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08-28-2008, 01:06 AM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch Black Tee Productions on tha beat..1st verse Brotha Fletch..2nd verse GTWIST..Hi Def n tha buildin ya digg.. FeedLinks
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08-28-2008, 04:41 AM
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| | Rede Between The Lines!!
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| Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch 1st dude's flow's pretty cool, kinda like Terrence Howard on Hustle And Flow. Emotion is cool, not feeling the beat though aint my type. lyrics are hmm but decent verse..
Twist, your shouting man. you can use emotion without shouting, flow's iight man, lyrics are getting better, but you still sticking with slang n shit, use some complexity fam. decent verse..
decent track - keep doing you man
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08-28-2008, 04:45 AM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch aye rede appreciate tha feedback mayne 1st off im not shoutin i think my vocals r a lil high u know peakin and shit but tha slang and all that thought it would fit tha track and all that but i feel u on mixing it up and all that..thanx again fa tha feed..
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08-28-2008, 07:01 AM
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| | Slaughter Game
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Rep Power: 11   | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch love the beat and sample.. shit is bounce and dro got that bangin swag,, fist guy iight come in with the bun b repeat than kind of snapping.. good delivery and emotion lyrics are basic but they work for the beat.. need to back of the mic he is giving it too much of his breathe producing feedback and pops.. but his verse was pretty decent..
next guy.. flow is on point delivery def got the snap style good emotion quality is the same as above.. lyrics got the job done but could use more so could the first verse.. def had your swag oon for the beat and it worked pretty well..
just the quality really needs some work.. practice and play with adlibs twist same with your boy.. they keep the verse from just passing by and make you stand out more.. always a bonus with good adlibs and dubs
nice drop if you haven't please return feed on my millie
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08-28-2008, 07:04 AM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch ^^aye thanx mayne..glad u liked tha beat a lot fo ppl locally here where im from love this song just cause its catchy and shit but yea i got u on quality that seems ta be tha down fall ta my tracks..and lyrics also simple but went wit tha beat u know..and i will work on adlibs and all that ish fam no doubt appreciate tha feedback and tha tyme u took ta listen..**i left feed already on millie..**
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08-28-2008, 09:08 PM
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| | grown, and still growing.
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Rep Power: 5  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch feelin' the dro sample, it fits the beat, got me rockin'...
first cat comes on straight, his voice is unique and the delivery is straight. the lyrics were cool, but i think you should turn the vocals up a little bit cus the beat's dominating your verse...maybe it's just the bass in the beat. but cool verse though.
twist comes on nice, i'm feelin' the flow and your lyrics are fitting for the track...it doesnt sound like youre yellin' to me, so i don't know what that's about. straight verse though...i think you shoulda kept the flow you were using when the beat broke down, cus that had me rockin' and brought a little more of that "commercial appeal" to the track.
overall, cool track...keep it up fellas. |
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08-28-2008, 11:28 PM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch ^^emcee thanx fa tha feed..i appreciate tha feedback and ya opinion mayne really glad u liked tha track thanx again tha tyme u took ta drop it and peep tha track..
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08-29-2008, 01:53 AM
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| | "Till its always 4:20."
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Rep Power: 10   | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch hahaha...this has a crazy sound...its like a sick ass play on bad quality...well it probably is bad quality...but its played off ssoooo nice...lol....this shit could get blasted....first cat got crazy flow...and you deff held it down...props....
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08-29-2008, 07:53 AM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch ^^aye tek wuts good mayne aye thanx fa tha feedback mayne..even tho at 1st i was lik huh while readin it but its coo none tha less glad u liked it..
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08-29-2008, 05:16 PM
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| | ..MoTiVaTiOnAl SpEaKeR...
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch this shit was even worse playboy
step ya game up
still uppin my post count
omg, why this nigga tryin to sound like he lil wayne? "yack yack yack, im yackin on my yackin yackin"
ya boy worse than you
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08-30-2008, 05:47 AM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
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Rep Power: 10  | Re: EveryBody Know Me ft Brotha Fletch wow..uppin
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