HC#1 True Story(1-0) vs Resonance(0-0)

[Con]

8-10

Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, ill take it as a noshow.

DUE FRIDAY at10PM CENTRAL <-find out ur own time zone.
vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim me ur verse and ill gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.

[bizzy.]

8 to Ten ok, this is where the research comes in.
CHEQ IN

[bizzy.]

No Show?

F T W
W T F

[Resonance..]

aint a no show

keyin sum quick shit

res the best from the start, i treat text like an art
splash ya brains thru a mirror n' reflect on ya thoughts
when it comes to punches, you be whorin too
skills so poor, I had to slash the prices of what I got in store for you
true story im fiction, hoardin ya soul
make a split decision in ur brain usin the fork in the road
put a cork in it ho, res here to get the last laugh
fuck leavin you a vegetable, put u in a garden state like zach braff
and that's that,I fuck up haters
cuz ya shots leave me over-bored like barf from drunk sailors
I’ll never manage to fail, you however hold that pure touch
to catch more chinks in ya frame than a Hollywood tour bus
your flows lain in piss, rhymes are checked as old
res be usin so much force, Star Wars will make a new episode
this is where it gets awfully gory
u searchin for facts bout me, change ya name to E True Hollywood Story
take my advice, it's wise if you choose
to move your neck at the end of this line...through a loop~

[bizzy.]

verse commin

Got Me battlen dis lil shit,i rip him frame apart
Make niggas Rest on ace/Resonance Like a game of hearts

Its Time...

|Yes Its Tyme| He gon Get ripped so why |waste a line|
I |could reply| But an Eye For an Eye would just make us |Both Blind|

Im Dat nigga wit da |hopeless throttle| Try to use my words a a |Devotion model|
You Angry at me, cuz ya lines is used den thrown out like|Lotion Bottles|

E true? No Bitch|u a Goof| You a killer?, You |merkin who?!|
Cuz Votin For Bush Is da only time u |merderin da booth|

Imma |Diminish Kid|, Cuz I Quick To |Finish this|
Cuz my lines Like Phone Plans At 9,nigga |they Limitless|

Im temped to |splerge quick|, reconize my |words Bitch|
That 1st Lines Was The Sik, The 1st Time i |Herd it|

If i Ever |need a slut| Imma Call |ya wifey up|
Cuz im merkin ya best personals Like Droppin ya |Pizza Hut|

Ill Get torque To Burn you Like a match thats |never lightin|
Cuz i Wreck On Eyes/Reconize wackMC'z Like |We was Fightin|

Finish Him...

U mad, cuz i roll around in |swollen mink| You fag like the |pretty Pink|
I got dat mean Coke Dat leave dis Cat feend/Caffeine like da |soda Drink|

FUK WIT ME...

[.|On-sLaughT|.]

Overall,This Was A Really Nice Battle,Both Were Very Consistent And Came Hard...Anyways,Enough Of That,Heres The Breakdown...

Resonance

res the best from the start, i treat text like an art
splash ya brains thru a mirror n' reflect on ya thoughts
when it comes to punches, you be whorin too
skills so poor, I had to slash the prices of what I got in store for you
Liking These 2 Bars,Good Multis,Flow,And Structure Is Nice,Mirror Line Is A Little Played Tho...
true story im fiction, hoardin ya soul
make a split decision in ur brain usin the fork in the road
put a cork in it ho, res here to get the last laugh
fuck leavin you a vegetable, put u in a garden state like zach braff
Again,Flow Is Def There,Multis Too,Liked The Fork In The Road Line...
and that's that,I fuck up haters
cuz ya shots leave me over-bored like barf from drunk sailors
I’ll never manage to fail, you however hold that pure touch
to catch more chinks in ya frame than a Hollywood tour bus
Not Bad,Not Bad...
your flows lain in piss, rhymes are checked as old
res be usin so much force, Star Wars will make a new episode
this is where it gets awfully gory
u searchin for facts bout me, change ya name to E True Hollywood Story
Ok...
take my advice, it's wise if you choose
to move your neck at the end of this line...through a loop~
Not A Very Good Closer...Felt You Could Have Done Alot Better...Overall, Nice Verse Bro,Keep It Up...

True Story

Got Me battlen dis lil shit,i rip him frame apart
Make niggas Rest on ace/Resonance Like a game of hearts
Ok Opener,Couldve Done Way Better...
|Yes Its Tyme| He gon Get ripped so why |waste a line|
I |could reply| But an Eye For an Eye would just make us |Both Blind|
Im Dat nigga wit da |hopeless throttle| Try to use my words a a |Devotion model|
You Angry at me, cuz ya lines is used den thrown out like|Lotion Bottles|
Very Nice,Eye For An Eye Line Was Nasty...
E true? No Bitch|u a Goof| You a killer?, You |merkin who?!|
Cuz Votin For Bush Is da only time u |merderin da booth|
Imma |Diminish Kid|, Cuz I Quick To |Finish this|
Cuz my lines Like Phone Plans At 9,nigga |they Limitless|
Some Dope Shit Here Too...Gj
Im temped to |splerge quick|, reconize my |words Bitch|
That 1st Lines Was The Sik, The 1st Time i |Herd it|
If i Ever |need a slut| Imma Call |ya wifey up|
Cuz im merkin ya best personals Like Droppin ya |Pizza Hut|
Ill Get torque To Burn you Like a match thats |never lightin|
Cuz i Wreck On Eyes/Reconize wackMC'z Like |We was Fightin|
Some Pretty Nice Lines Here,Lotta Filler Tho,Couldve Done Better Bro...
U mad, cuz i roll around in |swollen mink| You fag like the |pretty Pink|
I got dat mean Coke Dat leave dis Cat feend/Caffeine like da |soda Drink|
Nasty. Strong Strong Finish...

You Both Came Dope On This, Very Hard To Pick Who I Would Say Won But I Gotta Say True Edged This One Barely...Great Battle Guys...

Vote: True Story

[bizzy.]

1-0 Up - N - Diz Bitch

[Hooligan]

^pfft...lemme give a real vote.



res the best from the start, i treat text like an art
splash ya brains thru a mirror n' reflect on ya thoughts
nice
when it comes to punches, you be whorin too
skills so poor, I had to slash the prices of what I got in store for you
lol
true story im fiction, hoardin ya soul
make a split decision in ur brain usin the fork in the road
ok
put a cork in it ho, res here to get the last laugh
fuck leavin you a vegetable, put u in a garden state like zach braff
ok
and that's that,I fuck up haters
cuz ya shots leave me over-bored like barf from drunk sailors
played
I’ll never manage to fail, you however hold that pure touch
to catch more chinks in ya frame than a Hollywood tour bus
ok
your flows lain in piss, rhymes are checked as old
res be usin so much force, Star Wars will make a new episode
no
this is where it gets awfully gory
u searchin for facts bout me, change ya name to E True Hollywood Story
no
take my advice, it's wise if you choose
to move your neck at the end of this line...through a loop~
no


Got Me battlen dis lil shit,i rip him frame apart
Make niggas Rest on ace/Resonance Like a game of hearts
terrible
Its Time...

|Yes Its Tyme| He gon Get ripped so why |waste a line|
I |could reply| But an Eye For an Eye would just make us |Both Blind|
wtf

Im Dat nigga wit da |hopeless throttle| Try to use my words a a |Devotion model|
You Angry at me, cuz ya lines is used den thrown out like|Lotion Bottles|
terrible

E true? No Bitch|u a Goof| You a killer?, You |merkin who?!|
Cuz Votin For Bush Is da only time u |merderin da booth|
played

Imma |Diminish Kid|, Cuz I Quick To |Finish this|
Cuz my lines Like Phone Plans At 9,nigga |they Limitless|
no

Im temped to |splerge quick|, reconize my |words Bitch|
That 1st Lines Was The Sik, The 1st Time i |Herd it|
no

If i Ever |need a slut| Imma Call |ya wifey up|
Cuz im merkin ya best personals Like Droppin ya |Pizza Hut|
?

Ill Get torque To Burn you Like a match thats |never lightin|
Cuz i Wreck On Eyes/Reconize wackMC'z Like |We was Fightin|
no

Finish Him...

U mad, cuz i roll around in |swollen mink| You fag like the |pretty Pink|
I got dat mean Coke Dat leave dis Cat feend/Caffeine like da |soda Drink|
err no


v/ Resonance, wtf was that true story? I didnt like ne of ur shit, no hate but you should stop battling for a while and elevate and umm learn the basics. Archive had some ight lines and that won it for him.

[.|On-sLaughT|.]

how was my vote not a real vote?....they both came nice,i was just feeling true's verse alot more,archive couldve came alot harder...felt he slacked a little on this....

[Ruck]

wtf @ true story being in the HC.

[MuRda MikE]

here's the break down

Flow-Ren
Creativity-true
punches-ren
meta-none
enjoyment-true
structure-true

overall vote-true story,he came harder wit more punches and attack lines

[bizzy.]

iight 2-1
well respected verse by sonny da last one was suppose to b my last battle but
at the same tym that i was gunna get out,the matches were mzade so yea
im signin out after dis, but keep on votin niggaz

[Dopar...]

^So ur him, huh?

WordPlay: ren
Multies:Ren
Punches: Ren
Flow: =
Personals: niether
Wackness: TrueStory

O/A=Ren...

WTF IS TRUESTORY DOING IN HC!!!!!!!!!!

[bizzy.]

Originally Posted by DopeArt

^So ur him, huh?

WordPlay: ren
Multies:Ren
Punches: Ren
Flow: =
Personals: niether
Wackness: TrueStory

O/A=Ren...

WTF IS TRUESTORY DOING IN HC!!!!!!!!!!

So im him,So im who?
wait, why am i in the HC

[Dopar...]

i was speaking to Archive...
and yes, why are you?
you're not even good enough for LW#1
no offence...