Aero vs. Mr. Ed

[Plot]

10-12 bars due Monday
Please check & match.

[Aero]

swoosh

[Mr. Ed™]

put a space in my name next week..

[Mr. Ed™]

ayo fuck you..
The first line in ya sig lets me kno ya sex life ain't steller..
..How you even comin?..
Ya chic is so deep - she could write the next bestseller..
I'd give you props - but yo ya style is for dopes..
..I'll pat ya back tho..
..To get my ring back from up outta ya throat..
I'm abusin wit forceness - your abused when you force scripts..
..So imma send him haymakers to even out the horse shit..
Your so easy to fuckin murder haha - when i'm thru witchu sport..
I'll have ya moms resemblin Nicofiends the way she searches for a New port..
What's wit these similies? - like switch that shit cuz like its totally for newbs..
I'd push dude back so far - he prolly thought him signin in wuz jus deja voo..
This here's purely filler - this hasta last twenty lines..
..I'm tryna fuck rap like pussy..
..While this faggot nigga still sways and dickrides..
Your a joke - softer than Melrose Place..
..I'll put a hole in him sooo big..
..Scientists'll borrow him to sudy AEROspace..
Anyday i'd assbet so conceited'ly..
I stay ahead - trust is the only way you'll beleavein me son..
You are fuckin frail - but that ain't why ya chic wanna get away..
..It's a skeleton in ya closet..
..But yo the shit will leave once you admit that you gay..
So keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..And leave you pleased as punch - kick, and some other violent shit..

[Aero]

Ermm..

I saw all his losses, so my best guess is he's losing
Honestly,
his win % is under 50, Like the Rest of G-Unit
Mr. Ed Lemme talk to you, before I come with the disses
& it's hard sayin Mr. Since all your punches are Misses
Came to this match not under any real pressure
Was asked how I felt & where his skill measures
& replied like i was naming a cure to my sickness
Cuz I said "Umm medicine 'till, I feel better" (wp)
you'll never sign a deal, forget getting some paper
Only way you'd put a Pen on the Line, is using Bic as a wager
Cuz You don't appease greats, your cds bake
couldn't sell at least eight in three states
Don't have to be Rose's Lawyer
to Yell: "We need some help for Pete's sake!"
my bar's emphatic & I've scarred your status
ask him how this went
& watch Ed tell a Saab story like car fanatics
plus you know it's over when I show the toaster
he'll Put his Hands up & lose some items like Riding a Roller Coaster

[Plot]

Aero
I saw all his losses, so my best guess is he's losing
Honestly, his win % is under 50, Like the Rest of G-Unit
~ehh, 50 concepts old & setup misses seeing as he has 20 posts.
Mr. Ed Lemme talk to you, before I come with the disses
& it's hard sayin Mr. Since all your punches are Misses
~kinda cool
Came to this match not under any real pressure
Was asked how I felt & where his skill measures
~?
& replied like i was naming a cure to my sickness
Cuz I said "Umm medicine 'till, I feel better" (wp)
~dont get it
you'll never sign a deal, forget getting some paper
Only way you'd put a Pen on the Line, is using Bic as a wager
~nice
Cuz You don't appease greats, your cds bake
couldn't sell at least eight in three states
~filler
Don't have to be Rose's Lawyer
to Yell: "We need some help for Pete's sake!"
~naw
my bar's emphatic & I've scarred your status
ask him how this went & watch Ed tell a Saab story like car fanatics
~nice! if a little forced.
plus you know it's over when I show the toaster
he'll Put his Hands up & lose some items like Riding a Roller Coaster
~ok
pretty hot/cold, I was expecting more punches.

MR. Ed
ayo fuck you..The first line in ya sig lets me kno ya sex life ain't steller..
..How you even comin?..Ya chic is so deep - she could write the next bestseller..
~heh. bit sad.
I'd give you props - but yo ya style is for dopes..
..I'll pat ya back tho....To get my ring back from up outta ya throat..
~pretty good
I'm abusin wit forceness - your abused when you force scripts..
..So imma send him haymakers to even out the horse shit..
~yeah, ok flip
Your so easy to fuckin murder haha - when i'm thru witchu sport..
I'll have ya moms resemblin Nicofiends the way she searches for a New port..
~ehh, ok but whats a new port aside from a cig, is she a salior?
What's wit these similies? - like switch that shit cuz like its totally for newbs..
I'd push dude back so far - he prolly thought him signin in wuz jus deja voo..
~ok
This here's purely filler - this hasta last twenty lines..
..I'm tryna fuck rap like pussy....While this faggot nigga still sways and dickrides..
~yep, filler
Your a joke - softer than Melrose Place..
..I'll put a hole in him sooo big....Scientists'll borrow him to sudy AEROspace..
~heh, pretty weak np.
Anyday i'd assbet so conceited'ly..
I stay ahead - trust is the only way you'll beleavein me son..
~not bad wp
You are fuckin frail - but that ain't why ya chic wanna get away..
..It's a skeleton in ya closet..But yo the shit will leave once you admit that you gay..
~ok. coulda been real fresh tho
So keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..And leave you pleased as punch - kick, and some other violent shit..
~good.

Mr. Ed brought more to this battle.

[Aero]

gracias for the vote.

0-1

[Noggah]

Ed;s shit i was feelin

ayo fuck you..
The first line in ya sig lets me kno ya sex life ain't steller..
..How you even comin?..
Ya chic is so deep - she could write the next bestseller..

..I'll pat ya back tho..
..To get my ring back from up outta ya throat..

I'm abusin wit forceness - your abused when you force scripts..
..So imma send him haymakers to even out the horse shit..

I'd push dude back so far - he prolly thought him signin in wuz jus deja voo..

So keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..And leave you pleased as punch - kick, and some other violent shit..


Aero's shit i was feelin

Mr. Ed Lemme talk to you, before I come with the disses
& it's hard sayin Mr. Since all your punches are Misses

you'll never sign a deal, forget getting some paper
Only way you'd put a Pen on the Line, is using Bic as a wager

& watch Ed tell a Saab story like car fanatics

plus you know it's over when I show the toaster
he'll Put his Hands up & lose some items like Riding a Roller Coaster


overall, i think this was pretty close... Mr. ed's shit hit a little harder in my opinion... both had some pretty creative shit...But aero, ya wording/delivery of the punches were off just a tad, they coulda hit harder, n if they did, u prolly woulda got this, also u had a couple lines that were a little more "filler" than ed's... though both were close to equal consistancy... all in all i think ed edged this one out, but it was pretty close, good battle...

vote = ed...

[Aero]

thanks for the breakdowns plot n nog... 0-2

[Phonix]

Aero:

I saw all his losses, so my best guess is he's losing
Honestly, his win % is under 50, Like the Rest of G-Unit

Played


Mr. Ed Lemme talk to you, before I come with the disses
& it's hard sayin Mr. Since all your punches are Misses

Semi-played..but it's relevant.

Came to this match not under any real pressure
Was asked how I felt & where his skill measures
& replied like i was naming a cure to my sickness
Cuz I said "Umm medicine 'till, I feel better" (wp)

Ight..

you'll never sign a deal, forget getting some paper
Only way you'd put a Pen on the Line, is using Bic as a wager

Good punch

Cuz You don't appease greats, your cds bake
couldn't sell at least eight in three states
Don't have to be Rose's Lawyer
to Yell: "We need some help for Pete's sake!"

ok

my bar's emphatic & I've scarred your status
ask him how this went & watch Ed tell a Saab story like car fanatics

Good

plus you know it's over when I show the toaster
he'll Put his Hands up & lose some items like Riding a Roller Coaster

lol

VS

MR. Ed
ayo fuck you..The first line in ya sig lets me kno ya sex life ain't steller..
..How you even comin?..Ya chic is so deep - she could write the next bestseller..

dope

I'd give you props - but yo ya style is for dopes..
..I'll pat ya back tho....To get my ring back from up outta ya throat..

cool

I'm abusin wit forceness - your abused when you force scripts..
..So imma send him haymakers to even out the horse shit..

played

Your so easy to fuckin murder haha - when i'm thru witchu sport..
I'll have ya moms resemblin Nicofiends the way she searches for a New port..

wordplay is decent...punch is poor

What's wit these similies? - like switch that shit cuz like its totally for newbs..
I'd push dude back so far - he prolly thought him signin in wuz jus deja voo..

ehh

This here's purely filler - this hasta last twenty lines..
..I'm tryna fuck rap like pussy....While this faggot nigga still sways and dickrides..

wack

Your a joke - softer than Melrose Place..
..I'll put a hole in him sooo big....Scientists'll borrow him to sudy AEROspace..

basic nameplay

Anyday i'd assbet so conceited'ly..
I stay ahead - trust is the only way you'll beleavein me son..

tight

You are fuckin frail - but that ain't why ya chic wanna get away..
..It's a skeleton in ya closet..But yo the shit will leave once you admit that you gay..

haha

So keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..And leave you pleased as punch - kick, and some other violent shit..

ok

vote - mr ed

enjoyed his verse more..aero i dunno if ur coming half assed or something but not up to what i've seen from you..mr ed..dope potential

[Aero]

^ yea.. half assed... plus i tried to do the cute lil short bar thing he does... nice battle mr.ed thanks for the votes 0-3 KO

[Con]

lmfao!!!!!!!!! go home to hf u weak fuck.

[Aero]

^ smh.. HF is not my "home".. & who are YOU calling weak? ROLFMAOOAMDFAO.. Get real.. I'm Aero & you're you.. Nuff Said

[Con]

lmao, u got beat by mr Ed.. a fuccin horse!

[Mr. Ed™]

lmao its no fuckin way i tried against this dude, so stop talkin like you can fuck wit me Aero, cuz you CAN'T.. haha..