B1 ((RicanTheoryz)) vs. Panoramik

[STRONGARM]

10 Bars due Friday. Vote on other battles..!

[R!canTheoryz]

So 10 Bars? Due 2morrow? lol

-Checking in

[Panoramik]

LOL checkin in

[Panoramik]

iight, off the top like always...good luck fam

Listening to Jay Z - Numb/Encore

aYo
I'll pierce ya armor, Pan is the fiercest bomber, Fucking heads up worse than epileptic barbers-I'm The kid you dont wanna ever see..traps stay shut when I'm buckin duck emcees..Theoryz recognize skill when you hear it, Talk shit, but stay reppin 40 deep queer cliques..Claimin next shit, but its strictly text shit, chess club, waterboy, straight net shit-The Essensce of herbals, Pan's wreckin this rap Urkel, so ya switch hobbies when I'm through flexin the verbals..On site I'll murk you, with mics I'll hurt you, half dead with vultures formin ya cypher circle..A minor rep, Verses got "no fire left", ya wack tapes get dubbed over like "Iron Chef"..Wanna exchange hits, but I'm sharp, razor shit, battle mismatched, like the Thorton & Angelina Jolie relationship-Try to challenge me, ya straight faggotry, I'm sick of pussy emcees....Rican check ya anatomy..Cus kid u bore me, so No dap, spittin those Corny raps, ya vynal couldnt get a spin inside laundrymats..I aint a critic, you just have monotonous shitty lyrics, Its like ya CDs been skippin for 60 minutes-when fists are raised i'll make you scramble quick- i dismantle scripts- when i handle clips, turning any calm scene into a Rambo flick... now everytime ya see Sly on tv you change the channel quick- im chasin ya down, ya good as dead if ya sandle slips...fear not- im bombin' boat docks...leavin' PIERS(peers) DROPPED- most of ya bars are stolen so thats why they appear HOTT- Beat me? afraid not-Pan got you stressed, drippin' wet from piss n' sweat...Never diss a vet...Im past loosin intrest, im at tha risk of debt-I'll smack ya mouth, as ya leak plasma in mass amounts...blackin out, on tha pavement spassin' out...Why even ask for bouts?-You got tha wackest sound...I'll crack ya crowns while spittin' tragic nouns...Pan packs massive power-Blastin' cowards, ya lines so 'plane'(plain) they could crash in towers...My styles fouler...wiping out any terrorist threat, wanna talk about' street cred...but like a "Bibby jumper', you "got no balls outside the net"...Disregard ya dogs, I marked em all, now watch the iron clap like tony starks applause..I smoked your ass, ya never been known to last, so "shook".. your "blurred in pictures & photographs"....Bringin' heat back, when illness relapse, Pan raps tighter than Patrick Ewing's knee caps..I'll run circles round this cat, take away his oxygen ta seal his death...Play "keep away with his lungs", so I can watch him try ta "catch his breath!"

[R!canTheoryz]

lol, Its Madd Hard For Me to Read Your Verse :( Ill Drop Now .. Sorry for the Delay ..

His Talent Couldnt Find Sucess Nor Where Abouts?
-You Can Pretend Illness With Muscle,
But Thats More Noticeable Then Dodge'n Venom's Callouts

Fuck A Mean Mug, The Cough Fee'll Make You Throw Slow Grins,
-Only Reason Your Still Undefeated,
Is Because Your Matches Were All No Show Wins


One Slice From the Machete'll Drop His Spagetti When Stamania Is Felt,
Cuz We Still Wouldnt Need "Beyonds Approval" To Realize He Aint Ready For the Belt

Ok, He's Had His Fun N Laughs This Is Where His Boring Stops,
Without Skills Of A Steward, Panel Get Rinsed Like Dishes & Dirty Pots

Your Strength is Bareable With Low Rates, It Proves That Plenty Quit,
Fuck Your Choices, Ill Have Anor X' It/Anorexic Like Deny'n A Skinny Bitch

Crashing Jeeps? Nah, He Has A Talent So Generic Its Plain to See,
So Its True Everybody Dodge Ram Like A Fucking Missing SUV.

Weak Wordplay, And Forced Punches Will Get Victory to Take This Bitch
-Once You Awake With Hunger, Pan Will Get Served Like A Breakfast Dish

My Fist Are Quick And Sharp Results Will Show Cheeks Need Patches,
-Even If You Was Champion, We Wouldnt See Title Over Ya Head Like Hardcore Matches

My Quick 16, I Dunno If You Have 16 But Hey Its A Verse lol ?

[Xylo]

Yo! fellas no hate but i have never seen a verse created like that!


Vote = RT

Better format of verse better punches personals

sorry man but thats not a great way to create a verse in my opinion
but who am i!

[R.D.]

Panoramik
I'll pierce ya armor, Pan is the fiercest bomber, Fucking heads up worse than epileptic barbers-
played line.. decent multis nothing special for an opener
I'm The kid you dont wanna ever see..traps stay shut when I'm buckin duck emcees..
nope nothing here either
Theoryz recognize skill when you hear it, Talk shit, but stay reppin 40 deep queer cliques..Claimin next shit, but its strictly text shit, chess club, waterboy, straight net shit-
looks like a bit of rambling and no signs of anything real in there
The Essensce of herbals, Pan's wreckin this rap Urkel, so ya switch hobbies when I'm through flexin the verbals..
nope.. played multis were even slackin cause they all had stretched syllables to match
On site I'll murk you, with mics I'll hurt you, half dead with vultures formin ya cypher circle..
hmm.. that was kind of dope i liked that right there my dude
A minor rep, Verses got "no fire left", ya wack tapes get dubbed over like "Iron Chef"
eh nothin amazing but was a cool line
..Wanna exchange hits, but I'm sharp, razor shit, battle mismatched, like the Thorton & Angelina Jolie relationship
not really feelin this but it was ok
-Try to challenge me, ya straight faggotry, I'm sick of pussy emcees....Rican check ya anatomy..
no
Cus kid u bore me, so No dap, spittin those Corny raps, ya vynal couldnt get a spin inside laundrymats..
again no
I aint a critic, you just have monotonous shitty lyrics, Its like ya CDs been skippin for 60 minutes-
monotonous.. that describes a voice, this is a text battle.. no
when fists are raised i'll make you scramble quick- i dismantle scripts- when i handle clips, turning any calm scene into a Rambo flick...
cool bar here but thats an open mic or something not a battle line
now everytime ya see Sly on tv you change the channel quick- im chasin ya down, ya good as dead if ya sandle slips...
no.. sandle slips.. smh
fear not- im bombin' boat docks...leavin' PIERS(peers) DROPPED- most of ya bars are stolen so thats why they appear HOTT-
eh!
Beat me? afraid not-Pan got you stressed, drippin' wet from piss n' sweat...Never diss a vet...Im past loosin intrest, im at tha risk of debt-
no thanks
I'll smack ya mouth, as ya leak plasma in mass amounts...blackin out, on tha pavement spassin' out...Why even ask for bouts?-You got tha wackest sound...I'll crack ya crowns while spittin' tragic nouns...
lot of multis no hard punches here
Pan packs massive power-Blastin' cowards, ya lines so 'plane'(plain) they could crash in towers...My styles fouler...
fuck you.. seriously man not cool the whole towers thing
wiping out any terrorist threat, wanna talk about' street cred...but like a "Bibby jumper', you "got no balls outside the net"
nice.. i like that right there dont n if its played or not but i like it
...Disregard ya dogs, I marked em all, now watch the iron clap like tony starks applause..
eh im not much for gun talk in a internet battle
I smoked your ass, ya never been known to last, so "shook".. your "blurred in pictures & photographs"....
nice i liked that
Bringin' heat back, when illness relapse, Pan raps tighter than Patrick Ewing's knee caps..
sorry not informed about ewings knee caps and i dont get it
I'll run circles round this cat, take away his oxygen ta seal his death...Play "keep away with his lungs", so I can watch him try ta "catch his breath!"
nice i liked it

dont take this the wrong way but that may have been the most akward verse ever typed and impossible to count the actual bars my pinion.. i figured shit was either bit or you are that inconsistent random decent bars blasted into a lump or trash man you need some serious work but have potential
RicanTheoryz
His Talent Couldnt Find Sucess Nor Where Abouts?
-You Can Pretend Illness With Muscle,
But Thats More Noticeable Then Dodge'n Venom's Callouts (Annyone wanna get Ate?)

ok opener nothing insane but looking good so far

Fuck A Mean Mug, The Cough Fee'll Make You Throw Slow Grins,
-Only Reason Your Still Undefeated,
Is Because Your Matches Were All No Show Wins

word i like that if its true shit is hot

One Slice From the Machete'll Drop His Spagetti When Stamania Is Felt,
Cuz We Still Wouldnt Need "Beyonds Approval" (Heavyweight Title Shot) To Realize He Aint Ready For the Belt

word.. good shit here

Ok, He's Had His Fun N Laughs This Is Where His Boring Stops,
Without Skills Of A Steward, Panel Get Rinsed Like Dishes & Dirty Pots

played line but whatever

Your Strength is Bareable With Low Rates, It Proves That Plenty Quit,
Fuck Your Choices, Ill Have Anor X' It/Anorexic Like Deny'n A Skinny Bitch

what?? please explain whos anor?and ou volunteer to not eat when you are anorexic otherwise its starving

Crashing Jeeps? Nah, He Has A Talent So Generic Its Plain to See,
So Its True Everybody Dodge Ram Like A Fucking Missing SUV.

dodge ram is a pick up you are reachin way too far anyway

Weak Wordplay, And Forced Punches Will Get Victory to Take This Bitch
-Once You Awake With Hunger, Pan Will Get Served Like A Breakfast Dish

word.. decent enough

My Fist Are Quick And Sharp Results Will Show Cheeks Need Patches,
-Even If You Was Champion, We Wouldnt See Title Over Ya Head Like Hardcore Matches

eh reachin not worded well anyway..

average verse at best wasn't feeling many of the punches

v-rican
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[STRONGARM]

2 - 0 Rican..

[Criticize]

rican your verse was pretty average, some of your early bars where ok but not really creative or hard hitting, but not BAD. like the no show/ beyond not ready lines.
anor x it line was crap, you cant really do a name play with the middle of a dudes name like anor. no1 calls him anor, they may call you rican or theories or rican theroies. but this dude would be known as pan or panoramic no way can you try and make a play on amor. no way in hell, that was rubbish dont do that again.

the pan play could have been good, but your wording wasnt good and made it basic. but it had potential.



pan worst style ever, you probably have waaaaaaaaay to many bars their, you need to put in a style like ricans hes is pretty average though spliting up every bar instead of having a verse, look at my vs tyrants battle or one of the other battles from people who have been around and gauge how to post up a good verse, the voters can read easily.

ok your multi's are cool, keeps the flow going, but they are forced. i can tell this because they take away from the impact of your punch, your wording of your punches struggles badly because you are forcing to many multi's in there. with a normal looking verse this would not be an issue i dont think.
the 60minute skipping and thorton jolie lines were ok, not good though and not well worded, you didnt have any good hits but you show you have potential and just need to work on creativity and wording.

vote- rican.

pretty poor battle. rican had a cpl more ok lines.

[Beyond]

I'll pierce ya armor, Pan is the fiercest bomber,
Fucking heads up worse than epileptic barbers-
Not too original.
I'm The kid you dont wanna ever see..
traps stay shut when I'm buckin duck emcees..
Filler.
Theoryz recognize skill when you hear it,
Talk shit, but stay reppin 40 deep queer cliques..
Filler.
Claimin next shit, but its strictly text shit,
chess club, waterboy, straight net shit-
Weak.
The Essensce of herbals, Pan's wreckin this rap Urkel,
so ya switch hobbies when I'm through flexin the verbals..
Self-hype.
On site I'll murk you, with mics I'll hurt you,
half dead with vultures formin ya cypher circle..
Seen similar lines, but I like it.
A minor rep, Verses got "no fire left",
ya wack tapes get dubbed over like "Iron Chef"..
Decent.
Wanna exchange hits, but I'm sharp, razor shit,
battle mismatched, like the Thorton & Angelina Jolie relationship-
Connection's too weak.
Try to challenge me, ya straight faggotry,
I'm sick of pussy emcees....Rican check ya anatomy..
Humorous.
Cus kid u bore me, so No dap, spittin those Corny raps,
ya vynal couldnt get a spin inside laundrymats..
Alright.
I aint a critic, you just have monotonous shitty lyrics,
Its like ya CDs been skippin for 60 minutes-
Alright.
when fists are raised i'll make you scramble quick- i dismantle scripts-
when i handle clips, turning any calm scene into a Rambo flick...
Self-hype.
now everytime ya see Sly on tv you change the channel quick-
im chasin ya down, ya good as dead if ya sandle slips...
Filler.
fear not- im bombin' boat docks...leavin' PIERS(peers) DROPPED-
most of ya bars are stolen so thats why they appear HOTT-
Wordplay, but indirect.
Beat me? afraid not-Pan got you stressed, drippin' wet from piss n' sweat...
Never diss a vet...Im past loosin intrest, im at tha risk of debt-
Played.
I'll smack ya mouth, as ya leak plasma in mass amounts...
blackin out, on tha pavement spassin' out...Why even ask for bouts?-
Filler.
You got tha wackest sound...I'll crack ya crowns
while spittin' tragic nouns...Pan packs massive power-
Self-hype.
Blastin' cowards, ya lines so 'plane'(plain) they could crash in towers...
Extremely played.
My styles fouler...wiping out any terrorist threat,
wanna talk about' street cred...
but like a "Bibby jumper', you "got no balls outside the net"...
Played elements.
Disregard ya dogs, I marked em all,
now watch the iron clap like tony starks applause..
Creative, but guntalk.
I smoked your ass, ya never been known to last,
so "shook".. your "blurred in pictures & photographs"....
Interesting.
Bringin' heat back, when illness relapse,
Pan raps tighter than Patrick Ewing's knee caps..
Extremely played wordplay.
I'll run circles round this cat, take away his oxygen ta seal his death...
Play "keep away with his lungs", so I can watch him try ta "catch his breath!"
Real played phrase punch.

vs

His Talent Couldnt Find Sucess Nor Where Abouts?
-You Can Pretend Illness With Muscle,
But Thats More Noticeable Then Dodge'n Venom's Callouts
Weak connection.
Fuck A Mean Mug, The Cough Fee'll Make You Throw Slow Grins,
-Only Reason Your Still Undefeated,
Is Because Your Matches Were All No Show Wins
First line has some '05 Apostle wordplay in it, lol. Rest was personal, but no punch.
One Slice From the Machete'll Drop His Spagetti When Stamania Is Felt,
Cuz We Still Wouldnt Need "Beyonds Approval" To Realize He Aint Ready For the Belt
Not bad.
Ok, He's Had His Fun N Laughs This Is Where His Boring Stops,
Without Skills Of A Steward, Panel Get Rinsed Like Dishes & Dirty Pots
Good nameplay.
Your Strength is Bareable With Low Rates, It Proves That Plenty Quit,
Fuck Your Choices, Ill Have Anor X' It/Anorexic Like Deny'n A Skinny Bitch
Forced wordplay.
Crashing Jeeps? Nah, He Has A Talent So Generic Its Plain to See,
So Its True Everybody Dodge Ram Like A Fucking Missing SUV.
Good nameplay concept, but didn't like how you flipped it.
Weak Wordplay, And Forced Punches Will Get Victory to Take This Bitch
-Once You Awake With Hunger, Pan Will Get Served Like A Breakfast Dish
Already used a similar nameplay.
My Fist Are Quick And Sharp Results Will Show Cheeks Need Patches,
-Even If You Was Champion, We Wouldnt See Title Over Ya Head Like Hardcore Matches
Uh, I think I know what you mean, but blah.


This was a pretty lackluster battle. Panoramik dropped like 24 bars, which is against the rules. He tried to hide it by making his font small and having it all muddled together. Pretty low. As it is, he wasn't consistent enough anyway to take this. Too much filler, self-hype, and unoriginality in his verse. Rican didn't come good either and I was tempted to give the battle to Panoramik, but the fact that he had way more content than the rules provided tipped my decision.

Rican

[STRONGARM]

KO.. Rican Wins..!