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Old 05-12-2008, 02:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I lost count of how many bars i spit, this is a ol skool drop, a couple years back ya dig, will return feed, hope you guys enjoy it.

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Old 05-12-2008, 06:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this is is straight as fuck, just needs to be remixed
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Old 05-13-2008, 03:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Sick ass flow lovin it
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Old 05-13-2008, 06:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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need to mix this shit my dude would have gone hard as an actual track..

flow is dope man and so is the delivery lyrics go hard, quality is what hurts the most if you nail that down shit will be much better
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Old 05-15-2008, 12:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Sick beat. Man, your flow is nice on the track. It just needs to be mixed a bit better, but overall it's a nice track
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Old 05-16-2008, 01:38 AM   #7 (permalink)
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freestyle ish..lik i free style but my style aint free..lol..droppin feed now

..organ n tha beginnin..wuts wit tha aol/aim welcome ish..lol that was random..who made this beat sound lik sum live instruments shit u know tha guitar sounds pretty ill drums r good too..lyrics r on point..delivery is pretty straight..and i do agree wit r.d. famous ya quality is kinda wut hurts u n this track is not bad but its not great u know right n tha middle..overall tho mayne i thought it was a fresh track..good ish
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Shit Was Ryte Homie Jus Need To Clean It Up A Bit
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beat greeeeeeezzzy... flow was off da hook... keep doinya ting b. im down fo collabs rappaZ NOW a dayz getttn illa and illa

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Old 05-23-2008, 08:49 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Default Re: Dirty SouF Freestyle

*Repling While Listening*..
Nice Choice Of A Beat..Has A Real Dirty South Vibe 2 It..
LOL @ The AOL Sounds In The Backround.. Put Your Stuff On Mute, The Sounds Take Away From Your Flow..
You Had A Good Consistant Flow.. Your Quality Could Be Better, There Was A Lot Of Dead Air..I Would Invest A Pop Filter..It's About $20, It Would Improve Your Quality Greatly..
Other Than That, It Was A Pretty Good Freestyle..
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Old 05-24-2008, 08:01 PM   #11 (permalink)
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thanx 4 the feed, im not sure what i was usin when i made this but i believe i did have a pop click filter, but then again i didn't have what i have now, knowledge nor otherwise, now i have both, lol, thanx
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Beat is dpe, Flow is nice..actually flow is killing it. Lyrics are nice...The quality ain't that good. But that ain't really matter you brought every other aspect. For a quick verse This shit was cool, Even know the flow was on, adding a hook and choppin it up a lil woulda made it more complete. Good shit though homie.

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ok

beats pretty tight

ya flows nice dogg, fasho, good delivery too, feelin tha lyrics some tight rhyme schemes too, yeah this shits tight homie, feelin it definatly

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This wasnt bad....alot of rhymes, few decent punches, decent mixtape freestyle..no topic..turned me off.

Ya flow was seasoned, and this Freeway beat was nasty. A personal favorite.

I need to hear you on somethin with a Hook to give an honest feed.

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Kinda corny to me...lotta lines like that.....little less corny and a little more direction would be the quick fix.


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flow is on point delivery is on point to swag
is there to you sound real confident on mic
lyrics good to. quality could be a lot better
you got your hi's to high this was a solid....
mixtape track keep doing your thing my dude
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