B3 ((Criticize)) vs. Tyrant.

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[Tyrant.]

aight check... gl crit

[Criticize]

modern usage a tyrant is a single ruler holding vast, if not absolute power through a state or in an organization.
A Tyrant is a fictional creature from the Resident Evil series

i went 9, match me or drop your 10 i dont mind. goood luck.



this house kid doesnt amuse me i will knock your name,
check the time
coz i had tryant owned way before i clocked the game
i bet you get no dime hoes just the skeezers and left overs,
so if you wake up next 2a horses head..just means your girl slept over/
got a pet dober; and your reps over; when i breed hating
pull a tyson
and naw your ear off quicker than meeting girls at speed dating/
your verses are just hoes and butts, bet you love to pose and strutt,
il rip your stomach through your flesh so you can show sum guts/
il sketch through your mental, in 1 bar i could X your credentials,
i been fighting battles when you thought the art of war was textas n pencils/
i got the soul of crims, stomp you and imprint the soul of timbs,
coz when i 'strike' you will 'back up and split' like bowling pins/
criticize is spiiting truth and iv got proof your a liar,
il have this fan-attic under flames like the roof is on fire/7
you get no play, when my punch hits and leaves you stinging all day
coz the only time tyrant wins is when folks work for minimum pay
il kidnap this kid..tied and gagged..you wont get away,
so we will see ty-rant.kick and scream like kids who dont get their way



back up and split. i.e back up and run.
ty-rant. during the kidnapping ty will be ranting kicking and screaming.

[Tyrant.]

Hes australian....
and autralia is going through a drought (so ive heard)


Dudes a legend.. they call him mister overated
"But look at all his good reviews?"... damn they self stated
I got crit-sized.. and ready for demise
and his self of steams so low better call him plies
This pussy's a bum.. taking dicks at no cost
Call him done.. like dundee cuz he looking kinda lost..
Yea This dudes an idiot.. for exeptin this bout..
cuz we know his lines our dryed up like the australian drought...
I aint garbage.. and theres no way yah tought me to spit..
cuz im rockin this shit.. while your sloppin a dick
It was a compliment.. when RD sayed yah rhymes are ok
Dont even try to hide it.. that shit must of made yah day
Like a kangaroo ya momma pouch you should've stayed..
You must be a coach cuz your punches are old and all played
I just beat ya so bad you'll be stockin on meds
and Its sucks for your dude cuz you just lost to a topical head.. ez..

Gl crit..

[R.D.]

criticize
this house kid doesnt amuse me i will knock your name,
check the time
coz i had tryant owned way before i clocked the game

simple opener simple punch lets see where it leads

i bet you get no dime hoes just the skeezers and left overs,
so if you wake up next 2a horses head..just means your girl slept over/

eh nice little punch but its not hittin that hard to me

got a pet dober; and your reps over; when i breed hating
pull a tyson
and naw your ear off quicker than meeting girls at speed dating/

hmm.. kind of nothing there.. alright i guess at best

your verses are just hoes and butts, bet you love to pose and strutt,
il rip your stomach through your flesh so you can show sum guts/

alright bar nothing insane

il sketch through your mental, in 1 bar i could X your credentials,
i been fighting battles when you thought the art of war was textas n pencils/

nice little punch in there

i got the soul of crims, stomp you and imprint the soul of timbs,
coz when i 'strike' you will 'back up and split' like bowling pins/

nice i like the bowling pins line

criticize is spiiting truth and iv got proof your a liar,
il have this fan-attic under flames like the roof is on fire/7

nice flip to a semi played line.. worked here

you get no play, when my punch hits and leaves you stinging all day
coz the only time tyrant wins is when folks work for minimum pay

decent nameplay here

il kidnap this kid..tied and gagged..you wont get away,
so we will see ty-rant.kick and scream like kids who dont get their way

way and way.. that seemed repetitive otherwise it could've been a dope punch

tyrant
Dudes a legend.. they call him mister overated
"But look at all his good reviews?"... damn they self stated

nice little punch nothin crazy

I got crit-sized.. and ready for demise
and his self of steams so low better call him plies

nothing here really.. the whole crit-sized you had something there but didnt follow up.. would be better like inches and pounds, measurements of the ground im ready to bury this guy ive officially got crit-sized.. something to that eefect

This pussy's a bum.. taking dicks at no cost
Call him done.. like dundee cuz he looking kinda lost..

ouch.. this missed hard and you may have hurt more than him for this lol

Yea This dudes an idiot.. for exeptin this bout..
cuz we know his lines our dryed up like the australian drought...

eh not really working at all.. and its accepting not exeptin

I aint garbage.. and theres no way yah tought me to spit..
cuz im rockin this shit.. while your sloppin a dick

way too elementary

It was a compliment.. when RD sayed yah rhymes are ok
Dont even try to hide it.. that shit must of made yah day

lol but needed more spice

Like a kangaroo ya momma pouch you should've stayed..
You must be a coach cuz your punches are old and all played

needs more thought to iron it out... something like your punches are an NFL coach cause most are old and almost all of em played

I just beat ya so bad you'll be stockin on meds
and Its sucks for your dude cuz you just lost to a topical head.. ez..

prolly one of your better bars...
your verse needed more fire and spice feel me?

v-crit

[Tyrant.]

1-0 crit

[Beyond]

this house kid doesnt amuse me i will knock your name,
check the time
coz i had tryant owned way before i clocked the game
Connection was weak. This could've been real good with more interconnection.
i bet you get no dime hoes just the skeezers and left overs,
so if you wake up next 2a horses head..just means your girl slept over/
Although I get it (The Godfather), it still needed a better set-up to connect the horse's head.
got a pet dober; and your reps over; when i breed hating
pull a tyson
and naw your ear off quicker than meeting girls at speed dating/
I like it, but the punchline is kind've indirect.
your verses are just hoes and butts, bet you love to pose and strutt,
il rip your stomach through your flesh so you can show sum guts/
Played concept.
il sketch through your mental, in 1 bar i could X your credentials,
i been fighting battles when you thought the art of war was textas n pencils/
Humorous.
i got the soul of crims, stomp you and imprint the soul of timbs,
coz when i 'strike' you will 'back up and split' like bowling pins/
I remember I used a similar concept against Plotism in our second battle in the finals of the International Text Tournament and no one liked it.
criticize is spiiting truth and iv got proof your a liar,
il have this fan-attic under flames like the roof is on fire/7
The wordplay is played, but the punchline I like.
you get no play, when my punch hits and leaves you stinging all day
coz the only time tyrant wins is when folks work for minimum pay
Connection is too weak.
il kidnap this kid..tied and gagged..you wont get away,
so we will see ty-rant.kick and scream like kids who dont get their way
I think the 'rant nameplay I used against him on Mic Fiends when he ducked me was better.

vs

Dudes a legend.. they call him mister overated
"But look at all his good reviews?"... damn they self stated
Weak.
I got crit-sized.. and ready for demise
and his self of steams so low better call him plies
Forced.
This pussy's a bum.. taking dicks at no cost
Call him done.. like dundee cuz he looking kinda lost..
Repetitive.
Yea This dudes an idiot.. for exeptin this bout..
cuz we know his lines our dryed up like the australian drought...
Not a creative flip.
I aint garbage.. and theres no way yah tought me to spit..
cuz im rockin this shit.. while your sloppin a dick
Filler.
It was a compliment.. when RD sayed yah rhymes are ok
Dont even try to hide it.. that shit must of made yah day
Weak.
Like a kangaroo ya momma pouch you should've stayed..
You must be a coach cuz your punches are old and all played
Almost.
I just beat ya so bad you'll be stockin on meds
and Its sucks for your dude cuz you just lost to a topical head.. ez..
Weak closer and played personal.


This was a pretty weak battle. Tyrant just isn't there yet as far as Brawling is concerned. He needs to work on everything. I don't think Crit tried to hard, but he can come better no doubt and hopefully does since he signed up for the league on Rap Music, which is a lot more competitive.

Crit

[Pembroke]

v/ Crit

Agreed with the voters above.. he had stockpile punches, no real standouts, but they overpowered Ty's shit. The basic punchline styles both work... but let's see you take it further, fellas.

Stay up to both, thanks for showing..

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