Deeper Shit !! !

[young i.c.e.]

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/tha-b...ks-139975.html (..Tha BoonDocks..)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/ideal...ke-139314.html (iDeal on the Hook...quick 16 from Christ (What its like))


ay, whats good?

i just threw some old tracks onto my new soundclick.
peep em, theyre pretty sick.

SoundClick artist: youngicehiphop - page with MP3 music downloads

[STRONGARM]

uppin..

[Christ]

You kinda sound like Eminem...Not quite as lyrically incline- but your presence is good. Both joints were creative. Some good hiphop.

[AVARICE]

listening to i wish... ooo i like that bassline. haha you really do sound like eminem. anyway, delivery could use a bit more conviction. flow is very simple but it flows well... you step it up a bit on the second verse. lyrics are cool, some real cool lines in here. chorus is simple yet very relatable and works well for that reason. im actually digging this track. good work man. delivery/emotion i would say are the main weaknesses that i would point out.
respect.

[Flow Central]

listening to i wish....
quality sounds good, presence is nice as well...emotion is comin nicely too
beat it smooth as hell....
lyrics are good, i wanna say "i wish i was a little bit taller, i wish i was a baller" lol....
this is a tight track fam, keep up!

[Smoke1life]

I Wish- Nice Bassline. WHOA, *looks around, "This Eminem in the infinite days?" Dude, you sound exactly like Em when he was young. The lyrics ain't quite up to par but your voice is exact lol. I ain't really feelin ya hook though. The "Fire In My Head Like A Pumpkin" was nice. lol, it made me laugh anyway.

The Pens Might- Decent multies in there. Kind of simple in your bar climax though. Just work on your vocab and shit and you will really be another Eminem. lol. Although I doubt thats the direction you wanna go. Hook was alright. Better then I wish.

good shit man, keep at it.