Charlie Hustle vs Lyrikal

[Criticize]

6- 8 bars, vote on 3 battles or get docked, no show and get booted normal rules
you know the drill

[kallywood]

check and mate

[Hooligan]

check, like i ran outta bills.

I gotta drop 3 links on this?

[Hooligan]

K, thanks..

[kallywood]

Match my 6...keyin it dont feel like i need to go the eight with you

charlie hustle aka pistol pete

Damn Your entered the realm Kally a soldier like val kilm
first to the kill watch charlie stumble quicker than a chaplin film
Dudes laggin get MURKED execution style im knife-n-maskin
your heart and your skills like old cartoon films, petes dragon(draggin)
idiot think the lyrical one is underground? you dunno what knowledge is
take it or leave it dickryda, you suck pap like a twisted gyneacologist
Half way through madness droppin keys have your body droppin degrees
Aroud christmas time the way i make you give to your knees(niece)
Kallys a BEAST! Your noting on my level trust me it aint nuttin
Nowadays even cassidys a hustler...You think thats sayin somethin?
Put a en to you quick eat emcees one by one on some cannibal shit
label? ill give you an L, P like def jux cuttin heads off their list

[Hooligan]

You Spit Short, Is Your Goal To Lose? You Got Awkward Ambitions//
He Spit "Six", But When I Put The "Nine" To Him, He'll Be In Awkward Positions//("69" sex position)

When The Gun Talk, It Speak Wonders, You Should Hear It Shout//
I Dont Plaguerize But Yo, Ima About To Take Lyriks Out//

This The Secret Flow, And You The First To See..//
How I Destroyed Kal (Cal) Like I Bombed A University//( "Cal" is short for a college in California)

Imma A Smart Nigga, I Tote Gats, Only Fools Be Scrappin//
But....On The Real LyrikalLaws(loss) Like Rules To Rappin'//

Its Easy.. I Bagged His Girl The First Night When i Came Thru//
I Had Her Jumpin Up And Down More Times Than The Letters In His Name Do//

He Just Another Whiteboy Trynna Imitate A Movie He Dun' Seen//
A 8 Mile Wannabe, He Still One Notch Below Cuz The Area Code Was 313!/( he's lyrikal 312..)

[Plot]

KAL
Damn Your entered the realm Kally a soldier like val kilm
first to the kill watch charlie stumble quicker than a chaplin film
~ok name diss
Dudes laggin get MURKED execution style im knife-n-maskin
your heart and your skills like old cartoon films, petes dragon(draggin)
~eh, av. name diss.
idiot think the lyrical one is underground? you dunno what knowledge is
take it or leave it dickryda, you suck pap like a twisted gyneacologist
~lol. gross Kal.
Half way through madness droppin keys have your body droppin degrees
Aroud christmas time the way i make you give to your knees(niece)
~heh, coo wplay.
Kallys a BEAST! Your noting on my level trust me it aint nuttin
Nowadays even cassidys a hustler...You think thats sayin somethin?
~nah
Put a en to you quick eat emcees one by one on some cannibal shit
label? ill give you an L, P like def jux cuttin heads off their list
~ok close, gettin played

P.P.
You Spit Short, Is Your Goal To Lose? You Got Awkward Ambitions//
He Spit "Six", But When I Put The "Nine" To Him, He'll Be In Awkward Positions//
~eh, sounds gay
When The Gun Talk, It Speak Wonders, You Should Hear It Shout//
I Dont Plaguerize But Yo, Ima About To Take Lyriks Out//
~ok namelay
This The Secret Flow, And You The First To See..//
How I Destroyed Kal (Cal) Like I Bombed A University//
~Nice
Imma A Smart Nigga, I Tote Gats, Only Fools Be Scrappin//
But....On The Real LyrikalLaws(loss) Like Rules To Rappin'//
~needs more, ok
Its Easy.. I Bagged His Girl The First Night When i Came Thru//
I Had Her Jumpin Up And Down More Times Than The Letters In His Name Do//
~nah
He Just Another Whiteboy Trynna Imitate A Movie He Dun' Seen//
A 8 Mile Wannabe, He Still One Notch Below Cuz The Area Code Was 313!/
~nah.

V-Kal. Pete fell off.

[4got10]

Damn Your entered the realm Kally a soldier like val kilm
first to the kill watch charlie stumble quicker than a chaplin film
^Lol nice, good nameplay 4/5

Dudes laggin get MURKED execution style im knife-n-maskin
your heart and your skills like old cartoon films, petes dragon(draggin)
^LOL film buff i see 4/5

idiot think the lyrical one is underground? you dunno what knowledge is
take it or leave it dickryda, you suck pap like a twisted gyneacologist
^Eh decent, wording is messed up 3/5

Half way through madness droppin keys have your body droppin degrees
Aroud christmas time the way i make you give to your knees(niece)
^No. lol sorry but even to me this is wack. 1/5

Kallys a BEAST! Your noting on my level trust me it aint nuttin
Nowadays even cassidys a hustler...You think thats sayin somethin?
^Eh decent. No real punch imo 3/5

Put a en to you quick eat emcees one by one on some cannibal shit
label? ill give you an L, P like def jux cuttin heads off their list
^Lol nice, 4/5

Total - 19/30 Multies mutlies multies, :) only thing yur missing

Pistol::

You Spit Short, Is Your Goal To Lose? You Got Awkward Ambitions//
He Spit "Six", But When I Put The "Nine" To Him, He'll Be In Awkward Positions//("69" sex position)
^You only spit six bars too, no punch 1/5

When The Gun Talk, It Speak Wonders, You Should Hear It Shout//
I Dont Plaguerize But Yo, Ima About To Take Lyriks Out//
^Doesn't make sense, plagurize and take lyriks out... could be worded ALOT better 2/5

This The Secret Flow, And You The First To See..//
How I Destroyed Kal (Cal) Like I Bombed A University//( "Cal" is short for a college in California)
^Cal (tech or State) Is a university, not college FYI. 3/5 decent, but no real punch

Imma A Smart Nigga, I Tote Gats, Only Fools Be Scrappin//
But....On The Real LyrikalLaws(loss) Like Rules To Rappin'//
^Wording, 2/5... But on the real Lyrikal Laws uphold the voter's judgement, woulda been better

Its Easy.. I Bagged His Girl The First Night When i Came Thru//
I Had Her Jumpin Up And Down More Times Than The Letters In His Name Do//
^Second line is str8, like the nAmE jumpin letters play 3/5

He Just Another Whiteboy Trynna Imitate A Movie He Dun' Seen//
A 8 Mile Wannabe, He Still One Notch Below Cuz The Area Code Was 313!/
^Lol second line is dope, but doesn't connect well with your wording. 3/5

Total - 12/30 Punches/Wording of need to be fixed. And through in some mutlies

V-Lyrikal

Return the fav. when Dopar Drops.

[Lyfe]

Damn Your entered the realm Kally a soldier like val kilm
first to the kill watch charlie stumble quicker than a chaplin film

^nice

Dudes laggin get MURKED execution style im knife-n-maskin
your heart and your skills like old cartoon films, petes dragon(draggin)

^sic

idiot think the lyrical one is underground? you dunno what knowledge is
take it or leave it dickryda, you suck pap like a twisted gyneacologist

^nice

Half way through madness droppin keys have your body droppin degrees
Aroud christmas time the way i make you give to your knees(niece)

worded bad but an sold diss

Kallys a BEAST! Your noting on my level trust me it aint nuttin
Nowadays even cassidys a hustler...You think thats sayin somethin?

nah

Put a en to you quick eat emcees one by one on some cannibal shit
label? ill give you an L, P like def jux cuttin heads off their list

sic

Total - 19/30 Multies mutlies multies, :) only thing yur missing

Pistol::

You Spit Short, Is Your Goal To Lose? You Got Awkward Ambitions//
He Spit "Six", But When I Put The "Nine" To Him, He'll Be In Awkward Positions//("69" sex position)

^ehh

When The Gun Talk, It Speak Wonders, You Should Hear It Shout//
I Dont Plaguerize But Yo, Ima About To Take Lyriks Out//

nice

This The Secret Flow, And You The First To See..//
How I Destroyed Kal (Cal) Like I Bombed A University//( "Cal" is short for a college in California)

seen this b4 it except diff this is ehh

Imma A Smart Nigga, I Tote Gats, Only Fools Be Scrappin//
But....On The Real LyrikalLaws(loss) Like Rules To Rappin'//

pretty good word play

Its Easy.. I Bagged His Girl The First Night When i Came Thru//
I Had Her Jumpin Up And Down More Times Than The Letters In His Name Do//

nah

He Just Another Whiteboy Trynna Imitate A Movie He Dun' Seen//
A 8 Mile Wannabe, He Still One Notch Below Cuz The Area Code Was 313!/

aight

chuck you came decent kally overpowered you tho keep elevating fam

V-Lyrika

[Con]

v=Kal..erything else been explained