B2: ((SkitSoFrenic)) vs. Don Dotta

[STRONGARM]

10 Bars Due Friday 07/25
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[Don Dotta]

Check.

[SkitSoFrenic]

check check yo

[Don Dotta]

Orignally posted by Beyond: Skits tried to force the wordplay to hard

10% of people with schizophrenia commit suicide, and between 20% and 40% attempt suicide at least once over the course of their illness..

But you’d rather die this way…

R.D said I shouldn’t sleep, I say he’ll feel the wrath to battle me
Fuck how he spit flow’s cause skitso’s distortin all realities
No credible wins it’s definet that there’s never no mic you rock
So stick to the bar brawlin and gettin that light weight title shot
Forcin your punch’s and I doubt your manly so get the hunch
It’s most likely a 4 some with 3 dude’s if his ‘panties are in a bunch’
Scare me?.. This kid is lunch!, watch the bullet’s fly to his neck
Dude, you where better off with the eatin disorder and suicide attempts!
Who is ridin then?, got no clique so catch the pound and the clip
It’s a shame I don’t know a ‘intro’ or ‘outro’ that would get down with this ‘skit’!!
Down’n em quick, the felons’ll break, D.C.!.. no need to tell em whos great
And if we say “Rook’s Classic” .. indeed it was justa spelling mistake!
Hell’s in your face, dukes a pee-on so forget winnin
“Skits tried to force the wordplay to hard “.. and that’s ‘Beyond my opinion’
Bring the beef but I know he wont but if it sparks like lighters..
I doubt he’ll ‘pull-up on some shit’ unless he’s purchasing diaper’s!

[SkitSoFrenic]

bleh

ya far from tecnique, dont stray from skilled rule
Cuz donkey; sick lines, only from an array of ill mules (don key)
Pray to kill fools cuz you always gaspin Amen
Cuz to audios or text you couldnt be asked to lay ten (latent)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/don-d...ed-139841.html (Don Dotta - Godfather of no-showers and little faggit duckers *u just got owned*)
I'll harrass this gay man cuz his bars aint peeped
I'll have his body peelin like a car paint theif
They need to call a medic when his lungs get mushed up far
Cuz double D's couldnt get his weight up with a push up, bra
You'll need a good luck star, follow these activities clean
A virgin miracle drops? not without a nativity scene (verge in)
Im sadistically mean, I'll put a twist to ya spleen
takin dumps while on periods the only way your shit'll be mean
I give him the kiss of death watch him puckerin up
Him gettin pussy? Adonis merely a sucker for love (A don is, Adonis=was in love with a goddess)
Comin up with a hard plan? dont attempt to erect the plots
Your respect is shot, Punch would link even if youd connect the dots
Your lines expect to drop like the longest pieces in tetris
Don veto polls with his own bars, like mobs staff interfered elections (dont vito poles)
This queer perfected a wierd objection, bitches stayin back man
Your sayin wack stanz Cuz i'll eat dot up with playin pacman


blah, experimented with a different style rite quick. see how it turns out

whoever votes on this battle, i will return the favor ASAP

ive noticed voting here sux, im just tryna speed it up. voting here are like favors, they should be returned. its common courtesy. :)

vote up please

[Xylo]

R.D said I shouldn’t sleep, I say he’ll feel the wrath to battle me
Fuck how he spit flow’s cause skitso’s distortin all realities
nice

No credible wins it’s definet that there’s never no mic you rock
So stick to the bar brawlin and gettin that light weight title shot
nice

Forcin your punch’s and I doubt your manly so get the hunch
It’s most likely a 4 some with 3 dude’s if his ‘panties are in a bunch’
eh!

Scare me?.. This kid is lunch!, watch the bullet’s fly to his neck
Dude, you where better off with the eatin disorder and suicide attempts!
Who is ridin then?, got no clique so catch the pound and the clip
It’s a shame I don’t know a ‘intro’ or ‘outro’ that would get down with this ‘skit’!!
Down’n em quick, the felons’ll break, D.C.!.. no need to tell em whos great
And if we say “Rook’s Classic” .. indeed it was justa spelling mistake!
i see the multies but really this threw off ya verse

Hell’s in your face, dukes a pee-on so forget winnin
“Skits tried to force the wordplay to hard “.. and that’s ‘Beyond my opinion’
cool line but not a killer

Bring the beef but I know he wont but if it sparks like lighters..
I doubt he’ll ‘pull-up on some shit’ unless he’s purchasing diaper’s!
ok finish


-vs-


ya far from tecnique, dont stray from skilled rule
Cuz donkey; sick lines, only from an array of ill mules (don key)
nice name play

Pray to kill fools cuz you always gaspin Amen
Cuz to audios or text you couldnt be asked to lay ten (latent)
dont see the corelation between audios text and latency

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/don-d...ed-139841.html (Don Dotta - Godfather of no-showers and little faggit duckers *u just got owned*)
I'll harrass this gay man cuz his bars aint peeped
I'll have his body peelin like a car paint theif
lol! ok

They need to call a medic when his lungs get mushed up far
Cuz double D's couldnt get his weight up with a push up, bra
lol! nice but seen it before

You'll need a good luck star, follow these activities clean
A virgin miracle drops? not without a nativity scene (verge in)
nice
Im sadistically mean, I'll put a twist to ya spleen
takin dumps while on periods the only way your shit'll be mean
whoa!

I give him the kiss of death watch him puckerin up
Him gettin pussy? Adonis merely a sucker for love (A don is, Adonis=was in love with a goddess)
this really needed a "no homo" added fam

Comin up with a hard plan? dont attempt to erect the plots
Your respect is shot, Punch would link even if youd connect the dots
eh! kind of light weight

Your lines expect to drop like the longest pieces in tetris
Don veto polls with his own bars, like mobs staff interfered elections (dont vito poles)
ok

This queer perfected a wierd objection, bitches stayin back man
Your sayin wack stanz Cuz i'll eat dot up with playin pacman
weak ender!

Don you started off nicely and was on to something but after your 3rd bar i was thrown off
maybe it was me but i couldnt figure that middle section out!

SKIT YOU HAD NICE NAME PLAY BUT YOU WENT OVER BOARD ALIL WITH THE GAY REVELATIONS
.

The guy with the more consistant hitters in his verse was"

Skit

[SkitSoFrenic]

i meant to put withOUT playin pacman on that last bar...sorry. WAS drinkin last night. its the weekend man lmaoo

thanks for the vote

1-0 me up

and NO HOMO...I guess

[Criticize]

No credible wins it’s definet that there’s never no mic you rock
So stick to the bar brawlin and gettin that light weight title shot


Who is ridin then?, got no clique so catch the pound and the clip
It’s a shame I don’t know a ‘intro’ or ‘outro’ that would get down with this ‘skit’!!
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a far from tecnique, dont stray from skilled rule
Cuz donkey; sick lines, only from an array of ill mules (don key)

They need to call a medic when his lungs get mushed up far
Cuz double D's couldnt get his weight up with a push up, bra

I give him the kiss of death watch him puckerin up
Him gettin pussy? Adonis merely a sucker for love (A don is, Adonis=was in love with a goddess)

This queer perfected a wierd objection, bitches stayin back man
Your sayin wack stanz Cuz i'll eat dot up with playin pacman
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I Vote for skitz. now i quoted 4 lines of yours but dont get me wrong, i thought most of them were ok at best and could have been done better. like your concepts were ok you just need to work on your wording and or your approach of delivering the punch or meta4. that would make your lines sound twice as dope and hit twice as hard.

don your verse was ok. a cpl of lines i quoted but i dont think you gave skitz enough credit. you really need to put time into your verses and elevate rather than just rhyming bars with the odd personal thrown in, really work on your punches and making them hit harder.

vote- skitz.

[Exis]

Don:

10% of people with schizophrenia commit suicide, and between 20% and 40% attempt suicide at least once over the course of their illness..

^^true , apparently...?

R.D said I shouldn’t sleep, I say he’ll feel the wrath to battle me
Fuck how he spit flow’s cause skitso’s distortin all realities

^^aight...

No credible wins it’s definet that there’s never no mic you rock
So stick to the bar brawlin and gettin that light weight title shot

^^not bad...

Forcin your punch’s and I doubt your manly so get the hunch
It’s most likely a 4 some with 3 dude’s if his ‘panties are in a bunch’

^^hmm...

Scare me?.. This kid is lunch!, watch the bullet’s fly to his neck
Dude, you where better off with the eatin disorder and suicide attempts!

^^weak...

Who is ridin then?, got no clique so catch the pound and the clip
It’s a shame I don’t know a ‘intro’ or ‘outro’ that would get down with this ‘skit’!!

^^ok...

Down’n em quick, the felons’ll break, D.C.!.. no need to tell em whos great
And if we say “Rook’s Classic” .. indeed it was justa spelling mistake!

^^lol but nah...

Hell’s in your face, dukes a pee-on so forget winnin
“Skits tried to force the wordplay to hard “.. and that’s ‘Beyond my opinion’
Bring the beef but I know he wont but if it sparks like lighters..
I doubt he’ll ‘pull-up on some shit’ unless he’s purchasing diaper’s!

^^thought these two bars were your best...

SkitS:

ya far from tecnique, dont stray from skilled rule
Cuz donkey; sick lines, only from an array of ill mules (don key)

^^not bad...

Pray to kill fools cuz you always gaspin Amen
Cuz to audios or text you couldnt be asked to lay ten (latent)

^^hmm...

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/don-d...ed-139841.html (Don Dotta - Godfather of no-showers and little faggit duckers *u just got owned*)

^^ok...

I'll harrass this gay man cuz his bars aint peeped
I'll have his body peelin like a car paint theif

^^nah...

They need to call a medic when his lungs get mushed up far
Cuz double D's couldnt get his weight up with a push up, bra

^^played , second line...first was blah.

You'll need a good luck star, follow these activities clean
A virgin miracle drops? not without a nativity scene (verge in)

^^aight...

Im sadistically mean, I'll put a twist to ya spleen
takin dumps while on periods the only way your shit'll be mean

^^no...

I give him the kiss of death watch him puckerin up
Him gettin pussy? Adonis merely a sucker for love (A don is, Adonis=was in love with a goddess)

^^nope...

Comin up with a hard plan? dont attempt to erect the plots
Your respect is shot, Punch would link even if youd connect the dots

^^pfft...

Your lines expect to drop like the longest pieces in tetris
Don veto polls with his own bars, like mobs staff interfered elections (dont vito poles)

^^k...

This queer perfected a wierd objection, bitches stayin back man
Your sayin wack stanz Cuz i'll eat dot up with playin pacman

^^nah , I seen the last line you used with better wordin' elsewhere...

I expected alot and got very little , two pretty average battles I have got at today...not sure why and really don't give a fuck...but there is a few lines I felt from each , the rest were either poorly worded or set up...executions of concepts from both sides be bland imo.

didn't really feel either , but one had more shit directed at his opponent.

vote - SkitS , stay upwards my peoples.

[Don Dotta]

lmao..w/e..

[Pembroke]

Don Dot

R.D said I shouldn’t sleep, I say he’ll feel the wrath to battle me
Fuck how he spit flow’s cause skitso’s distortin all realities

Cool

No credible wins it’s definet that there’s never no mic you rock
So stick to the bar brawlin and gettin that light weight title shot

Hah

Forcin your punch’s and I doubt your manly so get the hunch
It’s most likely a 4 some with 3 dude’s if his ‘panties are in a bunch’

Okay

Scare me?.. This kid is lunch!, watch the bullet’s fly to his neck
Dude, you where better off with the eatin disorder and suicide attempts!

Aight, iffy

Who is ridin then?, got no clique so catch the pound and the clip
It’s a shame I don’t know a ‘intro’ or ‘outro’ that would get down with this ‘skit’!!

Ehh, okay

Down’n em quick, the felons’ll break, D.C.!.. no need to tell em whos great
And if we say “Rook’s Classic” .. indeed it was justa spelling mistake!

Pretty fresh, Don

Hell’s in your face, dukes a pee-on so forget winnin
“Skits tried to force the wordplay to hard “.. and that’s ‘Beyond my opinion’

Decent

Bring the beef but I know he wont but if it sparks like lighters..
I doubt he’ll ‘pull-up on some shit’ unless he’s purchasing diaper’s!

Wacccckkkk, shame on you

Skit

ya far from tecnique, dont stray from skilled rule
Cuz donkey; sick lines, only from an array of ill mules (don key)


Pray to kill fools cuz you always gaspin Amen
Cuz to audios or text you couldnt be asked to lay ten (latent)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/don-d...ed-139841.html (Don Dotta - Godfather of no-showers and little faggit duckers *u just got owned*)
I'll harrass this gay man cuz his bars aint peeped
I'll have his body peelin like a car paint theif
They need to call a medic when his lungs get mushed up far
Cuz double D's couldnt get his weight up with a push up, bra
You'll need a good luck star, follow these activities clean
A virgin miracle drops? not without a nativity scene (verge in)
Im sadistically mean, I'll put a twist to ya spleen
takin dumps while on periods the only way your shit'll be mean
I give him the kiss of death watch him puckerin up
Him gettin pussy? Adonis merely a sucker for love (A don is, Adonis=was in love with a goddess)
Comin up with a hard plan? dont attempt to erect the plots
Your respect is shot, Punch would link even if youd connect the dots
Your lines expect to drop like the longest pieces in tetris
Don veto polls with his own bars, like mobs staff interfered elections (dont vito poles)
This queer perfected a wierd objection, bitches stayin back man
Your sayin wack stanz Cuz i'll eat dot up with playin pacman


Finish this vote later.. gots to go.

[SkitSoFrenic]

thats 3-0 KO correct?

[STRONGARM]

3 - 0 KO.. SkitSoFrenic Wins..!