JOIN NOW!!Manage your user profile and optionsTop users battle stats and rankingUse our members store to buy features and be able to use more forum optionsBack to main forumContact us      users online now



 



Go Back   Hip Hop/Rap Music and Urban Social Network Community > The Paper-Trail > Creativity on the Open Mic

Creativity on the Open Mic Scribble up a verse or collab? Post it, and get feedback here in text format.

YOU MUST reply to two other Open Mics before starting yours. Include both links of the Open Mics you replied to at the top of your new thread.



Reply

 

LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 08-28-2005, 07:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
That Death Shit
 
Contract's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 2,346
Rep Power: 6 Contract will become famous soon enough
Default Group Therapy Collaboration

HaHAAAA...what up RF? Kinch the Knife Blade aka Shred the Contract aka The Tarantula Hawk here. Took us a minute to put all the pieces together, but here's our collaboration, we really care a lot about whether you like it or not :(.

When I find myself in times of trouble
These other fairies come at me
Seeking to vs. the kingdom?
Let us see.

Shred the Contract
The Group says: fuck a shine! Keep mumblin' how bright
They call me Lantern Jaws and we come to devour light!
This perfect crew's ire will surge through wires
to burst, our worst dude hired was pure blue fire
I'll slay those that stare and knife insurgents with weapons
Plus Phade's Golden Era like detergents in heaven
Ideal and Kahlm strike fear in y'all and never chokin' up
Bright steel in palms, we not talkin' metal coconuts
Deppth is Nick Shred is Kinch - please you know the names
Duels on moonlit beaches that leave the ocean stained
Stoned face generals gobble first wave armies
No one you wanna fuck with like you drunk at toddler's birthday parties
Honey and milk flow in our pleasure domes
I'll battle ya whole city with a silk robe and a megaphone
Get ya scenes tighter, you'll never get it duke
'less Kinch is screenwriter and executive producer
GT dominant studio, rhymin' for booty hoes
Pete give you destruction if you sneak into production
Catch an actress in a clip and put a clip in an actress
Half the booth'll spring on my dick like a rip in the mattress
When I sever heads I'm takin' one for the team
So who's really stepping to an eighty ton war machine?
I got plasma cartridges encased in ceramic
To help you faggots remember your place on this planet
Crit, your stupidity's monumental - check this
I'll eat your whole fucking nation for my continental breakfast
Beef with Shred, but you know Kinch is proof of God
Ain't a single decent head who posts in the booth you mod
Saying I'm on YOUR DICK? My pens have to write truth
KID YOU EDITED MY POST SO IT SAYS THAT I LIKE YOU
Rage incarnate's above Crit, guess I'm angry over nothing
Try the Blade, your stolen belt will maybe hold ya guts in
Shook dykes is slain quick cause Shred is faster
"Love Doctor" look like the gay kid from Wedding Crashers
You replace Sto's steel fist? You a hand broken right in two
No one on earth could stand holdin' mics with you
Dying in picture battles with whiny and bitter malice
The only "vet" nobody thinks has the tiniest bit of talent
It's like we share profiles--cause your name in Shred's too
Queers is reckless, here's the next kid from Flava's best crew

Inn Deppth
group therapy cure the junkies, that straight voodoo shit
makin us look like tesla or einstein, stupid kids
you aint abstract just cause you carry a backpack
i seen girlscouts with more originality packin a knapsack
now a days people be on that emo funk ghetto crunk shit
stuck in the glass case, mind state brings the rebel ruckus
but you still buttkiss, you ain't changing a damn thang
there's only so much you could portray through an screen name
still, i be proud, my graffiti causes asthma in green clouds
punched a bitch stomach to see if the seed growls
by the way drink more milk for the growth that you lack
cause your mindstate lapsed when that rosary cracked
i make jets lag, you bet fags, im hungry for the next slab
hurry it up, we did you dirty enough to catch text crabs
this just a little taste sample, complete with the toothpick
west of je-pan, we ban anyone who mutters "whos nick?!"
yea you carry heat but the worst i can be is soaked with plastic
the low you've passed it, next stop up is the open casket
Phade
the bloody eyed hoody tied rebel up in the riddim
note pad fillin tag scribblin up on the buildin
ill GT affilliate back with the realest shit
killin it, throw ya hands up if you feelin it
my rhymes make like tabasco-aid (what?)
the hardest rappers hold their tongues after Phade
this aint house of pain
but you can jump around the same
to all the heads actin clown for fame
hip-hop shall remain much bigger than you
it aint dyin now after the shit its been through
trans-atlantic, GT got you actin frantic
that bland shit aint worthy of my grandad's attic
no strings attatched it's a passion just to rap
so oldschool my voice adds a crackle to the wax
money'll never phase me - I can't promise
but lack of money never phased me - that's honest
grey matter rap-I'm the fact of it
these wax phonics aint worthy of the words that I rap on it
I got love not a lack of it
so if you diss me I'll give you a day to go back on it
H2O claim top? if thats true
stop askin our heads to join your damn crew
see Group Therapy been weathering the storm
who'd ve thought that we'd come our better than before
a message to you all who doubt us: straight up
eat a dick then get the fuck from around us
'Phunxion the founder doesnt rep much
did it crumble around us? nah we stepped up
even when heads got sniped our roll call
left with 5 of the illest on the whole board
but fuck a top 5, I've nothin to prove
if I'm hotter than you or top of the crews
I just try do me, aint bothered with you
or the ego freakshows cloggin this booth
h20- its nothin but repect for you
peace to all true heads, whatever the crew
Kahlm
And you knew this, u cant groove with the movement
The Group, its known for filling the room for improvement
Can you dig that? Bring all the tools that you wish
the strongest writers block u cant scale or move this
If you diss, or take shots then you miss
Our asses are tight we’re not equipped to lose shit
So who’s sick? Dawg our illness is constant
Yall a chorus off coughs we are buckets of vomit
Fuck it since I’ve been on the run for the Heismen
I am running the field with the toughest of linemen\
Rookie of the year and doing nothing but climbing
My Full-Backing’ll hit ya pads n rupture the lining
Ring ya bell, dust ya clock, n fuck up ya timing
No liquor, mad den a muhfucka yet nukkas is whining
Cuz us Giants clench #1 and our grip has just tightened
Football? No but a team and yall will remember the Titans
Ideal
You want high calibur? Well i aint talking bout the forty-five
im talkin bout the glory kind, that has u hanging from the story line
The sorta rhymes that hit u with the force of a magnum
forcing stagnant cats who write raps to recant them
You want high calibur? its a matter uh fact, my battle-y raps
Leave you between techno and house...an actual TRANCE
Can you handle it, black? the mastered ravenous raps?
Rhetorical question....dont even try answering that
High calibur? Ill challenge ya, thats when its time to fear it
Cus i breathe rap...thats why im sniffing lines of lyrics
the rhymes and rhythm intwined with wiswom, make the verse
Keep your ear to the ground, my buzz is bound to shake the earth
Calibur high now?...I write the sounds shaking ya stereo
Drop a thousand pounds of rhymes, THATS ground-breaking material
Fake you aint hear it, though, we know you're recieving the message
Breathe for a second....STOP BITCHING, and admit that GT IS THE VET LIST

You'll notice a surge of insightful feedback following this drop from all of our members. Don't let this piece convince you that you'll never measure up! :) Night night for now.

Last edited by ShredContract; 09-03-2005 at 12:46 PM.
Contract is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-28-2005, 11:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
Banned
 
Lynch Ruger's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Norf Side
Posts: 448
Rep Power: 0 Lynch Ruger is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to Lynch Ruger Send a message via MSN to Lynch Ruger Send a message via Yahoo to Lynch Ruger
Default

Whaaaat in the name of Rakim was this peice of Hall Of Fame??
Imma just quote my fav parts from each 1...

Kinch
I got plasma cartridges encased in ceramic
To help you faggots remember your place on this planet
^ So smooth
I'll battle ya whole city with a silk robe and a megaphone
^ Whoa
I'll eat your whole fucking nation for my continental breakfast
^ siiiick
Saying I'm on YOUR DICK? My pens have to write truth
KID YOU EDITED MY POST SO IT SAYS THAT I LIKE YOU
^ Hard
It's like we share profiles--cause your name in Shred's too
Queers is reckless, here's the next kid from Flava's best crew
^ Just sounded...Right

Deppth
you aint abstract just cause you carry a backpack
i seen girlscouts with more originality packin a knapsack
^ BOOM
punched a bitch stomach to see if the seed growls
by the way drink more milk for the growth that you lack
cause your mindstate lapsed when that rosary cracked
^ Oh My Lord

Phade
that bland shit aint worthy of my grandad's attic
no strings attatched it's a passion just to rap
so oldschool my voice adds a crackle to the wax
^ Nice
but fuck a top 5, I've nothin to prove
if I'm hotter than you or top of the crews
^ Damnnnnn

Kahlm
And you knew this, u cant groove with the movement
The Group, its known for filling the room for improvement
^ Seen something simalier but, still raw
the strongest writers block u cant scale or move this
^ ...:)
Our asses are tight we’re not equipped to lose shit
^ AHA DOPE
My Full-Backing’ll hit ya pads n rupture the lining
^ Money shot

iDeal
Can you handle it, black? the mastered ravenous raps?
Rhetorical question....dont even try answering that
^ very nice
Cus i breathe rap...thats why im sniffing lines of lyrics
^ illll
Drop a thousand pounds of rhymes, THATS ground-breaking material
^ very nice
Fake you aint hear it, though, we know you're recieving the message
Breathe for a second....STOP BITCHING, and admit that GT IS THE VET LIST
^ Knock Out

Dope as fuck...all i gotta say...
9.4//10
Lynch Ruger is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-29-2005, 12:47 AM   #3 (permalink)
Save.Your.Self
 
Kaeo.Seru's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Washington DC
Posts: 3,365
Rep Power: 10 Kaeo.Seru is a jewel in the roughKaeo.Seru is a jewel in the roughKaeo.Seru is a jewel in the roughKaeo.Seru is a jewel in the rough
Send a message via AIM to Kaeo.Seru Send a message via Yahoo to Kaeo.Seru
Default

OMG!! if this shit dont go hall of fame i'm leaving the site. damn i wish i woulda known yall was dropping like this i woulda came with a whole different verse. i'm mad now

*stomps off to his room*
__________________





.:Project Saturation:.
The Complete Collection
Kaeo.Seru is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-29-2005, 01:01 AM   #4 (permalink)
That Death Shit
 
Contract's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 2,346
Rep Power: 6 Contract will become famous soon enough
Default

Fuck if Nick didn't remind everybody he's way more than just a personality with that verse. Kahlm keystyled his but still topped two thirds of the site, Ideal murdered his verse with lyricism mixed with actual RHYMES THAT FLOW, CHILDREN. RHYMES. FLOW. HIP-HOP. And after that verse from Phade? He's pretty much entitled to overrule the literary criticism of anyone on this site.

But that Kinch dude is trash, real talk.
Contract is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-29-2005, 09:31 AM   #5 (permalink)
Gold the Phalanx
 
Stoic's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Norwalk, Connecticut
Posts: 6,089
Rep Power: 12 Stoic will become famous soon enough
Send a message via AIM to Stoic
Default

You replace Sto's steel fist? You a hand broken right in two
No one on earth could stand holdin' mics with you
... im loved.

the continental brekfast line was fire...

So who's really stepping to an eighty ton war machine?
^lol, dope.

Kinch, of course your work is better then 99% of the site... but you didn't show your usual creativity every single bar, when i read from you i wanna hear something about how you defeated Galactus in one line... and then out of no where rhyme it with stomping in Dr Doom's face mask... you gave me too much filler, and i was kinda dissapointed.

Nick, another dissapointing verse, still better then half the site, but your rhyme game here lacked to tie it all together. it seemed so forced, using the commas to finish off your flow... adding more rhyming syllables, just wasnt feeling it.

Phade...
i never really liked your style, because i never felt you got too creative, but here you really stepped up with just some real talk type shit... gotta respect it.

'Phunxion the founder doesnt rep much
did it crumble around us? nah we stepped up
shit like that is just strong.

and of course your flow is really good.


Kahlm

kinda simpler verse, didn't like the way it started out, and the wordplay wasn't striking a fancy with me, but it was nice at times.

Fuck it since I’ve been on the run for the Heismen
I am running the field with the toughest of linemen\
Rookie of the year and doing nothing but climbing
My Full-Backing’ll hit ya pads n rupture the lining
Ring ya bell, dust ya clock, n fuck up ya timing
No liquor, mad den a muhfucka yet nukkas is whining
Cuz us Giants clench #1 and our grip has just tightened
Football? No but a team and yall will remember the Titans

that shit was just pure kanye west flow, nice smooth simple, but it doesnt matter cuz it's hot.

Can you handle it, black? the mastered ravenous raps?
Rhetorical question....dont even try answering that
Ideal, i've seen you come so far as a lyricist, welcome to the peak...

Overall, of course it was hot, however i was a bit dissapointed with some of you guys, Ideal fucking went into murder mode and just blew up galaxys with his verse... but it's all good... hot collab, i really liked it.


hit up my piece, imma drop something today...
__________________
Bullfighting is the only art in which the artist is in danger of death and in which the degree of brilliance in the performance is left to the fighter's honor.

Last edited by Stoic; 08-29-2005 at 09:37 AM.
Stoic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-29-2005, 05:54 PM   #6 (permalink)
nonsensically sexy
 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: tryna get a personal huh?
Posts: 1,578
Rep Power: 6 The Duktah is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to The Duktah Send a message via Yahoo to The Duktah
Default

Whoa all of you gave me stabs of images... good collab.. and part of Ideals just sent me rubbing my eyes...

Shred went berserk in part of the verse with image.. something he has a unique talent for. The rest? Some excellent metaphors, phrases, contintental breakfast etc.. ah

Inn

there's only so much you could portray through an screen name
still, i be proud, my graffiti causes asthma in green clouds
punched a bitch stomach to see if the seed growls
by the way drink more milk for the growth that you lack
cause your mindstate lapsed when that rosary cracked
^that part was flames. darappinbrat wooo!!

Phade if this verse was a color... it'd be silver.

trans-atlantic, GT got you actin frantic
that bland shit aint worthy of my grandad's attic
no strings attatched it's a passion just to rap
so oldschool my voice adds a crackle to the wax
^fierce!

Calm

And you knew this, u cant groove with the movement
The Group, its known for filling the room for improvement
^Ah.. Acc's was kinda better but this was crew related.. nice verse

Cus i breathe rap...thats why im sniffing lines of lyrics
the rhymes and rhythm intwined with wiswom, make the verse
Keep your ear to the ground, my buzz is bound to shake the earth
Calibur high now?...I write the sounds shaking ya stereo
Drop a thousand pounds of rhymes, THATS ground-breaking material
^from the shake the earth line it threw me off... whoa man.. i swear I was kind of dizzy... i could picture you screaming this on the microphone.

Although Mal wasn't present... ehh... I still enjoyed this a lot. I wouldn't say Best of Rapflava yet.. sorry. Many more open mics should get there first before I think about this 1..

Keep doing U's like T (get it? t is before u in the alphabet.. aka getting from behind)

hahahahah damn i'm good
The Duktah is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-29-2005, 06:24 PM   #7 (permalink)
Registered User
 
Loose Logic's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 207
Rep Power: 6 Loose Logic is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to Loose Logic
Default

damn shit was hard as hell. all of u came nice as fuck. its refreshing to read somethin that has a flow to it plus lyricism and vocab.. nice multis thrown in.. good imagry. had me eager to read the next line..

keep it up.
one.
__________________





W-2 - L-0
Loose Logic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-2005, 02:29 AM   #8 (permalink)
viva usted
 
AVARICE's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: CA
Posts: 2,287
Rep Power: 10 AVARICE is a jewel in the roughAVARICE is a jewel in the roughAVARICE is a jewel in the rough
Send a message via AIM to AVARICE
Default

shred...

Bright steel in palms, we not talkin' metal coconuts
^^ that was cool.

Beef with Shred, but you know Kinch is proof of God
Ain't a single decent head who posts in the booth you mod
Saying I'm on YOUR DICK? My pens have to write truth
KID YOU EDITED MY POST SO IT SAYS THAT I LIKE YOU
^^ haha... dope.

your flow was on then you switched styles around every few bars which hurt some, it made me have to stop and go back and catch the flow instead of just continually going and letting the flow come to me. id say that was your biggest fault in your verse. some cool wordplay in there, a lot of dope images. a well written verse. oh, very smooth outro/intro for inn depth, i liked that a lot.

depth...

you aint abstract just cause you carry a backpack
i seen girlscouts with more originality packin a knapsack
^^ cool.

i liked your verse a lot. minus the boring rhyme scheme. you have a lot of creative thoughts in here and you present them a relatively simple but well worded fashion. it was a solid verse from beginning to end with no downfall points about it. dope stuff, you need to share some solo verses now.

phade...

trans-atlantic, GT got you actin frantic
that bland shit aint worthy of my grandad's attic
no strings attatched it's a passion just to rap
so oldschool my voice adds a crackle to the wax
^^ good god that was dope.

H2O claim top? if thats true
stop askin our heads to join your damn crew
^^ haha..... i liked it.

I just try do me, aint bothered with you
or the ego freakshows cloggin this booth
h20- its nothin but repect for you
peace to all true heads, whatever the crew
^^ real talk.

flow is by far the best so far, very fun, relaxed yet hard hitting verse. a lot of subtle dope lines in here. flow got a little bit shaky down towards the end, last 8 or 10 lines or so but still the content was solid and made up for it. good work man.

kahlm...

blah at you using your bvt verse. anyway, it was dope. dope flow, lots of creativity. good verse.

Cuz us Giants clench #1 and our grip has just tightened
Football? No but a team and yall will remember the Titans
^^ very dope.

ideal...

You want high calibur? its a matter uh fact, my battle-y raps
Leave you between techno and house...an actual TRANCE
^^ that was pretty cool

Fake you aint hear it, though, we know you're recieving the message
Breathe for a second....STOP BITCHING, and admit that GT IS THE VET LIST
^^ very dope way to wrap up this whole collab

your last couple solo efforts had much better flow then this verse did but it was still smooth in here. some good lines. overall solid verse.

okay, so you all held your own. i enjoyed the read. dope collab gt.
respect.
__________________
From the heart.

AVARICE is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-31-2005, 11:33 AM   #9 (permalink)
This Is Africa
 
Criticize's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: I Turn U To a Failure,Now How You Gonna Explain U got Ko'd By A Mc In Australia
Posts: 8,481
Rep Power: 15 Criticize will become famous soon enough
Send a message via AIM to Criticize Send a message via Yahoo to Criticize
Default

Crit, your stupidity's monumental - check this
I'll eat your whole fucking nation for my continental breakfast
^
...um....is there something im missing

Beef with Shred, but you know Kinch is proof of God
Ain't a single decent head who posts in the booth you mod
...that wasnt a diss was it,

Saying I'm on YOUR DICK? My pens have to write truth
KID YOU EDITED MY POST SO IT SAYS THAT I LIKE YOU

...cool...but not hitting too hard.

Rage incarnate's above Crit, guess I'm angry over nothing
Try the Blade, your stolen belt will maybe hold ya guts in

...best so far
Shook dykes is slain quick cause Shred is faster
"Love Doctor" look like the gay kid from Wedding Crashers

...nice, you can have tha one.


You replace Sto's steel fist? You a hand broken right in two
No one on earth could stand holdin' mics with you

....shouldnt have dropped that trash
Dying in picture battles with whiny and bitter malice
The only "vet" nobody thinks has the tiniest bit of talent

..1st bar, you have already said on rf how u find pics in my wars funny.
2nd line uh ok i guess.
It's like we share profiles--cause your name in Shred's too
Queers is reckless, here's the next kid from Flava's best crew

o.k


this would be dope for a semi, but i was expecting more. from rfs self proclaimed writing talent. il murder you shortly.


but yea, put this piece in the hall of fame. il quote other kids later.
__________________
RapFlava is Starving For SomeBodies Thats Sick,
And Right Now? Either Their Garbage Or I Taught Them To Spit
Criticize is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-31-2005, 03:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
That Death Shit
 
Contract's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 2,346
Rep Power: 6 Contract will become famous soon enough
Default

^What the fuck kind of shit is coming into the thread and doing some kind of "breakdown" for only the part of my verse in which I dissed you? Stay the fuck out, no one is even a little bit interested in your opinion - you are WACK. So it's not going to mean much to a crew the worst member of which has three times your skill.
Contract is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2005, 02:34 AM   #11 (permalink)
gone
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: V-One- 8
Posts: 324
Rep Power: 4 SpayShis. is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to SpayShis. Send a message via Yahoo to SpayShis.
Default

Ok.. I Cant Leave Proper Feed Right Now But ALl I Know Is..

1. Kinch - You Murderd Crit In This, I Dont Care What Anyone Says.. Your WHole Verse Was Fire, Imaginry And Everything.. Continental Line Was Fire.. The Robe Megaphone Line Was Nice.. Just everything..

2. Inn depth - pretty sick verse, had me stuck the whole way.. i felt that on some of your bars you came off on the rhyme scheme, but managed to keep my flowin with it.. just great writing on your behalf.

3. Phade - First OM i seen from you, and im really impressed.. Great Imagry like kinch's verse, and i see you were getting your shots rather statements out to h20.. Your flow is so unique(good unique lol) had me hooked the whole way, i didnt fall off once..

4. kahlm - you came real nice too, no real standouts except for your flow and vokab.. your verse was real good, just not as hot as what i usually see from you..

5. I dizzy - Lovin your verse man, so many great lines i cant really quote them because it would be your whole verse, it was unbelievable the way things connected and not for the sake of connecting. feel me?.. You are an amazing writer..


I vote this for Hall Of Fame, Best Piece I Seen On Rf In A Hot Minute..
GT on Top..
SpayShis. is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2005, 06:28 AM   #12 (permalink)
broken pockets
 
Phade's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: on the zafu
Posts: 2,060
Rep Power: 7 Phade will become famous soon enough
Send a message via AIM to Phade
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Criticize
no im just showing how your diss youve been talking about for weeks, sucked.

thank you come again.

and phade go back to writing story pieces,
I've deleted your post to save room, but as you can see the quote is still here for all to see.

First off, it was a joke with Ideal, who is co-incidentally a better writer than you. I'm not even getting into this net-beef or ego contest thing that a few of you got going on. In fact, read my verse and it'll make a few things clear for you. I don't need or want respect from someone like you, your opinion is honestly worthless to me. However, if 'go back to writing story pieces' is your best insult, I'll take it as a compliment. So now that I haven't chumped or attempted to chump you, we can both be happy. I'll be happy knowing that what you might say won't bother me, and that I no longer have a reason to interract with you even on the most primitive levels. You can be happy and tell all your e-friends I am indeed intimidated by you and your writing skill and you can now focus your full attention on the whole Shred vs Crit thing.

Thanks for all the feed guys.
__________________
onward, forward, don't step backward
Phade is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2005, 03:10 PM   #13 (permalink)
 
Inn Deppth's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: The Galaxy
Posts: 7,077
Rep Power: 15 Inn Deppth has a spectacular aura aboutInn Deppth has a spectacular aura about
Send a message via AIM to Inn Deppth Send a message via Yahoo to Inn Deppth
Default

I wanted to spend longer on my verse but I just wanted to turn something in and shake the rust off. Good looks on the feed.. ill hit some threads up once I come back later tonight
Inn Deppth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 09-01-2005, 07:35 PM   #14 (permalink)
That Death Shit
 
Contract's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 2,346
Rep Power: 6 Contract will become famous soon enough
Default

No way could you sleep on this.
Contract is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 09-03-2005, 01:54 AM   #15 (permalink)
Dont be minor...
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 1,564
Rep Power: 0 B.Major is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via AIM to B.Major
Default

So i see a couple ppl say this is Hall Of Fame status, yet its getting slept on =(.

Ill be glad to return the favor to anyone who leaves feed, so up this and leave links.

*EDIT, yo shred on this line

"forcing stagnant who write raps to recant them"
^its "forcing stagnant cats who write raps to recant them" =) EDIT*
__________________
See you hypocrites are confused, I dont rap for the thug spirit/
Its a love for the artform... i rap cause i love lyrics/




^get them speakers thumpin^

i feel like my feelings feel like they maybe feel intertwined





Last edited by iDeaL; 09-03-2005 at 01:59 AM.
B.Major is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)

 
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On
Forum Jump




All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:03 AM.



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0
Copyright © 2002 - 2008 Rapflava.com. All Rights Reserved.