Alter.E.Goe -vs- KlutCh

[Malone]

8 bars (no more, no less)
verses due -- tuesday 12/20

Vote on two battles or get docked votes!

[iLLushun]

i'm gonna go ahead and check..good luck Klutch, dont come Eze...

[KlutCh.]

~!check!~

everything is Eze.

[iLLushun]

i'll have mine up later today forsure

[iLLushun]

iight, here..good luck....

Listen, you got the Extra support in this battle, like you on Crutches...
Trust it, if you put the title next to ya name, and still couldnt klutch it...
Truthfully, rap just isn't ya thing, so you should help ya peers...
Cuz you'd have a better chance at Scratchin, like Missin gears...
Dude, its time to annilate this so called Modern marvel...
So, I'm Knock this dude out the winners cicrle, like playin marbels...
K's on tight ropes battle me, but this aint an acrobatic feat…
Staring into two black holes, like hes lookin at his Graffix Heat..
Your justa kid admiring me, and I'm the clouds in the skies...
Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...
Two heads are better than one Cuz that means Alt always prevails...
No matter how the coin lands, Its heads up, like a coin wit no tails...
(Jay Says: What THE FUCKS UP NOW!!!)
K thinks he's to Hot but it's time i reversed what lies he was told…
Lay some ice on His Keyboard, so he can feel what its like to be cold ....
His own he can’t hold, dudes lucky to have gotten this far in the tourney…
Put him on a gurney, cuz Home sickness has ended his LW Journey…

uppin for your shit...

[KlutCh.]

Alter Ego aka. Ellusion
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ur the underdog for a reason, ur ill? im not patient
do it quik, watch me ‘Cut You Off in a Flash’ like ‘Call Waitin’!!
its ur fate N I keep heat in both hands
wont hesistate to ‘X El_’ (excel) like those ‘Spreadsheet Programs’!!
better stay low man, like I said I keep a tek with me
spray this rookie down an ‘Take this Pussy Out’ like a ‘Hysterectomie’!!
wut did u expect from me? I always come with C-4
an ima ‘X over Alt_’ like the ‘Buttons on Keyboards’!!*
its nothing to flow like im sea-born, im one in a million
always above ur level like im one with the ceil’n…ima havta scar and ‘Mark E_ (marquee)’ like a fck’n ‘Pavilion’!!
Ive come to the feel’n ur gonna lose, no innuendos, came
to put the barrel to ur head an ‘Blow a Cartridge’ like ‘Cleanin Nintendo Games’!!
I reload, aim u start to say ur prayers
til I make ‘El_eat (elite) shots’ like ‘All-Star Players’!!
…
its certain dude that im hurt’n u, an
at ur funeral ur fam will ‘Pray ova Alter_’ like ‘Church Communions’!!
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*look under the 'X' key

yea...ok
uppZ! on the votes.

[KlutCh.]

Originally Posted by Alter.E.Goe

Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...

lol..

[iLLushun]

good drop homie, good luck....lets get some votes...

[KlutCh.]

thnx..N..plz

uppZ!

[Plot]

Alt
Listen, you got the Extra support in this battle, like you on Crutches...
Trust it, if you put the title next to ya name, and still couldnt klutch it...
~cool np
Truthfully, rap just isn't ya thing, so you should help ya peers...
Cuz you'd have a better chance at Scratchin, like Missin gears...
~nice
Dude, its time to annilate this so called Modern marvel...
So, I'm Knock this dude out the winners cicrle, like playin marbels...
~dope
K's on tight ropes battle me, but this aint an acrobatic feat…
Staring into two black holes, like hes lookin at his Graffix Heat..
~didnt feel it
Your justa kid admiring me, and I'm the clouds in the skies...
Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...
~thas dope
Two heads are better than one Cuz that means Alt always prevails...
No matter how the coin lands, Its heads up, like a coin wit no tails...
~ehh
Jay Says: What THE FUCKS UP NOW!!!)
K thinks he's to Hot but it's time i reversed what lies he was told…
Lay some ice on His Keyboard, so he can feel what its like to be cold ....
~weak
His own he can’t hold, dudes lucky to have gotten this far in the tourney…
Put him on a gurney, cuz Home sickness has ended his LW Journey…
~nice..
~some fire lines & a couple of misses.

Klu
ur the underdog for a reason, ur ill? im not patient
do it quik, watch me ‘Cut You Off in a Flash’ like ‘Call Waitin’!!
~ok
its ur fate N I keep heat in both hands
wont hesistate to ‘X El_’ (excel) like those ‘Spreadsheet Programs’!!
~nice np.
better stay low man, like I said I keep a tek with me
spray this rookie down an ‘Take this Pussy Out’ like a ‘Hysterectomie’!!
~played
wut did u expect from me? I always come with C-4
an ima ‘X over Alt_’ like the ‘Buttons on Keyboards’!!*
~nutha nice np
its nothing to flow like im sea-born, im one in a million
always above ur level like im one with the ceil’n…
ima havta scar and ‘Mark E_ (marquee)’ like a fck’n ‘Pavilion’!!
~bit strecthed, ok punch
Ive come to the feel’n ur gonna lose, no innuendos, came
to put the barrel to ur head an ‘Blow a Cartridge’ like ‘Cleanin Nintendo Games’!!
~thas ill
I reload, aim u start to say ur prayers
til I make ‘El_eat (elite) shots’ like ‘All-Star Players’!!
~ok np
its certain dude that im hurt’n u, an
at ur funeral ur fam will ‘Pray ova Alter_’ like ‘Church Communions’!!
~weak np.
~lots of nameflips. couple of fire generals.

V- Klutch, just edged it.

[iLLushun]

0-1 uppin..

[Fluent]

Alter.E.Goe

Listen, you got the Extra support in this battle, like you on Crutches...
Trust it, if you put the title next to ya name, and still couldnt klutch it...
Not Bad
Truthfully, rap just isn't ya thing, so you should help ya peers...
Cuz you'd have a better chance at Scratchin, like Missin gears...
Decent
Dude, its time to annilate this so called Modern marvel...
So, I'm Knock this dude out the winners cicrle, like playin marbels...
Cool
K's on tight ropes battle me, but this aint an acrobatic feat…
Staring into two black holes, like hes lookin at his Graffix Heat..
Nope
Your justa kid admiring me, and I'm the clouds in the skies...
Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...
Cool
Two heads are better than one Cuz that means Alt always prevails...
No matter how the coin lands, Its heads up, like a coin wit no tails...
This seemed like a good idea but poorly worded
K thinks he's to Hot but it's time i reversed what lies he was told…
Lay some ice on His Keyboard, so he can feel what its like to be cold ....
So you're saying he was hot but you're making him cold? Weak
His own he can’t hold, dudes lucky to have gotten this far in the tourney…
Put him on a gurney, cuz Home sickness has ended his LW Journey…
Decent

Klutch

ur the underdog for a reason, ur ill? im not patient
do it quik, watch me ‘Cut You Off in a Flash’ like ‘Call Waitin’!!
Wordplay need something else to tie in the Flash part
its ur fate N I keep heat in both hands
wont hesistate to ‘X El_’ (excel) like those ‘Spreadsheet Programs’!!
Played
better stay low man, like I said I keep a tek with me
spray this rookie down an ‘Take this Pussy Out’ like a ‘Hysterectomie’!!
Played
wut did u expect from me? I always come with C-4
an ima ‘X over Alt_’ like the ‘Buttons on Keyboards’!!*
Better nameplay
its nothing to flow like im sea-born, im one in a million
always above ur level like im one with the ceil’n…ima havta scar and ‘Mark E_ (marquee)’ like a fck’n ‘Pavilion’!!
Weak nameplay, nameplays should be based on nicknames or the full names, he wasn't called E ever. Mark seems weak anyway, you want to burn him in acid or something, not just mark him
Ive come to the feel’n ur gonna lose, no innuendos, came
to put the barrel to ur head an ‘Blow a Cartridge’ like ‘Cleanin Nintendo Games’!!
Decent
I reload, aim u start to say ur prayers
til I make ‘El_eat (elite) shots’ like ‘All-Star Players’!!
Decent
its certain dude that im hurt’n u, an
at ur funeral ur fam will ‘Pray ova Alter_’ like ‘Church Communions’!!
Didn't like it

Vote: Alter.E.Goe

Reason: Had more creativity, Klutch didn't seem to have anything left from last round and ended up using way too many nameplays and most weren't too good.

[Ruck]

Listen, you got the Extra support in this battle, like you on Crutches...
Trust it, if you put the title next to ya name, and still couldnt klutch it...
decent
Truthfully, rap just isn't ya thing, so you should help ya peers...
Cuz you'd have a better chance at Scratchin, like Missin gears...
nah
Dude, its time to annilate this so called Modern marvel...
So, I'm Knock this dude out the winners cicrle, like playin marbels...
lol good
K's on tight ropes battle me, but this aint an acrobatic feat…
Staring into two black holes, like hes lookin at his Graffix Heat..
nah
Your justa kid admiring me, and I'm the clouds in the skies...
Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...
nice
Two heads are better than one Cuz that means Alt always prevails...
No matter how the coin lands, Its heads up, like a coin wit no tails...
punch?
(Jay Says: What THE FUCKS UP NOW!!!)
K thinks he's to Hot but it's time i reversed what lies he was told…
Lay some ice on His Keyboard, so he can feel what its like to be cold ....
alright
His own he can’t hold, dudes lucky to have gotten this far in the tourney…
Put him on a gurney, cuz Home sickness has ended his LW Journey…
hmm doesnt flow that well.

VS

ur the underdog for a reason, ur ill? im not patient
do it quik, watch me ‘Cut You Off in a Flash’ like ‘Call Waitin’!!
decent
its ur fate N I keep heat in both hands
wont hesistate to ‘X El_’ (excel) like those ‘Spreadsheet Programs’!!
niice
better stay low man, like I said I keep a tek with me
spray this rookie down an ‘Take this Pussy Out’ like a ‘Hysterectomie’!!
nah
wut did u expect from me? I always come with C-4
an ima ‘X over Alt_’ like the ‘Buttons on Keyboards’!!*
nice nameplay
its nothing to flow like im sea-born, im one in a million
always above ur level like im one with the ceil’n…ima havta scar and ‘Mark E_ (marquee)’ like a fck’n ‘Pavilion’!!
stretched but dope
Ive come to the feel’n ur gonna lose, no innuendos, came
to put the barrel to ur head an ‘Blow a Cartridge’ like ‘Cleanin Nintendo Games’!!
eh
I reload, aim u start to say ur prayers
til I make ‘El_eat (elite) shots’ like ‘All-Star Players’!!
nameplay nice

vote: Klutch

dude came with the nameplays.......alter has gotten heaps better

[KlutCh.]

2-1 me...

uppZ!

[Phonix]

Elushun:

Listen, you got the Extra support in this battle, like you on Crutches...
Trust it, if you put the title next to ya name, and still couldnt klutch it..

1st line is played out, 2nd line ok ur going at his name but at what relevance
.
Truthfully, rap just isn't ya thing, so you should help ya peers...
Cuz you'd have a better chance at Scratchin, like Missin gears...

What telling him to scratch disks instead of rap, i think im missing something is he a failed DJ or something cus this would be a cool personal but i dont think it is so therfore this is wack..i dont see how telling some1 they could DJ is a diss.

Dude, its time to annilate this so called Modern marvel...
So, I'm Knock this dude out the winners cicrle, like playin marbels...

Herd better winners circle lines but this is definetly an improvement fo you

K's on tight ropes battle me, but this aint an acrobatic feat…
Staring into two black holes, like hes lookin at his Graffix Heat..

Ok

Your justa kid admiring me, and I'm the clouds in the skies...
Me get beat, ha, I think ya hoods too tight over your eyes...

Wack

Two heads are better than one Cuz that means Alt always prevails...
No matter how the coin lands, Its heads up, like a coin wit no tails...
(Jay Says: What THE FUCKS UP NOW!!!)

Wording is off as fuck, like a coin with no tails imo is just wack, concept could of been sick but how u worded it was fucked

K thinks he's to Hot but it's time i reversed what lies he was told…
Lay some ice on His Keyboard, so he can feel what its like to be cold ....

Played

His own he can’t hold, dudes lucky to have gotten this far in the tourney…
Put him on a gurney, cuz Home sickness has ended his LW Journey

Again wording, could of been dope ended up weak.

VS

Klutch:

ur the underdog for a reason, ur ill? im not patient
do it quik, watch me ‘Cut You Off in a Flash’ like ‘Call Waitin’!!

Ok

its ur fate N I keep heat in both hands
wont hesistate to ‘X El_’ (excel) like those ‘Spreadsheet Programs’!!

Played

better stay low man, like I said I keep a tek with me
spray this rookie down an ‘Take this Pussy Out’ like a ‘Hysterectomie’!!

Immature+Wack+played

wut did u expect from me? I always come with C-4
an ima ‘X over Alt_’ like the ‘Buttons on Keyboards’!!*

Ok

its nothing to flow like im sea-born, im one in a million
always above ur level like im one with the ceil’n…ima havta scar and ‘Mark E_ (marquee)’ like a fck’n ‘Pavilion’!!

Dope

Ive come to the feel’n ur gonna lose, no innuendos, came
to put the barrel to ur head an ‘Blow a Cartridge’ like ‘Cleanin Nintendo Games’!!

Played

I reload, aim u start to say ur prayers
til I make ‘El_eat (elite) shots’ like ‘All-Star Players’!!
…
Stop ur fucking gun play its boring me to shit

its certain dude that im hurt’n u, an
at ur funeral ur fam will ‘Pray ova Alter_’ like ‘Church Communions’!!

LOL

Vote = Klutch