B1: SkitSoFrenic vs. RicanTheoryz Ends in DRAW!

[STRONGARM]

10 Bars Due Friday. Vote on other Battles..!

[SkitSoFrenic]

FINALLY

imma shit on this bitch

check check yo

[R!canTheoryz]

Shut Your Whackness Up^

-Checking IN ..

[R!canTheoryz]

Im Here Ill Be Keying Up Now ..

Its Not Hard to Tell The Faggot, That This Bitch Likes Meat,
Once I Spray Off, Its A "Miskito's Actions" Like An Insects Dislike In Feet' .
Bar 1: Miss Skit Toes

He Dont Get Pussy, And He Enjoys His Bitch When She's Fake'n the Moaning
Now, Skittle Get "Knocked Out With Precision" As If I Were Aiming In Bowling

Skittle: noun: a bowling pin of the type used in ninepins or (in England) skittles

Ill Puncture The Cheeks Of This Nerd, So You See Ill Rip Yo Face, Geek!
This "Childs Being Kidnapped For Paper" Like Tyreese's Son In Waist Deep


You'll Lose With Ease Once i start, Cuz Its Simple as we begin,
1 Punch Could "Put ya face to the side" Like We cant notice the pimples on ya chin OUCH!


With Agression Of A Stallion, Ill Prove This Farmer'll Get Abused With the Heel
Ill Tell Ya This Buds Light, But Ask His Nipples I Guess There Used to the Steel

Ill Rob This Heffer With A Pistol, Ill Prove This Fool Aint from the Ghetto
So When I Say "His Spits Are Getting Slept On" that'll Be Similar to The Druel On His Pillow

Smash His Face into concrete, Now His Jaw'll get A Grip With Tar,
i wouldnt have to "drop money on your raps" to show you tips on your bars

Fuck Up His Vision, So he'll be toxic when drinks come by
he'll get a "taste of my sharp punches" like boxing with porcupines

Detach Ya Spine Carefully, He'll Witness Once I Break His Neck real Slow
So Your Ass Likes the Double Head Actions Like Anal Sex With Dildo's

Him Winning this Match Is A Hoax, And I'd Say Its Bull if U Can Tell?
Ill Make Him "Swallow His Stomach" So He Can Really Be Full Of Himself

[SkitSoFrenic]

He can't stand a sissy fight let alone to fight brutes
One verse will make this mango soft like ripe fruits(man go)
This fag, how dare he step with thongs in his ass
Cuz Like evolution, Theoryz don't belong in this class(evolution theaory aint allowed to be taught)

With bad vocab, weak plays, and wack punchlines
And Judging by your stomach, you wouldn't last in crunch time(crunch=the exercise)
i know cuz you hear recess; it's time to take a break(Ri says)
I haven't plagiarize but I'll still rhyme against this fake(played your eyez)
Fuck his lines, he's too shook to stare, He's scared I'm eye'n
when Skits leer Rics spits is the only way you can compare our rhyme(lyrics)
Fuck'n queer, Faggots mouth stays open for cock like a urinal
Lookin here, His 'GW' is pussy writes like president Bush's journal(Gawdly Writin, look at his sig)
Always Ri leave stress, but I won't strain from this wack bitch(relieve stress)
Your a bore, Rican and I don't mean containers of acid(boric can)
In a line up of emcees, it's to see you are nexted
I'll throw cuffs on while your dead so I'll leave R rested(arrested)
No showing bitch, even on the cpu I'll never see hard drives
I'll cut you quick cuz you Never seem to be seen R rived(arrived)

(He's on the bottom left)
Still in the dark, I'll scorch him and ream him with spears
Only time he had universal shout outs, he was screaming in fear!!

Why won't my pictures show????

Votess???

[Criticize]

th Agression Of A Stallion, Ill Prove This Farmer'll Get Abused With the Heel
Ill Tell Ya This Buds Light, But Ask His Nipples I Guess There Used to the Steel

Ill Rob This Heffer With A Pistol, Ill Prove This Fool Aint from the Ghetto
So When I Say "His Spits Are Getting Slept On" that'll Be Similar to The Druel On His Pillow
_________________
He can't stand a sissy fight let alone to fight brutes
One verse will make this mango soft like ripe fruits(man go)
This fag, how dare he step with thongs in his ass
Cuz Like evolution, Theoryz don't belong in this class
Fuck his lines, he's too shook to stare, He's scared I'm eye'n
when Skits leer Rics spits is the only way you can compare our rhyme(lyrics)
till in the dark, I'll scorch him and ream him with spears
Only time he had universal shout outs, he was screaming in fear!
__________________________
OK DECENT BATTLE. BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE. IM GOING TO GIVE YOU SOME ADVICE. RICAN THIS WAS A BETTER VERSE FOR YOU. YOU ARE GETTING BETTER YOU JUST NEED TO COME UP WITH SOME FRESHER CONCEPTS OR BETTER FLIPS OF CONCEPTS. LINES LIKE FULL OF YOURSELF ECT WHERE OLD/SIMPLE FLIPS YOU JUST NEED TO GET MORE CREATIVE AND TAKE YOUR LINES TO THE NEXT LEVEL.

SPITS COOL VERSE, ONLY PROBLEM IS SOME OF YOUR WORDPLAY IS TO FORCED. R RESTED. R RIVED I DIDNT DIG THEM YOU HAVE TO TRY NOT TO FORCE THE WORDPLAY AS MUCH LET IT COME NATURAL. IMO YOU SHOULD HAVE DROPPED SOME COOL METS OR PERSONALS IN STEAD OF A FEW FORCED WPS. UMM YOUR UNIVERSAL PICTURE LINE WAS COOL. JUST NEED TO KEEP WORKING ON YOUR THING AND GETTING BETTER BATTLE BY BATTLE.
I THINK SKITS HAD MORE GOOD PUNCHLINES AND JUST SEEMED TO BE A BIT FURTHER ADVANCED THAN RICAN. YOUR BOTH IMPROVING KEEP DOING IT AND YOU WILL KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER, LOOKING FWD TO SOME NEW COMPETITION FROM YOU GUYS IN THE FUTURE.

VOTE SKITZ.

[Kaeo.Seru]

This battle was easy to call for the simple fact that you guys had a lot of the same flaws within your verses. Both of you forced the wordplay WAY to hard. its pretty sad actually. Rican if you want to use a nameplay use his actual name dont take bits and parts of his name or even add letters to change it so it fits and even then it doesnt work. if you have to do all that your forcing it. and Skits if you have to explain the wordplay immediately after chances are its too forced. let it come natrually. R rived? nah man naaahhh. but the winner of this battle just had this won by a chin hair. real thin ya know. and thats only cuz he had a few lines that were slightly fresher and more original and that man would be SKITS

Vote= Skits

[SkitSoFrenic]

lol Yeah, it really was forced, but every other play on his name has been used already. You know Rican/reekin? lol

But thanks for the vote.

2-0 uppin

[Jay-Rede]

Rican Theories

Its Not Hard to Tell The Faggot, That This Bitch Likes Meat,
Once I Spray Off, Its A "Miskito's Actions" Like An Insects Dislike In Feet' .
Bar 1: Miss Skit Toes

Ok

He Dont Get Pussy, And He Enjoys His Bitch When She's Fake'n the Moaning
Now, Skittle Get "Knocked Out With Precision" As If I Were Aiming In Bowling

Coulda been flipped better, but decent attempt

Ill Puncture The Cheeks Of This Nerd, So You See Ill Rip Yo Face, Geek!
This "Childs Being Kidnapped For Paper" Like Tyreese's Son In Waist Deep

lol

You'll Lose With Ease Once i start, Cuz Its Simple as we begin,
1 Punch Could "Put ya face to the side" Like We cant notice the pimples on ya chin OUCH!

lol i see them

With Agression Of A Stallion, Ill Prove This Farmer'll Get Abused With the Heel
Ill Tell Ya This Buds Light, But Ask His Nipples I Guess There Used to the Steel

Haha

Ill Rob This Heffer With A Pistol, Ill Prove This Fool Aint from the Ghetto
So When I Say "His Spits Are Getting Slept On" that'll Be Similar to The Druel On His Pillow

Nice

Smash His Face into concrete, Now His Jaw'll get A Grip With Tar,
i wouldnt have to "drop money on your raps" to show you tips on your bars

ok

Fuck Up His Vision, So he'll be toxic when drinks come by
he'll get a "taste of my sharp punches" like boxing with porcupines

Ok

Detach Ya Spine Carefully, He'll Witness Once I Break His Neck real Slow
So Your Ass Likes the Double Head Actions Like Anal Sex With Dildo's

Filler

Him Winning this Match Is A Hoax, And I'd Say Its Bull if U Can Tell?
Ill Make Him "Swallow His Stomach" So He Can Really Be Full Of Himself

Ok finish

Skitsofrenic

He can't stand a sissy fight let alone to fight brutes
One verse will make this mango soft like ripe fruits(man go)

Decent

This fag, how dare he step with thongs in his ass
Cuz Like evolution, Theoryz don't belong in this class

hmm

With bad vocab, weak plays, and wack punchlines
And Judging by your stomach, you wouldn't last in crunch time

Nah

i know cuz you hear recess; it's time to take a break(Ri says)
I haven't plagiarize but I'll still rhyme against this fake(played your eyez)

Hmm

Fuck his lines, he's too shook to stare, He's scared I'm eye'n
when Skits leer Rics spits is the only way you can compare our rhyme(lyrics)

Not feeling

Fuck'n queer, Faggots mouth stays open for cock like a urinal
Lookin here, His 'GW' is pussy writes like president Bush's journal(Gawdly Writin, look at his sig)

??

Always Ri leave stress, but I won't strain from this wack bitch(relieve stress)
Your a bore, Rican and I don't mean containers of acid(boric can)

??

In a line up of emcees, it's to see you are nexted
I'll throw cuffs on while your dead so I'll leave R rested(arrested)

Weak attempt

No showing bitch, even on the cpu I'll never see hard drives
I'll cut you quick cuz you Never seem to be seen R rived(arrived)

Not feeling

Still in the dark, I'll scorch him and ream him with spears
Only time he had universal shout outs, he was screaming in fear!!

Ok finish

V/ Rican Against the odds? fuck it, i thought dude had better punches and flow, no offence to other guy, just felt Rican held his own... the pictures were mad annoying, copy and pasting that shit.. decent battle though.. look forward to the next

-1-

[Pembroke]

SkitSoFrenic

Its Not Hard to Tell The Faggot, That This Bitch Likes Meat,
Once I Spray Off, Its A "Miskito's Actions" Like An Insects Dislike In Feet' .
Bar 1: Miss Skit Toes

No..

He Dont Get Pussy, And He Enjoys His Bitch When She's Fake'n the Moaning
Now, Skittle Get "Knocked Out With Precision" As If I Were Aiming In Bowling

Not bad, but you fucked it up with the bad grammar at the end..

Ill Puncture The Cheeks Of This Nerd, So You See Ill Rip Yo Face, Geek!
This "Childs Being Kidnapped For Paper" Like Tyreese's Son In Waist Deep

Eh, never saw the movie

You'll Lose With Ease Once i start, Cuz Its Simple as we begin,
1 Punch Could "Put ya face to the side" Like We cant notice the pimples on ya chin OUCH!

Nah

With Agression Of A Stallion, Ill Prove This Farmer'll Get Abused With the Heel
Ill Tell Ya This Buds Light, But Ask His Nipples I Guess There Used to the Steel

Aight..

Ill Rob This Heffer With A Pistol, Ill Prove This Fool Aint from the Ghetto
So When I Say "His Spits Are Getting Slept On" that'll Be Similar to The Druel On His Pillow

Drool* this was okay..

Smash His Face into concrete, Now His Jaw'll get A Grip With Tar,
i wouldnt have to "drop money on your raps" to show you tips on your bars

K

Fuck Up His Vision, So he'll be toxic when drinks come by
he'll get a "taste of my sharp punches" like boxing with porcupines

Weak, you don't taste anything when you're boxing with porcupines.

Detach Ya Spine Carefully, He'll Witness Once I Break His Neck real Slow
So Your Ass Likes the Double Head Actions Like Anal Sex With Dildo's

Ehh..

Him Winning this Match Is A Hoax, And I'd Say Its Bull if U Can Tell?
Ill Make Him "Swallow His Stomach" So He Can Really Be Full Of Himself

Acceptable, I guess.

SkitSo

He can't stand a sissy fight let alone to fight brutes
One verse will make this mango soft like ripe fruits(man go)

Basic

This fag, how dare he step with thongs in his ass
Cuz Like evolution, Theoryz don't belong in this class(evolution theaory aint allowed to be taught)

Okay

With bad vocab, weak plays, and wack punchlines
And Judging by your stomach, you wouldn't last in crunch time(crunch=the exercise)

Alright.

i know cuz you hear recess; it's time to take a break(Ri says)
I haven't plagiarize but I'll still rhyme against this fake(played your eyez)

?

Fuck his lines, he's too shook to stare, He's scared I'm eye'n
when Skits leer Rics spits is the only way you can compare our rhyme(lyrics)

Weaaaaak..

Fuck'n queer, Faggots mouth stays open for cock like a urinal
Lookin here, His 'GW' is pussy writes like president Bush's journal(Gawdly Writin, look at his sig)

Weak.

Always Ri leave stress, but I won't strain from this wack bitch(relieve stress)
Your a bore, Rican and I don't mean containers of acid(boric can)

I didn't know Rican was pronounced Rick Can (ree-can) is how I pronounce it. Forced..

In a line up of emcees, it's to see you are nexted
I'll throw cuffs on while your dead so I'll leave R rested(arrested)

Basic

No showing bitch, even on the cpu I'll never see hard drives
I'll cut you quick cuz you Never seem to be seen R rived(arrived)

?

(He's on the bottom left)
Still in the dark, I'll scorch him and ream him with spears
Only time he had universal shout outs, he was screaming in fear!!

Creative, but awkward.

v/ Rican

Skit, you started off promising but you fell off badly in mid verse.. the CONSTANT attempts at wordplay just watered down the basic punches. Rican had just enough flare in his verse to surpass you.. keep elevating to both. Thanks for showing..

Stay up

[R!canTheoryz]

2-2 Just Like That Im Back In it You Fucking Colonial Dildo

[HellRazor]

This is a called Draw...You guys will be seeing each other again Next Week.