 re: Champ Belt: Criticize Wins via NoteBook No-Show
i dont mind posting a full verse even if you noshow coz il put it in the openmic sect for feedback
that old street cypher braggy criticize style.
"PERFECTION FLAWLESS"
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my pens a poisonous arrow that blast through pages see.......
and n on the top10 list i got more re;ferrals
than the actors managers emails to the casting agency/
i roll with a crew of terrorists performing black ops,
with fire at our side ready to strike like a match box
your a stero type like a fat cop, still learning to rap hott,
while im w/ Jolie on the 'big screen' like 'shaqs block/
money talks and iv got so much my pocket sings,
my fans
always check when da ace drops like safe playing pocket kings/4
and if your checking for dopeness i hope that you hear these,
coz i been creating fresh shit while you were reading darwins theories/
u girls my dick taker she see's me as a dictator in a sick place,
she takes dick then gossips to her sick mates n dictates how my dick tastes/
my lines are sickly laced w/ sars and ul die as it rise,
i doubt you can live w/ these bars like prisoners who try suicide/
and i got hoes last night i fucked 3 models with lights on,
while the only type you got are 'roles' u model your life on/8
mics strong; n i got sick lines for thugs on the street,
my lines are 'off the LEDGER' like the drugs did to keith/
half of hells heat evaporates whenever we flow,
i got the foul lines that will send you to the free throw/
nah scratch that forget that last bar im sick when i clash w/ the dead,
and i got the fowl wordplay like a chicken that hatch from the egg/
a decade ago these latin cats got out of line i had 2come down harder than sons,
fat joe and his crew begged 4 forgivness but i just couldnt pardon the pun/
yea i said it.
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RapFlava is Starving For SomeBodies Thats Sick,
And Right Now? Either Their Garbage Or I Taught Them To Spit
Last edited by Criticize; 08-02-2008 at 11:47 AM.
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