Hardcore: ((Gazoon)) vs. BlackHand

[Plot]

6-8 bars
due Thursday
Please check & Pm your opponent

[GaZooN]

u aint dope enough to take my belt son.

[Ruck]

half my shit...took max 6 mins

you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*
Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion
Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch
accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at

[bizzy.]

Damn that verse was ill, Ima watch diz one

[Ruck]

i may have to drop early..i got shit on..when you dropping?

[Plot]

Blackhand??

[GaZooN]

I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'
Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans
I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*
Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B


*gang signs, throwing down blood whoes rivals against Crips an Folks

[Ruck]

lol @ this battle being ready for votes..i would put my other half up but f it

[GaZooN]

daw.. i had no idea u dropp'd anything. u just edited ur shit. so i never even tried to check

[S.Caugh]

you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*Nice
Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion.liked this
Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch.lol
accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at.I know you ment shits-but i liked this bar



I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'-nice
Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans-nice
I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*decent
Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B.Nice

Wow ya'll both had short verses but both were nice only 1 bar out this battle was played kinda witch was the crip or folk shit other then that punches were nice in every bar
Ima Have to give it to Black hand only cas i didn't see anything safe.he came wid it.Gazoon did 2 only that throwing b down line is kinda played.Nice Battle


Vote BlackHand

Fellas if you will please go vote on mine and tirants battle thanks

[1/2 Wit It]

[Black:]
you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*
pretty creative..cool opener..
Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion
eh, not really feeling this..
Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch
nice wording..punch was ok..
accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at
eh, decent closer imo..

[Gaz:]
I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'
Haha..creative shit..good opener..
Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans
Eh,, coulda been worded better..decent punch..
I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*
this was pretty cool imo..first line was gay though..
Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B
the keyboard concepts is played..

Overall Vote = Gazoon..i felt his punches were a bit more stronger..both verses weren't as good as either one of your usual shit though..decent shit from both..

[Pembroke]

BlackH

you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*

Weak

Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion

?

Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch

Kind of funny, but no

accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at

Cool

Gazoon

I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'

Nah

Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans

Decent nameplay

I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*

Bad

Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B

Wack attempt..

v/ GaZoon

One decent nameplay of the battle. Thanks for showing.. I'm hoping to see a better battle next week. Maybe I'll rejoin the HW's

[Ruck]

I.Bruce = Isaac Bruce.

uppin

[Plot]

Black
you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*
~bruce/bruise? dont get the ref tho, gridiron??
Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion
~blah punch, nice rhymin tho
Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch
~nah
accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at
~heh, 2 'shit' bars in a row tho?

Gaz
I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'
~funny punch, rhymes well off tho..
Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans
~see above comment
I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*
~nah
Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B
~Ehh, dont like these keyboard puns.
V-Gaz edged it. couple of funny punches, but for real up ya rhymin skills dude

[Fluent]

Blackhand

you gon feel black, i got diseases on my hand
when i vs gaz, I.Bruce em like receivers for the rams*
It's bad and also forced because Bruise doesn't sound like Bruce and the wording is terrible
Black leave more heads turned then a suprise promotion
Gaz like a nickname, ery 'own' him but despise the notion
Weak
Coast off, no reason to upset him with a flurry or punch
he'll get shitted on more then the toilet seat after curry for lunch
Wack
accident waiting to happen, gazoon is like an inevidable mishap
he might as well put his verse up his ass..thats where his other shit at
Not bad

Gazoon

I got the HC belt, you could never hold or grip- Expose this bitch
Cuz ur occupations Hustler? Only cuz you pussy enough to pose for em'
Not bad
Explode a clip; So I'm sure to sieze him, stab an reap him
Cuz versus me kid? the voters gon see the Black death like mideval europeans
Not bad
I'm sure to beat em; But this fag spreads his cheeks when I reach my pinnicle
I'ma throw B down with my bare hands like gang bangin' Crip or Folk*
Wack
Better listen hoe; Cuz u aint dope as me, Understand ur place before u go to me
Cuz you cant win, Even the fucking keyboard knows that G is over B
Played

Vote: Gazoon