B2: Con Wins 3-1 vs. Don Dotta

[STRONGARM]

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[Don Dotta]

Check.

[Con]

u ready D?

match me, or ill post more if u got more.


just forget tryin.. u 8 miles behind, im still snipin u fake
its more than myspace humiliation since Con's bulletin ya face
hulligan on chase! faggots coding finally flipped da switch
mortal enemy? nah. we da odd couple..only Dons the bitch
catch da pitch, depart then return always a sucker wit a cause
be in marine retrieves Don! seeing u only come back for da loss
m derranged on fags..ur such a bad shot..got no fight reasons
aims so bad..DNA Coding couldnt help you strike a right sequence
animate ya teeth in..my fists got brute force from dark constellations
leavin Double D's out for the season like cartoon character cancellations
DC got ya casket reservations. aint stoppin me settin em crews..
since u couldnt hold down Dex with iron studs and platinum screws

[Don Dotta]

This guy Con is washed up, no longer impressin it’s upsetting
It’s like war wit Don?!?.. Then “Suit Yaself” and forget dressin 4 the wedding
Smith N Wesson or the heady, machete or a line or two
TF got a purple heart in war.. Ill have his ‘Back-Up’ leakin spinal fluid!
Let’s speak truth and imma put his ego and heart on the line
Its not a rumor.. faggot only ran the league cuz noggah resigned!
I’ll swing the dagger through his retna.. throw his eyes off focus
Rf wouldn’t join Con-Track’s if they offered a years pay and sign on bonus!
Im already rich so forget this bitch.. Could care less about his two cents
And fuck fighting I spit lightning that leave Con-struct without blueprints!
Dumb fucks a nuissence, people will line for the betting..
Cuz it’s rare to see Con-Test unless there’s a prize at the ending!

[Criticize]

ust forget tryin.. u 8 miles behind, im still snipin u fake
its more than myspace humiliation since Con's bulletin ya face

catch da pitch, depart then return always a sucker wit a cause
be in marine retrieves Don! seeing u only come back for da loss
+________________________
This guy Con is washed up, no longer impressin it’s upsetting
It’s like war wit Don?!?.. Then “Suit Yaself” and forget dressin 4 the wedding




umm i vote con this is actualy a close battle. much closer than i expected, it was the normal shit that con drops. but this was the best iv seen from don. a few of your punches could have been worded better to make a better punchline. ie the suityaself line could have been worded bettter with the set up to make it hit harder, a few of your punchlines were a little played thats the only difference i can see between the 2 verses. good effort don just work on some more fresh shit.

v-con,

[Don Dotta]

much appreciated crit..

[SkitSoFrenic]

m derranged on fags..ur such a bad shot..got no fight reasons
aims so bad..DNA Coding couldnt help you strike a right sequence
animate ya teeth in..my fists got brute force from dark constellations
leavin Double D's out for the season like cartoon character cancellations
DC got ya casket reservations. aint stoppin me settin em crews..
since u couldnt hold down Dex with iron studs and platinum screws

LOL @ the double D line. Why didn't I think of that? Nice couple of lines here. Got pretty personal with solid punches. Although I didn't like your rhyme scheme.

VS

Smith N Wesson or the heady, machete or a line or two
TF got a purple heart in war.. Ill have his ‘Back-Up’ leakin spinal fluid!

Lol. Pretty nice flip. I think I've seen it or done it before but it was a good attempt. Other than this, you came with the some of the many con plays you can come with. Problem is some of em were forced (con track/contract) or worded bad (construct/ con strucked). This made your verse quite stale as it went along.

Vote - Con.

[Don Dotta]

stale..pfft..

[Kaeo.Seru]

I agree with Crit this is the best verse from Don I've seen in a minute. my only problem with it was the "Con" nameplays. they have all been used. the guy has well over 200 battles any nameplay you can think of has been used. Trust me. Con had some fresh concepts that helped make this battle interesting. i liked the Bulletin line. but wasn't too found of the gay lines. but overall this was a decent battle

Vote=Con

[Jay-Rede]

Con

just forget tryin.. u 8 miles behind, im still snipin u fake
its more than myspace humiliation since Con's bulletin ya face

Ok

hulligan on chase! faggots coding finally flipped da switch
mortal enemy? nah. we da odd couple..only Dons the bitch

Lol

catch da pitch, depart then return always a sucker wit a cause
be in marine retrieves Don! seeing u only come back for da loss

Ok

m derranged on fags..ur such a bad shot..got no fight reasons
aims so bad..DNA Coding couldnt help you strike a right sequence

Cool

animate ya teeth in..my fists got brute force from dark constellations
leavin Double D's out for the season like cartoon character cancellations

I used a similar punchline against him couple months back.. decent though

DC got ya casket reservations. aint stoppin me settin em crews..
since u couldnt hold down Dex with iron studs and platinum screws

Decent Finish

Dotta

This guy Con is washed up, no longer impressin it’s upsetting
It’s like war wit Don?!?.. Then “Suit Yaself” and forget dressin 4 the wedding

Ok

Smith N Wesson or the heady, machete or a line or two
TF got a purple heart in war.. Ill have his ‘Back-Up’ leakin spinal fluid!

Nice

Let’s speak truth and imma put his ego and heart on the line
Its not a rumor.. faggot only ran the league cuz noggah resigned!

Lmao

I’ll swing the dagger through his retna.. throw his eyes off focus
Rf wouldn’t join Con-Track’s if they offered a years pay and sign on bonus!

Dope

Im already rich so forget this bitch.. Could care less about his two cents
And fuck fighting I spit lightning that leave Con-struct without blueprints!

Nice wordplay

Dumb fucks a nuissence, people will line for the betting..
Cuz it’s rare to see Con-Test unless there’s a prize at the ending!

Nice close

V/ Dotta, feel he came a lil harder, nice battle guys

[Pembroke]

Con

just forget tryin.. u 8 miles behind, im still snipin u fake
its more than myspace humiliation since Con's bulletin ya face

Played.

hulligan on chase! faggots coding finally flipped da switch
mortal enemy? nah. we da odd couple..only Dons the bitch

Nah

catch da pitch, depart then return always a sucker wit a cause
be in marine retrieves Don! seeing u only come back for da loss

Nah

m derranged on fags..ur such a bad shot..got no fight reasons
aims so bad..DNA Coding couldnt help you strike a right sequence

Decent

animate ya teeth in..my fists got brute force from dark constellations
leavin Double D's out for the season like cartoon character cancellations

Forced

DC got ya casket reservations. aint stoppin me settin em crews..
since u couldnt hold down Dex with iron studs and platinum screws

Okay personal

Don Dot

This guy Con is washed up, no longer impressin it’s upsetting
It’s like war wit Don?!?.. Then “Suit Yaself” and forget dressin 4 the wedding

Eh

Smith N Wesson or the heady, machete or a line or two
TF got a purple heart in war.. Ill have his ‘Back-Up’ leakin spinal fluid!

No rhyme? It's alright

Let’s speak truth and imma put his ego and heart on the line
Its not a rumor.. faggot only ran the league cuz noggah resigned!

Decent.

I’ll swing the dagger through his retna.. throw his eyes off focus
Rf wouldn’t join Con-Track’s if they offered a years pay and sign on bonus!

Pretty weakly executed nameplay

Im already rich so forget this bitch.. Could care less about his two cents
And fuck fighting I spit lightning that leave Con-struct without blueprints!

Con nameplays have been used so many times it's like I'm numb to them.. the set up was alright.

Dumb fucks a nuissence, people will line for the betting..
Cuz it’s rare to see Con-Test unless there’s a prize at the ending!

Not really a diss

v/ Con

This could've really went either way if one of you had one more decent concept, but Con walked away with it. I know you both can do better with this.. I wanna see a 10 bar showdown next time.

Stay up

[HellRazor]

Con win 3-1