Brawler Belt: Crit Vs SkitSoFrenic (Crit Wins)

[HellRazor]

12 Bars Due Friday (Extensions Granted Upon Request til 08/16). Vote on other Battles..!

[Criticize]

you post first.

good luck.

[SkitSoFrenic]

Holler back. I'll post tomorrow.

Oh No.

No Show?

Your wack
Hurt back
Smoke crack
Choke racks
Eat shit
Weak bitch
Blabla
CaCa
I hate you
And ate food

[Criticize]

dude, i told you to post first. wtf??? i am the champ. dont drop a no show verse, you post your verse 1st. i have already checked in and said i will post in the beef thread, a no show verse from you is a sick excuse for not being ready imo.

i can write a no show verse too,
so put up your 12 bars so the battle we can do/

[SkitSoFrenic]

Okay bub. I got you in a lil bit. Imma key something up rite now.

Only got time for ten. Just match me.

I'll leave his tooth n neck broken, Don't even try, you next? No wins
Cuz Crit wouldn't even be sub par if he was taking Tiger's spot in the U.S. open
Without a brave heart your quick to back down and I hate the hesitation
So I'll see that 'Crit is sized' up, like I'm receiving praise on elevation
Signed up for multiple leagues but none of scripts could ever beat this
So since I'm 'finding fault in Criticize', So Imma 'pick apart his pieces' (pick apart is a synonym for criticize)
I'm one notch above him, So you know I'll never be beneath C
'Criticize on Skits'? Only if 'commenting on sketches' from Mad TV
This little kid like's touching himself, Funny gut feelings? he loves it too
So he'll be rubbing his cuts the way I'll leave 'Crit tickle' stomach wounds (critical)
Him the best brawler? I'll leave the champ of this place replaced
Might as well call it an asteroid belt the way he's just a waist of space (waste)
His lyrical content is dull, When he spits deaf people might correct him
He's a gay in denial so I'll make this fag aus steer into the right direction (austere=great denial)
Went down the wrong path, Crit's always been doomed in his route
Chances he'll pocket a win is terrible, It's like I hadda roo in his pouch (ruin)
The heat of battle is too much for him, so this bitch will melt
Champ just doesn't fit him, so he'll buckle in his pants when fighting to fit the belt
You wouldn't had a touch to shine if you was affiliated with Midas
Let the gods decide your fate in the sky, Cuz even they'll be screaming die Aus!! (Dyaus=god of the sky)

[Criticize]

still experting me with some of the simple but effective, smoothly worded plays/personals, havent been able to get feedback on them coz peeps keep no showing me.
But you see this guys last battle, vs rican not the no show the week before when the had a draw. this fool posted 2 pictures of rican.

i use pics for effective personals you overload them so il blitzer maggot,
i guess when your wordplay cant win.......you get the picture faggot/
your not bad for a new cunt! but im doubting you mate,
coz your wordplays so forced it could probably charge you 4 rape/
so keep your eye on the ball kid this is a back pass blitz,
think u can beat crit? thats comedy..skits like jack ass clips/
you must have some hairstyle problems your folicles deserving of germs,
so il force you to curl over and die like your alergic to perms/
ul be left awe-struck i got the deadly sensations for rap,
u need to change your school of thought..ud need a better education for that/
winning the belt of crit? ha right now im bashing this star,
you need to 'urn ya stripes' burn ya flag and store the ash in a jar/
your run up the ranks will come to an end when i rubbish you for fast disposal,
il destroy and whack mc
and you fit the bill like a congresmens drapht proposal/
ul get killed speaking out the side of your mouth so dont b talking that way
coz loses?i
you got them in spades like card gamblers who dont no when to walk away/
im the champ for a reason! a better emcee is harder to name,
n against crit? you'l get smashed..bro like the oldschool mario game/
voters wont even notice your verse they will be comtemplating this deep shit,
trying to figure out if thats skits twin bro?? or some chick that he sleeps with/

[Criticize]

uhhhp

[SkitSoFrenic]

Look at this fuckin failure over here. smh

uppin to KO this imbecile.

[King M.C]

SKIT


I'll leave his tooth n neck broken, Don't even try, you next? No wins
Cuz Crit wouldn't even be sub par if he was taking Tiger's spot in the U.S. open
a litte strecth but iright

Without a brave heart your quick to back down and I hate the hesitation
So I'll see that 'Crit is sized' up, like I'm receiving praise on elevation
hah

Signed up for multiple leagues but none of scripts could ever beat this
So since I'm 'finding fault in Criticize', So Imma 'pick apart his pieces'
no

I'm one notch above him, So you know I'll never be beneath C
'Criticize on Skits'? Only if 'commenting on sketches' from Mad TV
no

This little kid like's touching himself, Funny gut feelings? he loves it too
So he'll be rubbing his cuts the way I'll leave 'Crit tickle' stomach wounds
nah

Him the best brawler? I'll leave the champ of this place replaced
Might as well call it an asteroid belt the way he's just a waist of space
ok

His lyrical content is dull, When he spits deaf people might correct him
He's a gay in denial so I'll make this fag aus steer into the right direction
nah

Went down the wrong path, Crit's always been doomed in his route
Chances he'll pocket a win is terrible, It's like I hadda roo in his pouch
nah
The heat of battle is too much for him, so this bitch will melt
Champ just doesn't fit him, so he'll buckle in his pants when fighting to fit the belt
^what

You wouldn't had a touch to shine if you was affiliated with Midas
Let the gods decide your fate in the sky, Cuz even they'll be screaming die Aus!!
^what, i didnt get it

SKIT: not a bad drop from you its just ur punches were
pretty weak but i still believe you need
lots of elevating.. perhaps work a little more on ya wordplay and on ya flow and you
will be in there


VS


CRIT



i use pics for effective personals you overload them so il blitzer maggot,
i guess when your wordplay cant win.......you get the picture faggot/
nah

your not bad for a new cunt! but im doubting you mate,
coz your wordplays so forced it could probably charge you 4 rape/
nice

so keep your eye on the ball kid this is a back pass blitz,
think u can beat crit? thats comedy..skits like jack ass clips/
cool

you must have some hairstyle problems your folicles deserving of germs,
so il force you to curl over and die like your alergic to perms/
nice

ul be left awe-struck i got the deadly sensations for rap,
u need to change your school of thought..ud need a better education for that/
nah

winning the belt of crit? ha right now im bashing this star,
you need to 'urn ya stripes' burn ya flag and store the ash in a jar/
nah

your run up the ranks will come to an end when i rubbish you for fast disposal,
il destroy and whack mc
and you fit the bill like a congresmens drapht proposal/
nice

ul get killed speaking out the side of your mouth so dont b talking that way
coz loses?i
you got them in spades like card gamblers who dont no when to walk away/
nah

im the champ for a reason! a better emcee is harder to name,
n against crit? you'l get smashed..bro like the oldschool mario game/
nah

voters wont even notice your verse they will be comtemplating this deep shit,
trying to figure out if thats skits twin bro?? or some chick that he sleeps with/
ok


CRIT:i believe you didnt come that nice
but good enough to pull it out. ur punches hit harder to me

my vote goes to CRIT

[R.D.]

I'll leave his tooth n neck broken, Don't even try, you next? No wins
Cuz Crit wouldn't even be sub par if he was taking Tiger's spot in the U.S. open

eh.. decent

Without a brave heart your quick to back down and I hate the hesitation
So I'll see that 'Crit is sized' up, like I'm receiving praise on elevation

cool..

Signed up for multiple leagues but none of scripts could ever beat this
So since I'm 'finding fault in Criticize', So Imma 'pick apart his pieces'

terrible grammar in the second line and it didnt hit hard

I'm one notch above him, So you know I'll never be beneath C
'Criticize on Skits'? Only if 'commenting on sketches' from Mad TV

proof-read your shit... but no not really working

This little kid like's touching himself, Funny gut feelings? he loves it too
So he'll be rubbing his cuts the way I'll leave 'Crit tickle' stomach wounds

nice idea terribly put

Him the best brawler? I'll leave the champ of this place replaced
Might as well call it an asteroid belt the way he's just a waist of space

no..

His lyrical content is dull, When he spits deaf people might correct him
He's a gay in denial so I'll make this fag aus steer into the right direction

decent punch terrible connecting and flow

Went down the wrong path, Crit's always been doomed in his route
Chances he'll pocket a win is terrible, It's like I hadda roo in his pouch

lol..

The heat of battle is too much for him, so this bitch will melt
Champ just doesn't fit him, so he'll buckle in his pants when fighting to fit the belt

eh.,.

You wouldn't had a touch to shine if you was affiliated with Midas
Let the gods decide your fate in the sky, Cuz even they'll be screaming die Aus!!

eh.. i just heard like three industry freestyle with the midas touch pun


i use pics for effective personals you overload them so il blitzer maggot,
i guess when your wordplay cant win.......you get the picture faggot/

lol..

your not bad for a new cunt! but im doubting you mate,
coz your wordplays so forced it could probably charge you 4 rape/

eh..

so keep your eye on the ball kid this is a back pass blitz,
think u can beat crit? thats comedy..skits like jack ass clips/

decent..

you must have some hairstyle problems your folicles deserving of germs,
so il force you to curl over and die like your alergic to perms/

eh.. it works..

ul be left awe-struck i got the deadly sensations for rap,
u need to change your school of thought..ud need a better education for that/

lol..

winning the belt of crit? ha right now im bashing this star,
you need to 'urn ya stripes' burn ya flag and store the ash in a jar/

ehhhh... yeah.. but.. ok yeah

your run up the ranks will come to an end when i rubbish you for fast disposal,
il destroy and whack mc
and you fit the bill like a congresmens drapht proposal/

ok..

ul get killed speaking out the side of your mouth so dont b talking that way
coz loses?i
you got them in spades like card gamblers who dont no when to walk away/

not really..

im the champ for a reason! a better emcee is harder to name,
n against crit? you'l get smashed..bro like the oldschool mario game/

lol.. i like that

voters wont even notice your verse they will be comtemplating this deep shit,
trying to figure out if thats skits twin bro?? or some chick that he sleeps with/

lol...


actually this was closer than i thought it was gonna be.. crit i think you slacked on certain lines but some hit very nicely.. skit you used some of the same ideas everyone uses on crit including myself so i dont know they just weren't that effective..
both needed better connectors or multis to keep a consistent flow up but eh whatever

overall crit edged it with stronger personals here and there

[Ruck]

voters wont even notice your verse they will be comtemplating this deep shit,
trying to figure out if thats skits twin bro?? or some chick that he sleeps with/

im sorry but. KO right there.

[HellRazor]

Crit wins Kayo!!