09-08-2008, 03:11 AM
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| | THE DEFINITION OF RAW
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| C1: PRECISE vs. ((Ruck)) (Punches) 10 Bars Due Friday 09/12/08. Vote on other Battles..! |
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09-08-2008, 03:19 AM
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| | The Windy Blowin Cess
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09-08-2008, 11:24 AM
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| | RRS.
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Rep Power: 9   | re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) interesting..havent battled in agges.
__________________ my niggas skeme hard beef for the scrilla make the pheens walk with a lean like zombies in thrillaa nigga. use the ak cause i aim to kill n ill clap the fresh prince jus to aim at will |
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09-11-2008, 08:34 AM
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| | RRS.
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Rep Power: 9   | re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) on that bossdon, straight up, biggavell type shit.
been a couple digits..let me ride.
i bet pre on-point, but rucka stay with blades like meat markets
peice parker, treatin precise like a producer, cause i beat artists!
he say his style more emotional, ruck'll leave your heart open and mushy
small p more like hilary clinton, we know no one's votin for a pussy
this kid straight up poo, leave ruck to number 1 while i bake the two
ruck'll have dude beggin for mercy like a wrestlin pay per view
he steppin to stutter, we know every nameplay been used against precise
fucker came back, he was told to leave, pre a free spirit, he doesnt take advice
from mics to biters, fuck grown shit ruck can leave this tike in diapers
cause no body wanna fuck with this bitch he like miley cirus
hes up now..
but hes a compulsive bullshit artist, you know? usually lie
he like a teradactul, no one body knows if he use to be fly
sure riot ruck got that 0-1 record but all the boss dons rock L's
im hot, hell, ruck paypal this bum some addidas sneaks so he can cop shells
pre thinks hes stuntin some hot shit, imagine what im rollin with
got similar attributes to a retard, dribblin everywhere when he spose to spit!
stay hangin wit some wavie crocketts, i dont wave.. i pop it, magnum minute
bell chrome, kid thinkin he can delhomme the battle and pass to win it
look kid'll be doing squats and dips stay on his duckin shit
im pre-claiming him gay, cause even his avatar is suckin dick.
time will bring back greatness... i know this was very weak.
__________________ my niggas skeme hard beef for the scrilla make the pheens walk with a lean like zombies in thrillaa nigga. use the ak cause i aim to kill n ill clap the fresh prince jus to aim at will |
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09-13-2008, 12:15 AM
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| | The Windy Blowin Cess
Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Southside Chi
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Rep Power: 9  | re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) I aint one fa maken shit up , Im more known fa maken chips 'fuck .... I could neva make a battle diss' ruck....the most I could do is actually record a few albums with major hits ..punk!
so go ahead - spend a week formen bars and punches , while Im out chargin numbers.....acting all hard and gutter ... poser.... the closest u get around ta growin green is watchin Farmers' brother
ya battle verses dont even connect , any real emcee can see it '
lines hoppin around and half the shit u say I dont beleive it -
this is hiphop u more billy ray sirus , fucken homo ... I should no show .... neither one of us on here maken no dough .. but see this is ya life ' u the type ta hit a show usin rapflava as a logo
cut u down a bit like a promo , u know me as precise , I aint neva heard ruck sound nice ,
hiden behind aliases ... here .. take my cd .... put it in ya car .... I got enough tracks ta last
u ya whole life , woulda got u on the album ... but like bad internet service u were no
were on "site", u need ta live get a life ! I aint buyin ya text swag , like u aint buyin that
fresh jag , u aint fly but this right to ya eye gone give u jet lag
and u aint swingin back , what are you thinkin jack , what ? u just writin for the purposes of
battelin , cuz really , I ont see ya style fitten on a decent track ...
so what .. yea Im textin too ! but fuck , Im burnin time , its what I ellected too , u just
stuck so NO , I aint respectin u , change ya name change ya game and come back ..
wait a couple years before u accept a match , fuck it , I'll tell chris shut down the site ,
that way ya lil net buddys dont hate on precise , fa endin rucks carreer cuz he thought
he was nice
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09-13-2008, 06:40 AM
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| | Rede Between The Lines!!
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| Re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) Ruck
i bet pre on-point, but rucka stay with blades like meat markets
peice parker, treatin precise like a producer, cause i beat artists! Cool opener
he say his style more emotional, ruck'll leave your heart open and mushy
small p more like hilary clinton, we know no one's votin for a pussy lol
this kid straight up poo, leave ruck to number 1 while i bake the two
ruck'll have dude beggin for mercy like a wrestlin pay per view not feeling this bar
he steppin to stutter, we know every nameplay been used against precise
fucker came back, he was told to leave, pre a free spirit, he doesnt take advice lol
from mics to biters, fuck grown shit ruck can leave this tike in diapers
cause no body wanna fuck with this bitch he like miley cirus Ha!
hes up now..
but hes a compulsive bullshit artist, you know? usually lie
he like a teradactul, no one body knows if he use to be fly dhhfvfjdjjrhehrb4r
sure riot ruck got that 0-1 record but all the boss dons rock L's
im hot, hell, ruck paypal this bum some addidas sneaks so he can cop shells cool
pre thinks hes stuntin some hot shit, imagine what im rollin with
got similar attributes to a retard, dribblin everywhere when he spose to spit! HAHAHAHA
stay hangin wit some wavie crocketts, i dont wave.. i pop it, magnum minute
bell chrome, kid thinkin he can delhomme the battle and pass to win it lol
look kid'll be doing squats and dips stay on his duckin shit
im pre-claiming him gay, cause even his avatar is suckin dick. hahaha
Dope piece man.. really went at him. Precise
I aint one fa maken shit up , Im more known fa maken chips 'fuck .... I could neva make a battle diss' ruck....the most I could do is actually record a few albums with major hits ..punk! ok.. not really aimed at him in a punch way
so go ahead - spend a week formen bars and punches , while Im out chargin numbers.....acting all hard and gutter ... poser.... the closest u get around ta growin green is watchin Farmers' brother
ya battle verses dont even connect , any real emcee can see it '
lines hoppin around and half the shit u say I dont beleive it -
this is hiphop u more billy ray sirus , fucken homo ... I should no show .... neither one of us on here maken no dough .. but see this is ya life ' u the type ta hit a show usin rapflava as a logo
cut u down a bit like a promo , u know me as precise , I aint neva heard ruck sound nice ,
hiden behind aliases ... here .. take my cd .... put it in ya car .... I got enough tracks ta last
u ya whole life , woulda got u on the album ... but like bad internet service u were no
were on "site", u need ta live get a life ! I aint buyin ya text swag , like u aint buyin that
fresh jag , u aint fly but this right to ya eye gone give u jet lag
and u aint swingin back , what are you thinkin jack , what ? u just writin for the purposes of
battelin , cuz really , I ont see ya style fitten on a decent track ...
so what .. yea Im textin too ! but fuck , Im burnin time , its what I ellected too , u just
stuck so NO , I aint respectin u , change ya name change ya game and come back ..
wait a couple years before u accept a match , fuck it , I'll tell chris shut down the site ,
that way ya lil net buddys dont hate on precise , fa endin rucks carreer cuz he thought
he was nice
its kind of hard to break this down dude, cos im not sure where your bars end.. so i just gave up and read it.. it was all pretty decent. Some played shit in there, maybe thats cos you been out for some time or sumin. but it was all cool. flow was decent
my overall vote goes to the Ruckus himself.. i preffered rucks flow and structure. both decent verses and respect to both for showing and making the league interesting.. yeah - good battle dudes
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09-13-2008, 07:35 AM
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| | sfjksdshdjs
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| Re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) Ruck:
i bet pre on-point, but rucka stay with blades like meat markets
peice parker, treatin precise like a producer, cause i beat artists!
^^I like , wordin' is a little blah...straight opener though...
he say his style more emotional, ruck'll leave your heart open and mushy
small p more like hilary clinton, we know no one's votin for a pussy
^^hmm...
this kid straight up poo, leave ruck to number 1 while i bake the two
ruck'll have dude beggin for mercy like a wrestlin pay per view
^^don't like...
he steppin to stutter, we know every nameplay been used against precise
fucker came back, he was told to leave, pre a free spirit, he doesnt take advice
^^nice , scheme and content...
from mics to biters, fuck grown shit ruck can leave this tike in diapers
cause no body wanna fuck with this bitch he like miley cirus
^^weak...
hes up now..
but hes a compulsive bullshit artist, you know? usually lie
he like a teradactul, no one body knows if he use to be fly
^^lol , that hit...
sure riot ruck got that 0-1 record but all the boss dons rock L's
im hot, hell, ruck paypal this bum some addidas sneaks so he can cop shells
^^I see what you doin' but I ain't feel it...
pre thinks hes stuntin some hot shit, imagine what im rollin with
got similar attributes to a retard, dribblin everywhere when he spose to spit!
^^chea , that's slick...
thought the endin' was cool , good verse...a few lines were pfft but as a whole yeah this be nice...the concepts that were delivered for the majority seemed to leave an impact...maybe not KO material but enough to have opponents canvas greet or atleast be dazed by what's thrown...raw and rugged piece no doubt...just the way I like 'em...enjoyable fam.
PRE:
I could neva make a battle diss' ruck....the most I could do is actually record a few albums with major hits ..punk!
^^not bad...
so go ahead - spend a week formen bars and punches , while Im out chargin numbers.....acting all hard and gutter ... poser.... the closest u get around ta growin green is watchin Farmers' brother
^^yeah multies are all good but it goes nowhere?...this is a punch battle not let's see who can flow better...
ya battle verses dont even connect , any real emcee can see it '
lines hoppin around and half the shit u say I dont beleive it -
^^wack...
this is hiphop u more billy ray sirus , fucken homo ... I should no show .... neither one of us on here maken no dough .. but see this is ya life ' u the type ta hit a show usin rapflava as a logo
cut u down a bit like a promo , u know me as precise , I aint neva heard ruck sound nice ,
^^nah , scheme failed imo...I see what you went for and it didn't pay off...
um , firstly that structure needs some major work...I can catch the flow but fuck man...you really make it hard for readers with it laid out like that...alot of meaningless content here...you sorta came from a more diss perspective than a strictly punch one.I really don't like the way you worded things...whenever a concept was about to do damage it was pulled back , you taunted alot with this spit and honestly that's it...cool but nowhere near what Ruck dropped...
vote - Ruck.
better verse as a whole , wordin' was more crisp and personally he struck on the regular as your suppose to do in these match up's.
...be easy y'all.
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09-13-2008, 01:04 PM
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| | Why So Serious?
Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: The Island.
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| Re: C1: PRECISE vs. Ruck (Punches) - ((NEEDS VOTES)) i bet pre on-point, but rucka stay with blades like meat markets
peice parker, treatin precise like a producer, cause i beat artists! pretty nice
he say his style more emotional, ruck'll leave your heart open and mushy
small p more like hilary clinton, we know no one's votin for a pussy lol
this kid straight up poo, leave ruck to number 1 while i bake the two
ruck'll have dude beggin for mercy like a wrestlin pay per view decent
he steppin to stutter, we know every nameplay been used against precise
fucker came back, he was told to leave, pre a free spirit, he doesnt take advice ehh
from mics to biters, fuck grown shit ruck can leave this tike in diapers
cause no body wanna fuck with this bitch he like miley cirus ehh
hes up now..
but hes a compulsive bullshit artist, you know? usually lie
he like a teradactul, no one body knows if he use to be fly ok
sure riot ruck got that 0-1 record but all the boss dons rock L's
im hot, hell, ruck paypal this bum some addidas sneaks so he can cop shells nah
pre thinks hes stuntin some hot shit, imagine what im rollin with
got similar attributes to a retard, dribblin everywhere when he spose to spit! nah
stay hangin wit some wavie crocketts, i dont wave.. i pop it, magnum minute
bell chrome, kid thinkin he can delhomme the battle and pass to win it ehh
look kid'll be doing squats and dips stay on his duckin shit
im pre-claiming him gay, cause even his avatar is suckin dick. lol
I aint one fa maken shit up , Im more known fa maken chips 'fuck .... I could neva make a battle diss' ruck....the most I could do is actually record a few albums with major hits ..punk! wtf
so go ahead - spend a week formen bars and punches , while Im out chargin numbers.....acting all hard and gutter ... poser.... the closest u get around ta growin green is watchin Farmers' brother nah
ya battle verses dont even connect , any real emcee can see it '
lines hoppin around and half the shit u say I dont beleive it - ok
this is hiphop u more billy ray sirus , fucken homo ... I should no show .... neither one of us on here maken no dough .. but see this is ya life ' u the type ta hit a show usin rapflava as a logo nah
cut u down a bit like a promo , u know me as precise , I aint neva heard ruck sound nice ,
hiden behind aliases ... here .. take my cd .... put it in ya car .... I got enough tracks ta last what
u ya whole life , woulda got u on the album ... but like bad internet service u were no
were on "site", u need ta live get a life ! I aint buyin ya text swag , like u aint buyin that
fresh jag , u aint fly but this right to ya eye gone give u jet lag could this be any longer?
and u aint swingin back , what are you thinkin jack , what ? u just writin for the purposes of
battelin , cuz really , I ont see ya style fitten on a decent track ... nah
so what .. yea Im textin too ! but fuck , Im burnin time , its what I ellected too , u just
stuck so NO , I aint respectin u , change ya name change ya game and come back .. wtf!!
wait a couple years before u accept a match , fuck it , I'll tell chris shut down the site ,
that way ya lil net buddys dont hate on precise , fa endin rucks carreer cuz he thought
he was nice wackness
This battle was very one sided but at the same time weak as fuck..ruck didnt come to good at all..his bars lacked the spice they needed to be hard hitters but he still came with some decent flips..his flow was on as well as structure and he had a few bars thrown in there that were pretty good..precise didnt bring much to the table at all..his bars were very stretched and he didnt even really throw any good punchs out there..it's obvious both have some shit to work on..precise you should work on your format,flow and forming shorter but harder hitting lines..you lost me a buncha times where the rhymes were just horrible that i could barely find where the bars were ending..ruck, you already know whats good..you used to be a top bl battler..once that rust is off i dont see you having much of a problem at all..nice battle fellas.. Vote:Rucker..lol..
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09-13-2008, 03:15 PM
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