CompaQ Vs DeusPade

[Criticize]

6- 8 bars, vote on 3 battles or get docked, no show and get booted normal rules
you know the drill

[$leepy]

Aight..i'm here....i'll get links when i post my verse

[$leepy]

wyf is tha^^^

[Deuspade]

im here,,,

[Deuspade]

yo ima drop tomorrow,, it dont matter who first...

[Deuspade]

ima drop my verse then vote,,,

here we go..

you had a good run now its time for me to hurt your name//
messin with me you ''cant draw a win(d)'' like you sketchin hurricaines//

i get heated easy so when i start to throw flames,, break//
i spit flames you can see my grill light up like im attached to a propane tank//

i know you long to win but too bad you find it hard to win//
theyll never ''coin ya phrases'' so with him youll never see ''com-on-cents(common sense)''//

you aint shyt and if you come sideways then the tools will spray//
ill easily put the scope on niccas like im fightin tooth decay//

im a problem child,,'' period'',, I dont take no mess buddy//
his rhymes make him sound like a ''pussy'' so ima leave ''co-tex bloody''//

this my house you got one time to beast and ima reach for the piece on tha mantle//
he turn his back and ima ''blow holes in him'' like ''breathin for a sea mammal//

its over im the dutchie thats eager to wrap herbs//
up fast cuz ''pac'' is the result of me pushin his ''cap backwards''//

[$leepy]

Damn i forgot about this battle..quick ass key..its wack but its a verse lol..

Callin Me Out, Thinkin You Big, Gettn Packed Down Like Soft Snow
You Runnin Low Like Short Midgets Giving Blow Jobs, OH No
You Couldnt Have A Good Flow Even If You Played In Dawson Creek
Got New Friends That You Cant See, Killin You Like Hide And Seek
Puttin A End To You For Good Leavin Black And Blues Like Permanent Markers
Havin To Put Pressure On You Like Meetin New Families In The Movies Meet The Fockers
Put An End To Ya Family In The Darkness, Cuz You Livin In My House (Movie Darkness)
Got Him In Check Like Nike Baskeballs Being Used And Gettin Bounced
Hang You Up Like Jesus Cuz I'm Runnin A-Cross This Dude
Cuz I'm Rude, Takin This Battle Easily Like Bums Gettin Sued
Servin You Like A Dinner Waiter, I'm In Charge Like Earths Creator
Puttin A Lie Dictator To Ya Head To Prove Your Wack And I'm Greater


get links..i'll get my links soon

[kallywood]

this battle won.
























For most terrible battle ever..


Vote deus

better punches

[Plot]

DEUS
you had a good run now its time for me to hurt your name//
messin with me you ''cant draw a win(d)'' like you sketchin hurricaines//
~Win/winds played, but thats a nice flip with the draw. good
i get heated easy so when i start to throw flames,, break//
i spit flames you can see my grill light up like im attached to a propane tank//
~Nah, played & braggin
i know you long to win but too bad you find it hard to win//
theyll never ''coin ya phrases'' so with him youll never see ''com-on-cents(common sense)''//
~? what! this bar is terrible. dosent even rhyme in the slightest
you aint shyt and if you come sideways then the tools will spray//
ill easily put the scope on niccas like im fightin tooth decay//
~tryin to get this- is niccas being flipt? Scope? nah
im a problem child,,'' period'',, I dont take no mess buddy//
his rhymes make him sound like a ''pussy'' so ima leave ''co-tex bloody''//
~eh, its played as. but I'll give you a point for the nameplay
this my house you got one time to beast and ima reach for the piece on tha mantle//
he turn his back and ima ''blow holes in him'' like ''breathin for a sea mammal//
~cool.
its over im the dutchie thats eager to wrap herbs//
up fast cuz ''pac'' is the result of me pushin his ''cap backwards''//
~eh, bit forced, but ok.
~I thought u'd drop fire after readin my b'down.
Your wack lines far outweighed your good ones.

COMPAQ
(you dont need links- just vote on this weeks battles in the lleague!)
Callin Me Out, Thinkin You Big, Gettn Packed Down Like Soft Snow
You Runnin Low Like Short Midgets Giving Blow Jobs, OH No
~no no no. dosent work at all. short midgets? how does run/blow jobs relate.
You Couldnt Have A Good Flow Even If You Played In Dawson Creek
Got New Friends That You Cant See, Killin You Like Hide And Seek
~wack
Puttin A End To You For Good Leavin Black And Blues Like Permanent Markers
Havin To Put Pressure On You Like Meetin New Families In The Movies Meet The Fockers
~ugh
Put An End To Ya Family In The Darkness, Cuz You Livin In My House (Movie Darkness)
Got Him In Check Like Nike Baskeballs Being Used And Gettin Bounced
~ehh, no. check/nike was almost something
Hang You Up Like Jesus Cuz I'm Runnin A-Cross This Dude
Cuz I'm Rude, Takin This Battle Easily Like Bums Gettin Sued
~nah, just nothing creative here- Jesus/cross is soo played.
Servin You Like A Dinner Waiter, I'm In Charge Like Earths Creator
Puttin A Lie Dictator To Ya Head To Prove Your Wack And I'm Greater
~no, and its lie DETECTOR.
~Im sorry man, but you need alot of practise.
V-DEUS.

[Malone]

DEUS


you had a good run now its time for me to hurt your name//
messin with me you ''cant draw a win(d)'' like you sketchin hurricain
*Played Wordplay
i get heated easy so when i start to throw flames,, break//
i spit flames you can see my grill light up like im attached to a propane tank//
*Self Rep
i know you long to win but too bad you find it hard to win//
theyll never ''coin ya phrases'' so with him youll never see ''com-on-cents(common sense)''//
*Terrible
you aint shyt and if you come sideways then the tools will spray//
ill easily put the scope on niccas like im fightin tooth decay//
*Played
im a problem child,,'' period'',, I dont take no mess buddy//
his rhymes make him sound like a ''pussy'' so ima leave ''co-tex bloody''//
*Played
this my house you got one time to beast and ima reach for the piece on tha mantle//
he turn his back and ima ''blow holes in him'' like ''breathin for a sea mammal//
*Eh
its over im the dutchie thats eager to wrap herbs//
up fast cuz ''pac'' is the result of me pushin his ''cap backwards''//
*Naw

COMPAQ


Callin Me Out, Thinkin You Big, Gettn Packed Down Like Soft Snow
You Runnin Low Like Short Midgets Giving Blow Jobs, OH No
*no
You Couldnt Have A Good Flow Even If You Played In Dawson Creek
Got New Friends That You Cant See, Killin You Like Hide And Seek
*No
Puttin A End To You For Good Leavin Black And Blues Like Permanent Markers
Havin To Put Pressure On You Like Meetin New Families In The Movies Meet The Fockers
*No
Put An End To Ya Family In The Darkness, Cuz You Livin In My House (Movie Darkness)
Got Him In Check Like Nike Baskeballs Being Used And Gettin Bounced
*No
Hang You Up Like Jesus Cuz I'm Runnin A-Cross This Dude
Cuz I'm Rude, Takin This Battle Easily Like Bums Gettin Sued
*No
Servin You Like A Dinner Waiter, I'm In Charge Like Earths Creator
Puttin A Lie Dictator To Ya Head To Prove Your Wack And I'm Greater
*No

V - D
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[Con]

v=Deuce, jus was better, eryone else explained it.

[$leepy]

good battle..i'll get links when i get home..that wasnt my best..i had alot of other battles to do in the battle booth...but i aint gonna complain..good battle..get links too deus

[Ruck]

its over im the dutchie thats eager to wrap herbs//
up fast cuz ''pac'' is the result of me pushin his ''cap backwards''//

VS

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vote: first person..

weak battle u two..

[Wore Tyme]

you had a good run now its time for me to hurt your name//
messin with me you ''cant draw a win(d)'' like you sketchin hurricaines//
Bad Opener
i get heated easy so when i start to throw flames,, break//
i spit flames you can see my grill light up like im attached to a propane tank//
Good
i know you long to win but too bad you find it hard to win//
theyll never ''coin ya phrases'' so with him youll never see ''com-on-cents//
Good
you aint shyt and if you come sideways then the tools will spray//
ill easily put the scope on niccas like im fightin tooth decay//
Nice
im a problem child,,'' period'',, I dont take no mess buddy//
his rhymes make him sound like a ''pussy'' so ima leave ''co-tex bloody''//
Fairly Good
this my house you got one time to beast and ima reach for the piece on tha mantle//
he turn his back and ima ''blow holes in him'' like ''breathin for a sea mammal//
Nice
its over im the dutchie thats eager to wrap herbs//
up fast cuz ''pac'' is the result of me pushin his ''cap backwards''//Good


Callin Me Out, Thinkin You Big, Gettn Packed Down Like Soft Snow
You Runnin Low Like Short Midgets Giving Blow Jobs, OH No
Not Bad
You Couldnt Have A Good Flow Even If You Played In Dawson Creek
Got New Friends That You Cant See, Killin You Like Hide And Seek
Okay...
Puttin A End To You For Good Leavin Black And Blues Like Permanent Markers
Havin To Put Pressure On You Like Meetin New Families In The Movies Meet The Fockers
Nah
Put An End To Ya Family In The Darkness, Cuz You Livin In My House
Got Him In Check Like Nike Baskeballs Being Used And Gettin Bounced
Nah
Hang You Up Like Jesus Cuz I'm Runnin A-Cross This Dude
Cuz I'm Rude, Takin This Battle Easily Like Bums Gettin Sued
Nah
Servin You Like A Dinner Waiter, I'm In Charge Like Earths Creator
Puttin A Lie Dictator To Ya Head To Prove Your Wack And I'm Greater
Good


Overall Vote: Deuspade
Better punches and better flow