Con vs. Stockton

[Kaeo.Seru]

Rules:
10-12 bars
NO- feeding, biting, recycling, dickriding, hateing or FREEPOSTING in battle threads
Check ins due FRIDAY verses due tuseday. Voting ends friday
1st to 7 votes wins 4-0 KO up 4 after 1-1 TKO
ONLY MODS CAN DISCOUNT VOTES

[Stockton]

Check, goodluck

[Stockton]

A quick 10...

U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events
So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave
Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes
This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)
Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses
Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums
U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)
U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept
Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton
A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options

[Con]

xplanations: mental abuse leaves da patient wit impressions that their all negative...'i' am bad..'I' suck..'I' dont belong..'i' this, i that..all negative.



gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse
explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive
believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production
dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat
comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'
once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments
face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists
now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees
shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death

[Criticize]

ummm closest battle of the tourney, i gota give this to con just, because i counted how many good or ok lines you both had and it equals like 7-6 so i jusst gota edge con in here for the win def a nice battle and close as fuck i dont know who will win this but i gota vote for con more consistantly good punches. its a tough decision..



.....
been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events
So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes
This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)
U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept

A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options
....
gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse
explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive
believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production

comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'
face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists
now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees

[Plot]

STOCK
U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events
~played stock
So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
~nice!
This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave
~ok
Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes
~played.
This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)
~ok.
Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses
~NICE..that hit
Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums
~cool
U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)
~cool
U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept
~Ha, nice.
Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton
~ok
A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options
~Ha, played.
~real nice flow, but I seen U throw much better punches.

CON
gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse
~cool
explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
~Lol, cool
u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive
~ehh. not hard
believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production
~Nice, reel/reals played, but nice flip.
dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat
~heh, nice.
comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'
~ok
once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments
~ok
face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists
~ok
now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees
~nice, kinda already used the concept
shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death
~ehh

V-Con, Stock brought a nice flow, but Con outpunched.
Accept/or dont

[Stoic]

U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events

eh...aight

So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors

dope

This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave

no.

Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes

nah.

This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)

ehh... sub-par

Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses

no.. needs a punch.

Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums

ehh..

U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)

why would it debate the pull?

U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept

strait, kinda played, but nice wording.

Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton

no

A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options

ehh... sub-par

vs

gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse

this line has me thinking alot of questions... first off the I/EYE wp is played, secondly ... His self esteem is being hurt, then wouldn't it be an optical exam? otherwise the wp never comes into play... i dunno alot of this i dont get and i kinda blame the clustery wording... dont mean to be overly critical, but this wasn't working.


explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era

eh... i woulda said Dead Giveaway like Organ doners... but this doesn't really work.

u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive

no.

believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production

nah..

dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat

strait. but not real creative, just a good personal.

comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'

ehh...

once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments

I don't get this.

face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists

not creative.

now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees

strait.

shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death

again, i don't really get this.


Overall... this was a close battle could have gone either way, i really got a few of Cons punches lost in translation which hurt his verse in my eyes...
v- stock

[Stockton]

1-1

[H-B]

STOCK
U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events
Played
So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
Nice
This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave
Flow is off, I think u should have worded it :
This lame's gay, so many aliases, easy to nameplay
Fuck what you thot, my palm in ur top to see ur brain waves
-ehh..
-didnt like ur wording man, gotta work on that.. fucks the flow.

r plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes
Played
This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)
Decent
Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses
Decent personal.
Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums
Coo
U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)
Nice
U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept
Nice
Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton
Nice... Wording fucked again tho. fix the multie punch flow stock.
A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options
Decent, i didnt think it was played.

Seen better punches from u but it was nice.

CON
gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse
....decent

explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
Nice wordplay..

u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive
..stretched like benz's, naw man

believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production
wtf.. I aint feelin this shit man.

dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat
WTF is up with all these searched dictionary words dawg? ..wack
-Didnt like wordplay either..

comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'
Nice
-like how u used the multies.
once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments
Nice
face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists
naw.
now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees
ehh
shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death
ehh

Vote- Stock

Overall was just way better imo. shit was stretched and some of the words he was useing wasnt needed at all.

-come more simple.

[kallywood]

U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events

yeah good

So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors

Ehhh

This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave

nope

Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes

decent

This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)


like it
Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses

nope

Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums

Ehh.

U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)


naaa

U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept

nicee

Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton

no

A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options


nopers

Con

gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse

sketchy

explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era

Sorta sketchy again

u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive

no way

believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production

hot bar

dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat

dunno if its a true statement but nice

comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'

ehh

once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments

decent

face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists

No way

now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees

nice

shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death

wtf?


V-con.

i enjoyed it and his punches were worked out better i believe

[Stockton]

lmao, 2-2

[LiL.RiLL]

Stock:
U been here for ages, and people barely hearda u yet
I thread knives, that'll give ya head lines, like current events
played
So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
Sick
This lame's gay, so many aliases, its too easy to nameplay
Fuck what u thot, put my palm in ur top to see ur brain wave
Cool
Ur plain gay, save ur words, cuz i dont listen to fakes
Watch me leave Con underground, like prison escapes
Played
This kid'll get ate, ill run up and rush ya surface
And i bet Con lay still, like construction workers (steel/still)
Cool
Braggin bout ur wins, like u among the bosses
Yea he got the most Ws, and the most losses
Good Personal
Dude cant even say "The", now who's gay as him?
Con needs to hang up the ropes, like gymnasiums
Cool
U joined 3 years ago, and duke still aint respected
My triggers 'Debatin the pull' like SC and Texas (Pull/poll)
Should Of Related To This
U cant even think like me, ur knowledge is over dreamt
U wont make it to the finals, like college kids over slept
This Could Of Been Dope
Ull prolly spit over 10, but the min. will send a coffin
Cuz this vet too old for the center, like Kenny Lofton
Cool
A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options
Cool
-----------------
Con:
gentle on cue, beg ya victory? Stock'll recieve a sentimental refuse
ya verses create more 'negative 'I'/eye views' than post mental abuse
Ok
explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
Sick
u punch suck! shit talkin and backin-shit-up aint even closely relative
nobody'll admit to 'Stock's illness' unless da findings influenza positive
Should of related this
believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production
Cool
dont weigh shit round here, witout ya boi, u a tyrranical aristocrat
ya status? quite 'dead witout Rhiver's' n its not botanical habitat
Missed Personal, He's Rollin Right Now
comin wit a set stack, cons poundin ya top till theres a wet crack
u kno, i'd apply time zone charges but ya skills already a 'set back'
no
once ya joints bent, black and blue, u'd kno what my points meant
my over-hand's got u 'in' for da Bleeding' like brake appoinments
eh
face fists rearrangin ya frame, i body break includin all jests
n grabs 'pickin ya bones carelesslly' than rushing archeologists
eh
now on a constant flee, Kap's da reason u been a blatant thief
coz after partnership, ya value 'took toll to da heart' like transplant fees
took toll to the heart? eh
shamed ya set, coz u passed to semi's dont mean ya named a vet
since my bats'll have 'Bruise's take in couple parts' like The Game of Death
Cool


Eh, pretty even battle Con had some hot lines and Stock Had Some Hot Lines.. Then Again Stock Had Some Played Lines And Con Had Some Iffy Ones.. So Basically Im Breakin It Down Like This.


(2 best bars from both)
explainin ya error, conceilin ya shit talent wont eliminate Terra
stop hiding! ya handicapps a 'dead giveaway' like da black plague era
&
believing u da shit? dem shoot brags da reason for ya lifes reduction
and bullet talks? all ya gun claims 'never reel' like digital production

Vs

So many guns n blades, im like the glock/razor wizard
But u'll just fall to my fist, like rock, paper, scissors
&
A purple jazz jersey, closest thing to bruisin Stockton
This bitch couldnt get a title, with his user options


V - Stockton

[Con]

lmfao^ loyal to da death.

2-2.

[Stoic]

i'm saying 3-3. haven't seen reason to discount any, because lets face it... you need 7 to win, and if this were to hypothetically go to 6-7, who'd you want voting on this?

Kahlm has the final say, though.

[Stockton]

"At anytime, u can discredit a crew vote"

3-2