06-17-2008, 06:26 PM
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| | THE DEFINITION OF RAW
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| Champ Belt(Beyond6x): ((Beyond))(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches 12 Bars Due Friday. Vote On Other Battles. |
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06-18-2008, 01:09 PM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches here |
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06-18-2008, 01:35 PM
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| | The Likely Villian
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches Good luck, Lyfe.
__________________ . . It’s life. It’s death. It’s the ditch withered beyond it.  GT |
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06-21-2008, 01:11 PM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches been here, waitin to see what you would spit.... where's ya verse muh dude? mines here
by the end of today |
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06-21-2008, 01:43 PM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches If you got urs, 12 bars? |
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06-21-2008, 02:22 PM
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches here's 10 didn't like a couple lines i had
Beyond says he resides in the Uninhabitable, a place Unfit for habitation
Fallible, false emcee, only time he fucks wit a magnum was at graduation
Suffocate his dreams and rhymes like he was Concealed In a picture
Dis bitch like niggaz to read shyt on his ass, call him a bumper sticker
I bump this nigga, from the number 1 spot n crush em wit my NIKE
Despite me, dis herb really bite his thumb at me n call that to spite me
I call you unlikely, to ever take this belt back once I confiscate ya dream
Don't matter if ur caucasion or hispanic you soft n white like ice n sour cream
Write my topicals on ya left side for me, lyk broadway call it the West Side Story
Before me, dis bitch only did inventory, now he's my bitch, peep my lyrical SORI
Maybe ya wonderin why I keep callin dis nigga a bitch, just look at his sig
He got a bitch repin his shyt always knew he really suck dick rockin a wig
Split ya wig and leave you denounced, kill you and leave unannounced
ReaLyfe, learn how to pronounce, cause it's bout to be the brand stamped all over ya house
Nigga was caught fuckin a pig on several accounts, both blue n whites and the oink
All his verses end at the same point, his shyt don't connect cause it got an artificial joint
Like he use the alignment button on word, dis nigga's rhymes is so old he still say word
Yeah my shyt's a little unheard, yeah niggaz heard about you but i'm still undeterred
Chug my slugz it'll give you deathly protein, I'm pro-teen, but you need a reality CHECK
Gun deck aimed all around your full vest, and wreck your rep step-by-step, then reality's NEXT |
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06-21-2008, 03:17 PM
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| | The Likely Villian
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches Quote: |
Originally Posted by ReaLyfe Diary of a snitch? that's going to be hard to get into character... sorry if i'm not a snitch and can't get into this character... | Informing is what you do, fear the Magnus death sentence.
I’d say this snitch has no class, but the genus Rattus says different.
I brandish death wishes, witness my stereo anthem tune.
If that’s the case, then the adage failure builds character CAN’T be true.
Bitching over deadlines with “eh” rhymes praying the time’s right.
So THAT’S why when dolls produce shit and cry people say they’re so Lyfelike!
Snatch optics with no questions asked - your death is in vain.
When I take out your I, there won’t be a Y… unless it’s your name.
9-10? That’s even too good for you when the famine and the plague’s brewed.
Your record next week’ll be dialed-down — but the ambulance won’t save you. :(
You have no fans when those long lines are gay and simply dire.
The only people ride-in a Stretch.. can afford to pay the limo driver.
I.. WILL.. NOT.. LOSE.. shown by how I damage your heathen seal.
When I blast your soul from the Heavens it’ll prove you can’t handle my ethereal.
Your wack crew died and the amount of time I’m paying it’s informal.
Fuck 7th and Dotta, I’ll bring it up ‘til the end of time like raising an immortal. Quote: |
Originally Posted by ReaLyfe oh aiight then.... i see you Beyond.... I see you....
play wit 7th's balls? | I.E. stuck together ‘til I plucked your feathers, Daffy at the fall.
When it comes to riding dick, it’s obvious that you’ll have a ball.
You’ll be chasing my rank into old age, fatigue deathly in your glands.
You’ll be Walken as a father with me telling you to Catch Me If You Can.
It’s a guarantee you’ll be comatose, breathless, and catalyzed.
A lot of cords and plugs is so sure-fire, your deathbed has hazard signs. †
It was scary, dude, how ‘Nym buried you from the Romans to the Greek.
If I said, “Acura RL,” he’d tell me he’s not a bitch, but someone who drove one to defeat.
__________________ . . It’s life. It’s death. It’s the ditch withered beyond it.  GT
Last edited by Beyond; 06-21-2008 at 03:21 PM.
Reason: Forgot word.
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06-21-2008, 06:29 PM
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| | The holster roaster.
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Rep Power: 2   | Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches Beyond says he resides in the Uninhabitable, a place Unfit for habitation
Fallible, false emcee, only time he fucks wit a magnum was at graduation
-Haha, alright. Kinda.
Suffocate his dreams and rhymes like he was Concealed In a picture
Dis bitch like niggaz to read shyt on his ass, call him a bumper sticker
-Nah
I bump this nigga, from the number 1 spot n crush em wit my NIKE
Despite me, dis herb really bite his thumb at me n call that to spite me
-Nah
I call you unlikely, to ever take this belt back once I confiscate ya dream
Don't matter if ur caucasion or hispanic you soft n white like ice n sour cream
-Nah
Write my topicals on ya left side for me, lyk broadway call it the West Side Story
Before me, dis bitch only did inventory, now he's my bitch, peep my lyrical SORI
-ALright
Maybe ya wonderin why I keep callin dis nigga a bitch, just look at his sig
He got a bitch repin his shyt always knew he really suck dick rockin a wig
-Nah
Split ya wig and leave you denounced, kill you and leave unannounced
ReaLyfe, learn how to pronounce, cause it's bout to be the brand stamped all over ya house
-Nah
Nigga was caught fuckin a pig on several accounts, both blue n whites and the oink
All his verses end at the same point, his shyt don't connect cause it got an artificial joint
-Ehh
Like he use the alignment button on word, dis nigga's rhymes is so old he still say word
Yeah my shyt's a little unheard, yeah niggaz heard about you but i'm still undeterred
-Nah
Chug my slugz it'll give you deathly protein, I'm pro-teen, but you need a reality CHECK
Gun deck aimed all around your full vest, and wreck your rep step-by-step, then reality's NEXT
-Alright
Beyond
Informing is what you do, fear the Magnus death sentence.
I’d say this snitch has no class, but the genus Rattus says different.
-Nice
I brandish death wishes, witness my stereo anthem tune.
If that’s the case, then the adage failure builds character CAN’T be true.
-Haha, nice wording.
Bitching over deadlines with “eh” rhymes praying the time’s right.
So THAT’S why when dolls produce shit and cry people say they’re so Lyfelike!
-Nice
Snatch optics with no questions asked - your death is in vain.
When I take out your I, there won’t be a Y… unless it’s your name.
-Ehh, I dont like these.
9-10? That’s even too good for you when the famine and the plague’s brewed.
Your record next week’ll be dialed-down — but the ambulance won’t save you. :(
-Nice
You have no fans when those long lines are gay and simply dire.
The only people ride-in a Stretch.. can afford to pay the limo driver.
-lol, nice.
I.. WILL.. NOT.. LOSE.. shown by how I damage your heathen seal.
When I blast your soul from the Heavens it’ll prove you can’t handle my ethereal.
-Had to dic that last word, nice.
Your wack crew died and the amount of time I’m paying it’s informal.
Fuck 7th and Dotta, I’ll bring it up ‘til the end of time like raising an immortal.
-Epic
I.E. stuck together ‘til I plucked your feathers, Daffy at the fall.
When it comes to riding dick, it’s obvious that you’ll have a ball.
-Lawlz, this was great.
You’ll be chasing my rank into old age, fatigue deathly in your glands.
You’ll be Walken as a father with me telling you to Catch Me If You Can.
-Chris Walken? Alright.
It’s a guarantee you’ll be comatose, breathless, and catalyzed.
A lot of cords and plugs is so sure-fire, your deathbed has hazard signs. †
-Nice
It was scary, dude, how ‘Nym buried you from the Romans to the Greek.
If I said, “Acura RL,” he’d tell me he’s not a bitch, but someone who drove one to defeat.
-Alright
Vote - Beyond, harder verse with hits after hits. That's all. |
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06-22-2008, 10:30 AM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) ok then, doin' ya homework.... haha
0-1 uppin |
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06-22-2008, 12:58 PM
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| | O.M. Champ
Join Date: Jan 2007
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| Beyond says he resides in the Uninhabitable, a place Unfit for habitation
Fallible, false emcee, only time he fucks wit a magnum was at graduation
-ok
Suffocate his dreams and rhymes like he was Concealed In a picture
Dis bitch like niggaz to read shyt on his ass, call him a bumper sticker
--not feeling this
I bump this nigga, from the number 1 spot n crush em wit my NIKE
Despite me, dis herb really bite his thumb at me n call that to spite me
--see where your going but fell short..(nice Shakespere reference
I call you unlikely, to ever take this belt back once I confiscate ya dream
Don't matter if ur caucasion or hispanic you soft n white like ice n sour cream
--feeling the swag but the punch was basic..nice flow
Write my topicals on ya left side for me, lyk broadway call it the West Side Story
Before me, dis bitch only did inventory, now he's my bitch, peep my lyrical SORI
--not feelin this..stretched and used bitch twice in the same sentence..
Maybe ya wonderin why I keep callin dis nigga a bitch, just look at his sig
He got a bitch repin his shyt always knew he really suck dick rockin a wig
--see where u were going but the bitch thing is killing your verse..this is text not audio..
Split ya wig and leave you denounced, kill you and leave unannounced
ReaLyfe, learn how to pronounce, cause it's bout to be the brand stamped all over ya house
--ok thats what im talking about..best bar of your verse so far..a little loquacious for my taste but none the less very effective
Nigga was caught fuckin a pig on several accounts, both blue n whites and the oink
All his verses end at the same point, his shyt don't connect cause it got an artificial joint
--ehh..
Like he use the alignment button on word, dis nigga's rhymes is so old he still say word
Yeah my shyt's a little unheard, yeah niggaz heard about you but i'm still undeterred
--not much here
Chug my slugz it'll give you deathly protein, I'm pro-teen, but you need a reality CHECK
Gun deck aimed all around your full vest, and wreck your rep step-by-step, then reality's NEXT
--blah ending
Over all this was decent verse.i felt the swag in this..that had that cypher battle style to it..this would sound fire in audio..I dont feel that it projects the same in text..the lines are getting really stretched out...i liked your aggression..the direction of your ideas..i think the whole "nigga", slang in text thing kind of takes away from the creativity..but most def felt the your approach..just refine it..
Quote:
Originally Posted by ReaLyfe
Diary of a snitch? that's going to be hard to get into character... sorry if i'm not a snitch and can't get into this character...
Informing is what you do, fear the Magnus death sentence.
I’d say this snitch has no class, but the genus Rattus says different.
--ok nice opener..
I brandish death wishes, witness my stereo anthem tune.
If that’s the case, then the adage failure builds character CAN’T be true.
--lol..nice
Bitching over deadlines with “eh” rhymes praying the time’s right.
So THAT’S why when dolls produce shit and cry people say they’re so Lyfelike!
--ok nice..nice play on his name..
Snatch optics with no questions asked - your death is in vain.
When I take out your I, there won’t be a Y… unless it’s your name.
--decent wordplay..nice flip but kinda forced for you
9-10? That’s even too good for you when the famine and the plague’s brewed.
Your record next week’ll be dialed-down — but the ambulance won’t save you. :(
--lol kinda slick..like that..
You have no fans when those long lines are gay and simply dire.
The only people ride-in a Stretch.. can afford to pay the limo driver.
--lol..clowning
I.. WILL.. NOT.. LOSE.. shown by how I damage your heathen seal.
When I blast your soul from the Heavens it’ll prove you can’t handle my ethereal.
--ooh decent
Your wack crew died and the amount of time I’m paying it’s informal.
Fuck 7th and Dotta, I’ll bring it up ‘til the end of time like raising an immortal.
--oooh personal..last line was crazy..FUCK YOU TOOO..LOL good shit
Quote:
Originally Posted by ReaLyfe
oh aiight then.... i see you Beyond.... I see you....
play wit 7th's balls?
I.E. stuck together ‘til I plucked your feathers, Daffy at the fall.
When it comes to riding dick, it’s obvious that you’ll have a ball.
--ouch!!
You’ll be chasing my rank into old age, fatigue deathly in your glands.
You’ll be Walken as a father with me telling you to Catch Me If You Can.
--nicely worded..feeling this
It’s a guarantee you’ll be comatose, breathless, and catalyzed.
A lot of cords and plugs is so sure-fire, your deathbed has hazard signs. †
--ok feeling the aggression
It was scary, dude, how ‘Nym buried you from the Romans to the Greek.
If I said, “Acura RL,” he’d tell me he’s not a bitch, but someone who drove one to defeat
--decent closer...
Overall.....this was crazy..definitely felt this verse..there was sick aggression, personals all day....really noticed your direct attack on your opponent..very clear you did homework..always very affective..this was a nasty verse..wordplay was there..flow was on..nice job..
Overall this was a nice battle honestly..I enjoyed the read..Real came with the in your face more freestyle battle type verse..shit that would have headz stank faced in a cypher and then Beyond cam with raw personal based, in your face, text battle approach..that is where he definitely took the advantage..very well balanced verse..Beyond mixed a little bit of everything..connected on too many angles..very nice battle..nice job fellas..
oh yeah, Beyond, Fuck You too...lol..crazy dude..good shit
Vote-Beyond
Last edited by 7th Crescent; 06-23-2008 at 08:10 AM.
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06-22-2008, 07:23 PM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) Thanks for the vote fellaz...
we got pun ridin beyond's mad hard.... no pun intended... haha dis nigga just can't understand shyt... went thru my whole verse and was lyk... nah to everyone cuz he can't think that hard to understand it....
we got 7th who i haven't seen in a while come out of no where and not even break shyt down....
come on real talk niggaz... niggaz stay on dis nigga's dick jus cuz he's lyk weeezy, nigga can make millions off making a song about him sitting in a studio with just him and his drink and sell so much he's good for lyfe.... niggaz be on some stupid bias shyt.... but it's watever.....
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06-22-2008, 09:57 PM
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| | Hear the Tricks..
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Rep Power: 12   | Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) lol..ya 7th..this is a belt match, u just copy/pasted both verses down.
__________________ Noob Stat on TF |
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06-23-2008, 03:30 AM
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| | sfjksdshdjs
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) ahh , after ReaL's comment does my vote even matter?...probably not...it's whatever to me also...I actually enjoyed both verses...I'll leave it there.
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06-23-2008, 08:13 AM
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| | O.M. Champ
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) Broken Down...
Next time just ask me to complete it alright..simple..especially when u havent returned the favor and voted on a championship match..cant really bitch about a vote
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06-23-2008, 03:59 PM
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| | Crowned Immortal at Birth
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| Re: Champ Belt(Beyond6x): Beyond(23-1) vs Realyfe(9-10) Punches ((NEEDS VOTES)) i haven't rtf? I haven't voted on a championship match? aiight then nigga... bitch about a vote.... i said pun was on beyond's dick... i said you voted without a breakdown... that was me askin for a breakdown... so calm down real talk....
you know what... Beyond take the KO i don't give a fuck.... |
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