C2: king M.c vs Royal Rapptress (King MC Wins)

[HellRazor]

10 Bars Due Friday (Extensions Granted Upon Request til 08/16). Vote on other Battles..!

[King M.C]

check

[King M.C]

humble like poor folks
stumble occasionally on low growth
nuclear plants can relate on how da smoke flow
im saying much cuz its a no show

[Royal Rapptress]

CHeck

Tha King MC don't mean a thing to me,even Ali could never sting this bee/...(da queen)
From Boyz II Men it don't matta, I leave em on down on bended knee/
makin him bow to the Royalness of rap/
somone should tell King a toilets for crap/(got the wrong throne)lol
I levitate over this feather weight and shit on his shoulder/
This is my castle and your visit is over/
consider this your final order: pack ya bags/
I seen better flows on my maxi pads/
this chicken's as yellow as a taxi cab/
check how I slap this fag and make his noggin bleed/
leavin him dazed and confused so the audience can see his face vacant and bruised/
vision seein multiple like he facin a crew/
look how he shakin cause he know he basically through/
I dust his sugar flows and frost this corn flake/(u corny fa real)
he don't want a peice like a coughed upon cake/
For heavens sake he know who's the boss just call him Tony Danza/
Prolly won't reply and it'll be his best stanza..hands down eva/
n if he come he betta man up/
I stay pickin on this kid as if he got his hand up/
Duke you musta been high to pick this challenge/
I bring you down with a bigger crash than Ricky Valens/
know that I'm brash wit sicknen talent, man I don't play with them bastards/
laughed when I saw this Joker cause this craft I've been mastered/(you ain't a king)

**and I just got high, I'm smashin you plastered..**

LOL I coulda kept goin but I had to stop myself...you don't want it King...

[King M.C]

Give your kids a hand before you start flipping fingers
My guess is you've been watching to much of Living Single
Ya no Queen Latifah, just peddling off of goverment support
What you need to do is get ya "bills up" like u was up in Detroit
It could b getting da monkey off ya back, but you coming up horse
Bitch got mo extensions then when da league coming up short
how you running with swords when you only strap dildos
You couldnt take a run at da boy even if you was a black widow
"My sack sit low"when yours just shit hoes, i'd trash ya experiment
The only time il take you serious is when you at ya period
Ya flow like ass and cigarettes, ya shit just blowing smoke
Couldnt even make fags curious, you didnt know they wanted dope
this bitch on da ropes sending wrestling codes whIle da axe is live
Cause ya maxi 2 maximize, so dont confuse flipping beds with da matricide

and you said something....

[Royal Rapptress]

yah....even though you really didnt post your verse until after the deadline when you edited today...we'll go for votes....good luck! Took you so long anyway...lol

[Pembroke]

Royal, your verse was alright.. honestly, you're far better in writing short stories and poetry than rap verses. It's oldschool to me.. you use simple contents and lace it with a gully, know it all flow.. sort of like all the oldschool rappers used to do. Some bars were ehh.. others cool, others corny, but for the most part, I left satisfied. You've gotta stop the bold, italics, and explanations though.. the /'s too.

vision seein multiple like he facin a crew/
look how he shakin cause he know he basically through/
^Hah..

For heavens sake he know who's the boss just call him Tony Danza/
Prolly won't reply and it'll be his best stanza..hands down eva/
^Cool line.

King, had ups and down like Queen but it was better paced and aggressively written. The detroit bar didn't rhyme and you could've smoothened the diction throughout but the verse left a stronger impression on me..

i'd trash ya experiment
The only time il take you serious is when you at ya period
^Nice bar..

how you running with swords when you only strap dildos
You couldnt take a run at da boy even if you was a black widow
^Liked this..

I'm giving my vote to King for the more successful open mic.. the diss shots he took at Royal were playful, but somewhat damaging while Royal's more playful concepts weren't.. and when they were, they were less.. thanks for showing, ya'll

Stay up to both

[Xylo]

I dont know Pem i see a lil feedin going on she talked about maxi etc and then he came a talked about maxi etc in his verse.

i`m one for originality her best line

consider this your final order: pack ya bags/
I seen better flows on my maxi pads/

and his best individual line to me was

Ya no Queen Latifah, just peddling off of goverment support
What you need to do is get ya "bills up" like u was up in Detroit

hers to me seemed more impactfull

his diction was off but he had decent flow ,her diction and flow was on.
Now does old skool style make her verse worse than his new skool style
i dont know but i think she jabbed at him pretty good. but were her over all
bars as aggressive as his id have to say by a slight margin no.

so to me the person with the slightly more impactfull verse due to a more aggressive approach goes to:

KMC.

Q you gotta not take no prisoners because dudes are not gonna take none with you for obvious reasons. and post 2nd sometimes because some dude will feed off ya verse a lil bit.

[Criticize]

my vote is for king. strange open mic battle, because you both sort of seemed to be dissing each other, but not to savagely. so it was like an open mic diss to your oppenant, it was something new.
queen your flows a little all over the place, i think mainly due to you bar lengths changing alot of the time, a few of your concepts where a little old and tired, but there was a bit of humor their coming through and overall a decent verse.

i liked kings verse better he just had the better flow down packed, his concepts worked a little better and off the disses thrown by both i likes his verse better, king nothing really great but nothing really bad, definatly room for improvment in a few of your concepts.

both of you keep up and stay in the league.
but i vote for king.

[King M.C]

thats 3-0 for me.. Good battle Q

[HellRazor]

King MC wins good battle both!!