell u can eat shit as if u was "assy-man//"
nigga leave me in shadows i live in the dark i "give u a shiner"makin u "glassy the flashy man"//
no

nigga i "lyrically cream u" i be basket robins i got "ice cream"
given me g'luck dawg i wont need "puttin niggas in the sky" like i was a "flight team"
alright

i signed fo LW but im HC so ima "come at u hard core"//
u make no sence ima make u aks me "y u hit so hard for"//
no way

yea ima ghost a shadow but i ont follow people "people follow me"//
thinkin u could beat me with those lines betta type more "thur-o-ly''
ok
damn dawg 5 bars n its already ''ova''
see nigga ima judge n this is a murda "closieya"//
no
yo this is bar numba 7 still goin strong with many bars "left in me"
yo homeboi ya bars dindt hurt or phase me at this very moment they "helpin me"
no
final bar havent fell of in the "slightest bit"
i barely tried still won gainst ur "highest shit"
noooo

v/ icy

kinda weak HC battle.,

[Dopar...]

Complete slaughter...im signin' up for the HC division if i get to battle this clown ina contender match :D...
...just fuckin' w/ u Shadow...but yeah Icy took this

Punches: Icy ..but verry close
Flow: shadow..his flow was actually pretty decent
Playedness: Shadow
Wackness: Shaodw...
Metas: Icy..easily..endin bars with "man" isnt good...
Wordplay: Icy<-thats what he's best at by far...
Nameplay: Icy...step outside shit=dope!

O/A= IcyMan...

Landslide...Shadow shuld be in LW man...

[Quest-1ON]

BREAKDOWN--------------
i'll beat yu at yur best or worst doesnt matter i'm bare rough
i'll chop yu even at shadow's peak like a thorough hair cut
^^ HAHAHA^^^LAST LINE WAS FUNNY CAUSE I SHAPE CATS UP^^^
shove mcdonalds in yur neck – 99 cts with a “foreign model car”? what deal!
cuz one bite’ll “rip out yur tray kia” like ‘children’s first reactions to happy meals’!
^^^ LOVE DA WORDPLAY DUKE SHYT WAS NICE^^^^^^^^^^^
i'll pick yur brain for food..battle me? O now yu wanna kill yaself too?
i’ll watch yu “commit sioux a side” like “giving tribes a wing of a mental institute”
^^^ HAHAHAH KEEP IT COMIN^^^^
i'm the master of exploiting flaws n exposing a scam..lets put yur dick under the cam
cuz yur proof.. “even the little ones poke out!” like girl’s asses in pajama pants!
^^^ DAMN NICE PERSONAL^^^^^^
battle me? slice n dice yu into a many piece ..yup! Here's my guarantee
i'll end yur life “Viao Lent, Lee” like “a christian bruce giving up his sony”!
^^^ HMMMMMMMM........^^
i’m yur master I’ll tell yu what to do as i please
proof? shit all I have to do is step outside.. “to prove that shadows following me”!
^^^ HAHAHA NAMEPLAY^^^^
i’ll shove yur head down yur throat until yu come out of yur ass flaming hot
n prove that yur more “cotton yourself” than the fruit of the loom mascots
^^ WORDPLAY^^^^^^^
compare yur bars to my truck cuz yur verse is just a bad as yur pick up lines
look at the time- before I leave, I’ll shove these bars through S like a dollar sign
^^^ NIE ENDER


OVERALL:::: HELLA NICE VERSE KID KEEP ELEVATING



NEXT----------------
yo icy man quit pretendin u hard spittin fake bars next time come hard//
nigga cause i'll "drive u insane"like"two year olds with matchbox cars"//
^^^ OK BUT HMMMMMMMMM^^^
yo dawg go to hell u can eat shit as if u was "assy-man//"
nigga leave me in shadows i live in the dark i "give u a shiner"makin u "glassy the flashy man"//
^^^^ HMMMMMMMMMMM^^^^
nigga i "lyrically cream u" i be basket robins i got "ice cream"
given me g'luck dawg i wont need "puttin niggas in the sky" like i was a "flight team"
^^^ HMMMMMMMMMMM^^^^
i signed fo LW but im HC so ima "come at u hard core"//
u make no sence ima make u aks me "y u hit so hard for"//
^^^ LAME^^^^
yea ima ghost a shadow but i ont follow people "people follow me"//
thinkin u could beat me with those lines betta type more "thur-o-ly''
^^ HMMMMMMM^^^
damn dawg 5 bars n its already ''ova''
see nigga ima judge n this is a murda "closieya"//
^^^^ HMMMMMM^^^
yo this is bar numba 7 still goin strong with many bars "left in me"
yo homeboi ya bars dindt hurt or phase me at this very moment they "helpin me"
^^^ HMMMMMMMMMMMM^^^
final bar havent fell of in the "slightest bit"
i barely tried still won gainst ur "highest shit"
^^^ NO NO NONONO^^^

OVERALL::: U GOT A HELLA LOTTA HMMMMMMMS FROM ME DUKE WHICH MEANS * YOU HAD AN APPROACH BUT DIDNT CAPITOLIZE ON IT EFFECTIVELY MEANING ONE OF LINES WAS HYPE AND WITH REWORDING THE ENTIREBAR WOULDVE BEEN NICE^^^^^^^
DUDE YOU REALLY NEEDA ELEVATE AND KEEP BATTLING BECAUSE UR ALMOST THERE JUST A LIL OFF


MAH VOTE = ICYMAN

Take it or Leave It


Thee Lyrical Phenom............

[Thesis-]

its a ko good shit icy

(posted by recite

Landslide...Shadow shuld be in LW man...

^i agree thats wat i singed up for

[HellRazor]

LMAO!!!!!......^^^

I was gonna vote but its over already...icy wins by K.O!