HC#2 Concept~Tactics(0-1) vs Hood(0-0)

[Con]

8-12

Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd BUT! u better have a verse ready incase ya opponent does show!!!
those single bars r only da guarantee that yall showing up..COME READY EVERYTIME.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.





read the fukin rules.

[Hood]

Check ur death son..

[AcRoMeGaly]

^^^lol,we'll see...............check

[Hood]

* Dudes name is Concept - Con the mod
Rest is self explanitory

Who the fuck is this newb, this man is trash to me
money alterd thoughts? Ill give this fuck my laughing deeds
Face left like seeds, cracked with parts on floors
wheres the progress, he's con cept, he's always been poor
Now your second name, still lame without the tactics
Fag been a 'Square so long', he's stuck in brackets**
Dissappear like magic, cause I don't like U wack MC's
Let the gun go-blam, till you Snow-Man, like young jeezy
Too easy, guess con wanted to make you a star
see how many times I could 'flip concepts' like writing a bar
Back to the gym pup, your messing w/ a red nose pit
Lets fight, grab ya head and bite, like she can't suck dick**
take all your shit, and burn it cause it's worthess garbage
If your bars were cars, man those would stay in garages*
Career all broke up, like two-cups you just sit in the drain
Just made the 'Match End Quick' Like a Lite-In-The-Rain**

key.

[AcRoMeGaly]

quit all tha loud shit nigga we all noe u a bitch
spttin witta style dats'allbuncheduptogetherudontnoewichiswich'
peep CONcepts 'dont get fooled' by imposters dats weak-inda-biceps
if battlen u is 'facen death' i guess death is a 'pain-less-process'
dude 'plays fo tha other team' why u thinkin ya-good???
he-a 'guy gay' whos 'fuck buddy' 'gangsta as hell' cuz he 'stay in da hood'
i'll invade ya area have ya seeking 'diplomatic immunity'
u didnt 'lock tha hood down' u just moved to a 'gated community'
Hood 'affiliated' wit wakness take that though, 'flie_n_save'
'dude from fresno' prolly posted his verse while 'hangin ten on a wave'
hes a surfer guy!!! sayin shit like 'Dude!!!' an 'Narley-Man'
your 'corned beef lyrics' just 'take up space' they 'bars of spam'
keystylen lyrics 'fastened to his shoes' he just 'running off wit sentences'
i pop u in ya writin hand before tha battle cat i hope u ambidextrious
TaC$ turn dis in to an 'nba brawl' when da voters dis-own his text
hood gonna start 'snappin at tha crowd' like 'Ron Artest'
its not their fault my-neezy be-easy takin this win was-easy
no wonder I got ya fans 'fleeing da hood' like 'george an wheeze'

[Plot]

Con 2
quit all tha loud shit nigga we all noe u a bitch
spttin witta style dats'allbuncheduptogetherudontnoewichiswich'
~weird
peep CONcepts 'dont get fooled' by imposters dats weak-inda-biceps
if battlen u is 'facen death' i guess death is a 'pain-less-process'
~nah
dude 'plays fo tha other team' why u thinkin ya-good???
he-a 'guy gay' whos 'fuck buddy' 'gangsta as hell' cuz he 'stay in da hood'
~wack
i'll invade ya area have ya seeking 'diplomatic immunity'
u didnt 'lock tha hood down' u just moved to a 'gated community'
~doesnt really connect.
Hood 'affiliated' wit wakness take that though, 'flie_n_save'
'dude from fresno' prolly posted his verse while 'hangin ten on a wave'
~nah
hes a surfer guy!!! sayin shit like 'Dude!!!' an 'Narley-Man'
your 'corned beef lyrics' just 'take up space' they 'bars of spam'
~..
keystylen lyrics 'fastened to his shoes' he just 'running off wit sentences'
i pop u in ya writin hand before tha battle cat i hope u ambidextrious
~nope
TaC$ turn dis in to an 'nba brawl' when da voters dis-own his text
hood gonna start 'snappin at tha crowd' like 'Ron Artest'
~nope
its not their fault my-neezy be-easy takin this win was-easy
no wonder I got ya fans 'fleeing da hood' like 'george an wheeze'
~?
~vast areas for improvement.

HOOD
Who the fuck is this newb, this man is trash to me
money alterd thoughts? Ill give this fuck my laughing deeds
~? dont really get it
Face left like seeds, cracked with parts on floors
wheres the progress, he's con cept, he's always been poor
~ehh
Now your second name, still lame without the tactics
Fag been a 'Square so long', he's stuck in brackets**
~ehh
Dissappear like magic, cause I don't like U wack MC's
Let the gun go-blam, till you Snow-Man, like young jeezy
~nah
Too easy, guess con wanted to make you a star
see how many times I could 'flip concepts' like writing a bar
~ok
Back to the gym pup, your messing w/ a red nose pit
Lets fight, grab ya head and bite, like she can't suck dick**
~No.
take all your shit, and burn it cause it's worthess garbage
If your bars were cars, man those would stay in garages*
~wack
Career all broke up, like two-cups you just sit in the drain
Just made the 'Match End Quick' Like a Lite-In-The-Rain**
~played.
~came terribly Hood.

V-Hood. fot the 1 bar I thought was average in the whole battle.

[Criticize]

hood you first two lines were ok im to lazy to quote the con-cept and laughing line and this was your best bar:
Too easy, guess con wanted to make you a star
see how many times I could 'flip concepts' like writing a bar
coulda worded it better about played bars but yea was still cool, you come with a cpl of cool lines but were your others lines should be JUST AS HARD HITTING there not your intensity falls off, like that young jeezy and garage lines aree Definate NOO'S.. you have proven you can write some decent lines just get rid of the shit and be more consistant and your win collum will double...

and concept i cant remember your old alias, but you got that old style from like early 02 and it was average then and aint shit not, the wordplay/punches just arnt creative enough your wordplay is lacking..you need to get some creative lines in their, punches, mets and wordplay and your verses will seriously improve..nothing really special this verse just a bunch of ehh lines thrown together..

im gonna have to vote for hood.
had 3 ok lines..

Vote- Hood.

[Fluent]

Hood

Who the fuck is this newb, this man is trash to me
money alterd thoughts? Ill give this fuck my laughing deeds
Decent
Face left like seeds, cracked with parts on floors
wheres the progress, he's con cept, he's always been poor
Decent
Now your second name, still lame without the tactics
Fag been a 'Square so long', he's stuck in brackets**
Kinda corny man and brackets are more rectangular really
Dissappear like magic, cause I don't like U wack MC's
Let the gun go-blam, till you Snow-Man, like young jeezy
Wack
Too easy, guess con wanted to make you a star
see how many times I could 'flip concepts' like writing a bar
Basic nameflip
Back to the gym pup, your messing w/ a red nose pit
Lets fight, grab ya head and bite, like she can't suck dick**
She can't suck dick sounded kinda weird, I would've used something like inexperienced prostitutes. You needed to make a reference to a She in the setup to make it work out.
take all your shit, and burn it cause it's worthess garbage
If your bars were cars, man those would stay in garages*
Nope
Career all broke up, like two-cups you just sit in the drain
Just made the 'Match End Quick' Like a Lite-In-The-Rain**
Decent

Thoughts: Why do you put up * and **'s when you're not linking to a reference or something? Anyway, this was decent, more than enough to win this battle. Garbage/Garages doesn't rhyme, you're a syllable off there. You can get away with it when it's like sit/quits but the -es syllable is clearly more defined.

Concept Tactics

quit all tha loud shit nigga we all noe u a bitch
spttin witta style dats'allbuncheduptogetherudontnoewichiswich'
Wack
peep CONcepts 'dont get fooled' by imposters dats weak-inda-biceps
if battlen u is 'facen death' i guess death is a 'pain-less-process'
Wack
dude 'plays fo tha other team' why u thinkin ya-good???
he-a 'guy gay' whos 'fuck buddy' 'gangsta as hell' cuz he 'stay in da hood'
Wack
i'll invade ya area have ya seeking 'diplomatic immunity'
u didnt 'lock tha hood down' u just moved to a 'gated community'
Not bad
Hood 'affiliated' wit wakness take that though, 'flie_n_save'
'dude from fresno' prolly posted his verse while 'hangin ten on a wave'
Wack
hes a surfer guy!!! sayin shit like 'Dude!!!' an 'Narley-Man'
your 'corned beef lyrics' just 'take up space' they 'bars of spam'
Wack
keystylen lyrics 'fastened to his shoes' he just 'running off wit sentences'
i pop u in ya writin hand before tha battle cat i hope u ambidextrious
Weak
TaC$ turn dis in to an 'nba brawl' when da voters dis-own his text
hood gonna start 'snappin at tha crowd' like 'Ron Artest'
Played
its not their fault my-neezy be-easy takin this win was-easy
no wonder I got ya fans 'fleeing da hood' like 'george an wheeze'
Weak

Thoughts: This was pretty awful, basically nothing good here. Everything just sounded so corny and lame to me. Keep practicing.

Vote: Hood

[Dopar...]

ohhh...never mind..dont ned my vote...

[AcRoMeGaly]

fuk it i'll take those comments file n save fo more fuel to my fire.....

good job hood...lol