B1: RicanTheoryz vs. ((R.D. Famous))

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10 Bars Due Friday 07/25
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[R.D.]

Innage!

[R!canTheoryz]

Checking In .. g'luck

[R!canTheoryz]

Fuckkit, Quick key. I LIED! LMAO.

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Ill Swing My Fist With GLory Obviously it'll Make His Nose Bleed, Dur,
Of Course, Famous Loves Guys Chest Even Without Wearing The T-Shirt

Remove your Bodie Parts Painfully, Cuz Rican Devours You Slow, See
Fam Stay Next To Children? That STILL Doesnt Cover Up His horrible Immaturity

ill Stab his chest plates until his lungs are covered N' You Bleed, Punk!
Cuz your handles Never grabs attention like holding broken tea cups

Im not a magaican, your just the illusion crowd that see a few were tricky
He coudlnt raise hell on earth's city like adam sandler in Little Nicky

Football Practices wouldnt determine that he's quick in rain
feel the pain, cuz Your flow never stays on track like missing trains

You released nothing but fraudness, thats some hurting spams
he couldnt function a spin like electrical working fans

remove his pupils in a race, now im ahead can u see?
Kill this Human to leave famous in the box like dead celebrities


Only had time for 7 Sorry n g'luck

[R.D.]

as far as your flow goes.. im more impressed that you showed..
but like when bush was elected you'll see a lot of disappointing votes..

winner face con to win the belt and be proud of it..
you being there i doubt it..
the discussion buzzin with facts, i'll keep theories out of it..

i expect the famous flips, and to hear something about movie stars..
weak and same old shit, that all the opponents try to use in bars..

elevation is the key, but poor rican aint found the lock yet..
so he keeps searching for improvement like sailors do the lochness..

this guy just another person no body important has heard of..
don't you watch the news, the famous always get away with murda..

order us from ill to wack and this is probably what the sentence say..
just to mention names, famous theories.. kind like that whole big bang debate..

fuck name flips, ill attack this lovable huxtable like eddie murphy, RAW..
you going down sun comin up.. looks like you'll take an early fall..



only had like 2 bars done keyed the rest.. sorry know its wack.. holla!

[Xylo]

Ill Swing My Fist With GLory Obviously it'll Make His Nose Bleed, Dur,
Of Course, Famous Loves Guys Chest Even Without Wearing The T-Shirt
nah! man

Remove your Bodie Parts Painfully, Cuz Rican Devours You Slow, See
Fam Stay Next To Children? That STILL Doesnt Cover Up His horrible Immaturity
this is not a diss and does not work
ill Stab his chest plates until his lungs are covered N' You Bleed, Punk!
Cuz your handles Never grabs attention like holding broken tea cups
Does not rhyme nor is a diss to your opponent

Im not a magaican, your just the illusion crowd that see a few were tricky
He coudlnt raise hell on earth's city like adam sandler in Little Nicky
eh! not hard hitting at all

Football Practices wouldnt determine that he's quick in rain
feel the pain, cuz Your flow never stays on track like missing trains
decent finally!

You released nothing but fraudness, thats some hurting spams
he couldnt function a spin like electrical working fans
nah!

remove his pupils in a race, now im ahead can u see?
Kill this Human to leave famous in the box like dead celebrities
no! poor ending

-vs-

as far as your flow goes.. im more impressed that you showed..
but like when bush was elected you'll see a lot of disappointing votes..
ok but not hard

winner face con to win the belt and be proud of it..
you being there i doubt it..
the discussion buzzin with facts, i'll keep theories out of it..
decent try but structure fell off

i expect the famous flips, and to hear something about movie stars..
weak and same old shit, that all the opponents try to use in bars..
eh! lol!

elevation is the key, but poor rican aint found the lock yet..
so he keeps searching for improvement like sailors do the lochness..
lol! nice

this guy just another person no body important has heard of..
don't you watch the news, the famous always get away with murda..
eh!

order us from ill to wack and this is probably what the sentence say..
just to mention names, famous theories.. kind like that whole big bang debate..
a lil forced in structure but ok

fuck name flips, ill attack this lovable huxtable like eddie murphy, RAW..
you going down sun comin up.. looks like you'll take an early fall..

eh ok ending!

ok fellas ive seen you both bring it stronger than this.

Neither guy had killer insulting punches nor personals but the metas were aaaiight attempts
nothing spectacular

both verses seemed a bit rushed both guys had forced concepts but over all the guy with the better of the two verses to me was.

VOTE >Fame

[Exis]

Rican:

Ill Swing My Fist With GLory Obviously it'll Make His Nose Bleed, Dur,
Of Course, Famous Loves Guys Chest Even Without Wearing The T-Shirt

^^no...

Remove your Bodie Parts Painfully, Cuz Rican Devours You Slow, See
Fam Stay Next To Children? That STILL Doesnt Cover Up His horrible Immaturity

^^no again...

ill Stab his chest plates until his lungs are covered N' You Bleed, Punk!
Cuz your handles Never grabs attention like holding broken tea cups

^^hmm...

Im not a magaican, your just the illusion crowd that see a few were tricky
He coudlnt raise hell on earth's city like adam sandler in Little Nicky

^^ok...

Football Practices wouldnt determine that he's quick in rain
feel the pain, cuz Your flow never stays on track like missing trains

^^cool...

You released nothing but fraudness, thats some hurting spams
he couldnt function a spin like electrical working fans

^^weak...

remove his pupils in a race, now im ahead can u see?
Kill this Human to leave famous in the box like dead celebrities

^^don't like it...

R.D:

as far as your flow goes.. im more impressed that you showed..
but like when bush was elected you'll see a lot of disappointing votes..

^^aight...

winner face con to win the belt and be proud of it..
you being there i doubt it..
the discussion buzzin with facts, i'll keep theories out of it..

^^hmm , structure is all over the place...ain't feelin' it.

i expect the famous flips, and to hear something about movie stars..
weak and same old shit, that all the opponents try to use in bars..

^^ok...

elevation is the key, but poor rican aint found the lock yet..
so he keeps searching for improvement like sailors do the lochness..

^^best bar of the battle imo...

this guy just another person no body important has heard of..
don't you watch the news, the famous always get away with murda..

^^nah...

order us from ill to wack and this is probably what the sentence say..
just to mention names, famous theories.. kind like that whole big bang debate..

^^blah...

fuck name flips, ill attack this lovable huxtable like eddie murphy, RAW..
you going down sun comin up.. looks like you'll take an early fall..

^^ok...

pretty weak battle , not sure why both of you rushed verses...end result is a borin' read to be honest.I thought R.D.Famous had a better overall piece in terms of content and he attempted to diss his opponent for the most part , Rican I think had one line which I felt...more personals from the DC cat are the reason why Ima...

vote - R.D.Famous , stay upward peoples.

[SkitSoFrenic]

Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz

Ill Swing My Fist With GLory Obviously it'll Make His Nose Bleed, Dur,
Of Course, Famous Loves Guys Chest Even Without Wearing The T-Shirt

lol. nice nameplay. funny as hell but the dur part was a horrible wau of rhymin your bar

Remove your Bodie Parts Painfully, Cuz Rican Devours You Slow, See
Fam Stay Next To Children? That STILL Doesnt Cover Up His horrible Immaturity

nah

ill Stab his chest plates until his lungs are covered N' You Bleed, Punk!
Cuz your handles Never grabs attention like holding broken tea cups

ok. concept couldve been done better.

Im not a magaican, your just the illusion crowd that see a few were tricky
He coudlnt raise hell on earth's city like adam sandler in Little Nicky

decent

Football Practices wouldnt determine that he's quick in rain
feel the pain, cuz Your flow never stays on track like missing trains

decent

You released nothing but fraudness, thats some hurting spams
he couldnt function a spin like electrical working fans

meh. ok

remove his pupils in a race, now im ahead can u see?
Kill this Human to leave famous in the box like dead celebrities

already did the nameplay but the punch was iight

Originally Posted by R.D. Famous

as far as your flow goes.. im more impressed that you showed..
but like when bush was elected you'll see a lot of disappointing votes..

not feeling it

winner face con to win the belt and be proud of it..
you being there i doubt it..
the discussion buzzin with facts, i'll keep theories out of it..

ok nameplay

i expect the famous flips, and to hear something about movie stars..
weak and same old shit, that all the opponents try to use in bars..

lame

elevation is the key, but poor rican aint found the lock yet..
so he keeps searching for improvement like sailors do the lochness..

no. personal was meh. but no.

this guy just another person no body important has heard of..
don't you watch the news, the famous always get away with murda..

lol this was iight but it seemed like self hype

order us from ill to wack and this is probably what the sentence say..
just to mention names, famous theories.. kind like that whole big bang debate..

this was ok. concept was ok. nameplay was decent. couldve been executed better

fuck name flips, ill attack this lovable huxtable like eddie murphy, RAW..
you going down sun comin up.. looks like you'll take an early fall..

NO


only had like 2 bars done keyed the rest.. sorry know its wack.. holla!

WEAK BATTLE but rican was more consistent. so he gmv

return the favor. both of you plz

[Don Dotta]

Ill Swing My Fist With GLory Obviously it'll Make His Nose Bleed, Dur,
Of Course, Famous Loves Guys Chest Even Without Wearing The T-Shirt
lmao..horrible!
Remove your Bodie Parts Painfully, Cuz Rican Devours You Slow, See
Fam Stay Next To Children? That STILL Doesnt Cover Up His horrible Immaturity
No rhyme
ill Stab his chest plates until his lungs are covered N' You Bleed, Punk!
Cuz your handles Never grabs attention like holding broken tea cups
eh
Im not a magaican, your just the illusion crowd that see a few were tricky
He coudlnt raise hell on earth's city like adam sandler in Little Nicky
ehhh
Football Practices wouldnt determine that he's quick in rain
feel the pain, cuz Your flow never stays on track like missing trains
played concept,setup was lame..punch was weak
You released nothing but fraudness, thats some hurting spams
he couldnt function a spin like electrical working fans
ehhhh
remove his pupils in a race, now im ahead can u see?
Kill this Human to leave famous in the box like dead celebrities
barely passable



wasnt feelin much of your concepts..alot of rhymes were off and i see that some of your second lines are a bit long and that throws off the hole bar..work on multi usage and your setup's..bring fresher concepts..



as far as your flow goes.. im more impressed that you showed..
but like when bush was elected you'll see a lot of disappointing votes..
ehh
winner face con to win the belt and be proud of it..
you being there i doubt it..
the discussion buzzin with facts, i'll keep theories out of it..
nice concept,a little long but decent

i expect the famous flips, and to hear something about movie stars..
weak and same old shit, that all the opponents try to use in bars..
ehh
elevation is the key, but poor rican aint found the lock yet..
so he keeps searching for improvement like sailors do the lochness..
ok
this guy just another person no body important has heard of..
don't you watch the news, the famous always get away with murda..
Nice
order us from ill to wack and this is probably what the sentence say..
just to mention names, famous theories.. kind like that whole big bang debate..
ehh..to stretched
fuck name flips, ill attack this lovable huxtable like eddie murphy, RAW..
you going down sun comin up.. looks like you'll take an early fall
Decent


verse wasnt that great but you had a few decent bars..concepts were ok as well but some of the flips just werent there..but overall i think you got this...






Vote:R.D.

[Con]

v-RD

everyone else cept that one guy explained why..dont need to add more..

[Criticize]

rd wins.

rican you have the ground work down with your text, now you need to take it to the next level, try getting more creative. your lines are either old concepts or simple concepts, and not the good simple/funny personal lines or whatever. just the bad dont hit hard simple, i.e the tracks/trains line.
you need to come up with some fresh idea's, better mets and wp and try for some personals too. keep improving.

rd did enough to win this, it was not a good battle. but i thought your lines were better. dont use those self name play crap bars again inless they are dope. famous getting away with murder was not. your nameplays on rican were ok. nothing special but enough to get you the win. i think you really need to work on your improving your bars. like in a 7 bar battle you will have 2 ok lines and 5 bad lines. you need to make that 2 nice lines and 5 ok bars. keep doing the thing.

vote- rd.

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5 - 1.. RD Wins..!