[8]KlutCh -vs- [13]Lyfe

[Malone]

LW Tourny Round1
8 bars (no more .. no less)
3-0 KO
4-1 Tko
First To 5 Votes
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All votes will be processed by battlers in the LW and credible heads
Verses Due *Friday December 09th
Check In's Due *Thursday December 08th

[Lyfe]

check good luck

[KlutCh.]

..!Check!..

come nice.

[KlutCh.]

lets start this early.

...?

[Lyfe]

nah i work weekend buddy i should be able to post sunday if you post now i can prob post later today like at 2 or 3 am

[KlutCh.]

Originally Posted by Lyfe

...i should be able to post sunday...

wut happen'd?...its wed.

[Lyfe]

aight imma post now other wise i wont get the chance


your no marvel but you can still get flipped like a page in a book
ya shook, i stole his soul like a demon crook (chess)
look the heat can Iron men to straighten a situation
Audio nah. you couldnt be Lead to tracks at a Train station
he couldnt elevate if you put this Bitch on a trampleline like j. kimmel (the man show)
but my blade'll take a chunk out his apple like the Mac Symbol
ill taylor to your pain and take your skin and make alterations
but ill have the Rudolph Light his roof like christmas decorations
with my blade in hand ya dont need an operation or tv to get a change of heart
but if u think ur an Avenger ill take out his legs like tony starks
I dispose of my foes and make em drop to da ground like strippers clothes
and cancel this Modern Marvel like The History channel was cuttin shows
fuck daisey ill make this Babies head pop off like a sunflower
breaking the start button of a controller the only way he holds power

1 more

i can see your distaste, the hate in your eyes shows your weakness
razor to the throat will end your legacy as if you died seedless

blah done

ok

jimmy kimmel was a host on the man show they had bitches jump on tramplelines
and old childrens rhymee is "daisey had a baby and her head popped off" when you say popped off you take a sunflower and but off its head
tony starks is part of the avengers and ironman is in his sig
hes part of marvel the crew i lead
anything if it needs explained just dont bother voting

[KlutCh.]

Hmph...Next!
key.

im'a stand here the win'r so i suppose u plan to surrender
cuz this 'Loss is Gonna Hurt' like its a 'Close Family Member'!!
im tha man who will dismember an cut ur stomach, ur intestines pop
they drop N i watch ur 'Gut Splash' like a 'Belly Flop'!!
ull neva top me, im insane, u babble, i reign in battles
im'a put this herb to shame, cus his 'Words are Played' like a 'Game of Scrabble'!!
the flame i pack dude, with slugs u get pluged with thousands
an when bullets from the tek escape, ull get ur whole mid-'Section Ate' like 'Public Housin'!! (section 8)
i must be wil'n, but im known to kill it, ur only fear is
ill let u feel it an beat tha 'Hell Outta You' worse than the 'Holy Spirit'!!
i told you idiot u cant see me like ur sight is weak'n
ima spite this hethan cuz his 'Talk is Cheap' like 'Nights and Weekends'!!
i wont fight or pretend, cuz we do have 'Things In Common', im takin the steps to blend
cuz ur 'Break'n ur Neck to Win' an ill commence to 'Break ur Neck and Win'!!
its finished, end'em as i snipe this dork
the Light Belt is 'Highly Held' and too bad 'Lyfe is Short'!!

[Malone]

Lyfe
your no marvel but you can still get flipped like a page in a book
ya shook, i stole his soul like a demon crook (chess)
ok
look the heat can Iron men to straighten a situation
Audio nah. you couldnt be Lead to tracks at a Train station
ok
he couldnt elevate if you put this Bitch on a trampleline like j. kimmel (the man show)
but my blade'll take a chunk out his apple like the Mac Symbol
thats sick
ill taylor to your pain and take your skin and make alterations
but ill have the Rudolph Light his roof like christmas decorations
nope
with my blade in hand ya dont need an operation or tv to get a change of heart
but if u think ur an Avenger ill take out his legs like tony starks
eh
I dispose of my foes and make em drop to da ground like strippers clothes
and cancel this Modern Marvel like The History channel was cuttin shows
can tell this was forced
fuck daisey ill make this Babies head pop off like a sunflower
breaking the start button of a controller the only way he holds power
nope , this could of been real dope
i can see your distaste, the hate in your eyes shows your weakness
razor to the throat will end your legacy as if you died seedless
not feelin this at all..

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KlutCh
im'a stand here the win'r so i suppose u plan to surrender
cuz this 'Loss is Gonna Hurt' like its a 'Close Family Member'!!
eh, weak
im tha man who will dismember an cut ur stomach, ur intestines pop
they drop N i watch ur 'Gut Splash' like a 'Belly Flop'!!
eh
ull neva top me, im insane, u babble, i reign in battles
im'a put this herb to shame, cus his 'Words are Played' like a 'Game of Scrabble'!!
cool
the flame i pack dude, with slugs u get pluged with thousands
an when bullets from the tek escape, ull get ur whole mid-'Section Ate' like 'Public Housin'!! (section 8)
ha cool
i must be wil'n, but im known to kill it, ur only fear is
ill let u feel it an beat tha 'Hell Outta You' worse than the 'Holy Spirit'!!
no
i told you idiot u cant see me like ur sight is weak'n
ima spite this hethan cuz his 'Talk is Cheap' like 'Nights and Weekends'!!
ehhh undecided bout this..
i wont fight or pretend, cuz we do have 'Things In Common', im takin the steps to blend
cuz ur 'Break'n ur Neck to Win' an ill commence to 'Break ur Neck and Win'!!
hmm
its finished, end'em as i snipe this dork
the Light Belt is 'Highly Held' and too bad 'Lyfe is Short'!!
thats sick..



v - KlutCh , damn lyfe you had that one hot punch and the rest of your verse just kinda fell off .. klutch your bars were so inconsistent , you gotta come hard every bar - you barley squeezed this one out.

[KlutCh.]

srry...

yea im kinda in a block rite now...

[Malone]

bump this for votes.

[Fluent]

Lyfe

your no marvel but you can still get flipped like a page in a book
ya shook, i stole his soul like a demon crook (chess)
Decent
look the heat can Iron men to straighten a situation
Audio nah. you couldnt be Lead to tracks at a Train station
Tracks/Train has been done plenty
he couldnt elevate if you put this Bitch on a trampleline like j. kimmel (the man show)
but my blade'll take a chunk out his apple like the Mac Symbol
Good
ill taylor to your pain and take your skin and make alterations
but ill have the Rudolph Light his roof like christmas decorations
No
with my blade in hand ya dont need an operation or tv to get a change of heart
but if u think ur an Avenger ill take out his legs like tony starks
Weak
I dispose of my foes and make em drop to da ground like strippers clothes
and cancel this Modern Marvel like The History channel was cuttin shows
Not bad but too wordy
fuck daisey ill make this Babies head pop off like a sunflower
breaking the start button of a controller the only way he holds power
Needs better wording
i can see your distaste, the hate in your eyes shows your weakness
razor to the throat will end your legacy as if you died seedless
Thought about it creatively I can tell but the punch wasn't strong

Not bad, you've gotten better since we battled.

KlutCh

im'a stand here the win'r so i suppose u plan to surrender
cuz this 'Loss is Gonna Hurt' like its a 'Close Family Member'!!
Played
im tha man who will dismember an cut ur stomach, ur intestines pop
they drop N i watch ur 'Gut Splash' like a 'Belly Flop'!!
Kinda corny
ull neva top me, im insane, u babble, i reign in battles
im'a put this herb to shame, cus his 'Words are Played' like a 'Game of Scrabble'!!
Wordplay/Scrabble=Played
the flame i pack dude, with slugs u get pluged with thousands
an when bullets from the tek escape, ull get ur whole mid-'Section Ate' like 'Public Housin'!! (section 8)
Decent
i must be wil'n, but im known to kill it, ur only fear is
ill let u feel it an beat tha 'Hell Outta You' worse than the 'Holy Spirit'!!
Nope
i told you idiot u cant see me like ur sight is weak'n
ima spite this hethan cuz his 'Talk is Cheap' like 'Nights and Weekends'!!
Decent
i wont fight or pretend, cuz we do have 'Things In Common', im takin the steps to blend
cuz ur 'Break'n ur Neck to Win' an ill commence to 'Break ur Neck and Win'!!
Nope
its finished, end'em as i snipe this dork
the Light Belt is 'Highly Held' and too bad 'Lyfe is Short'!!
Decent

Vote: Klutch

He basically came more consistant and worded his ideas better which got him the win despite Lyfe having the best bar with the apple thing, that was cool.

[Malone]

2-0

[Pembroke]

Lyfe

your no marvel but you can still get flipped like a page in a book
ya shook, i stole his soul like a demon crook (chess)

- nah

look the heat can Iron men to straighten a situation
Audio nah. you couldnt be Lead to tracks at a Train station

- played

he couldnt elevate if you put this Bitch on a trampleline like j. kimmel (the man show)
but my blade'll take a chunk out his apple like the Mac Symbol

- LOL nice.

ill taylor to your pain and take your skin and make alterations
but ill have the Rudolph Light his roof like christmas decorations

- eh

with my blade in hand ya dont need an operation or tv to get a change of heart
but if u think ur an Avenger ill take out his legs like tony starks

- decent

I dispose of my foes and make em drop to da ground like strippers clothes
and cancel this Modern Marvel like The History channel was cuttin shows

- not working

fuck daisey ill make this Babies head pop off like a sunflower
breaking the start button of a controller the only way he holds power

- forced

i can see your distaste, the hate in your eyes shows your weakness
razor to the throat will end your legacy as if you died seedless

- no good.

Klut

im'a stand here the win'r so i suppose u plan to surrender
cuz this 'Loss is Gonna Hurt' like its a 'Close Family Member'!!

- decent

im tha man who will dismember an cut ur stomach, ur intestines pop
they drop N i watch ur 'Gut Splash' like a 'Belly Flop'!!

- no

ull neva top me, im insane, u babble, i reign in battles
im'a put this herb to shame, cus his 'Words are Played' like a 'Game of Scrabble'!!

- played out

the flame i pack dude, with slugs u get pluged with thousands
an when bullets from the tek escape, ull get ur whole mid-'Section Ate' like 'Public Housin'!! (section 8)

- ate/8 is very played, but this gets a decent...

i must be wil'n, but im known to kill it, ur only fear is
ill let u feel it an beat tha 'Hell Outta You' worse than the 'Holy Spirit'!!

- nah

i told you idiot u cant see me like ur sight is weak'n
ima spite this hethan cuz his 'Talk is Cheap' like 'Nights and Weekends'!!

- K

i wont fight or pretend, cuz we do have 'Things In Common', im takin the steps to blend
cuz ur 'Break'n ur Neck to Win' an ill commence to 'Break ur Neck and Win'!!

- ... not really

its finished, end'em as i snipe this dork
the Light Belt is 'Highly Held' and too bad 'Lyfe is Short'!!

- concept isn't all that good, but Aight

v/ Klutch

Both had basic punches, Lyfe had a tight 1, Klutch had no real standouts, but his decent concepts in each bar won it for him... both Stay up

[Hooligan]

Lyfe
your no marvel but you can still get flipped like a page in a book
ya shook, i stole his soul like a demon crook (chess)
hmm
look the heat can Iron men to straighten a situation
Audio nah. you couldnt be Lead to tracks at a Train station
ok
he couldnt elevate if you put this Bitch on a trampleline like j. kimmel (the man show)
but my blade'll take a chunk out his apple like the Mac Symbol
dope
ill taylor to your pain and take your skin and make alterations
but ill have the Rudolph Light his roof like christmas decorations
lol
with my blade in hand ya dont need an operation or tv to get a change of heart
but if u think ur an Avenger ill take out his legs like tony starks
ehh
I dispose of my foes and make em drop to da ground like strippers clothes
and cancel this Modern Marvel like The History channel was cuttin shows
nice
fuck daisey ill make this Babies head pop off like a sunflower
breaking the start button of a controller the only way he holds power
nah
i can see your distaste, the hate in your eyes shows your weakness
razor to the throat will end your legacy as if you died seedless
nop

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KlutCh
im'a stand here the win'r so i suppose u plan to surrender
cuz this 'Loss is Gonna Hurt' like its a 'Close Family Member'!!
ok
im tha man who will dismember an cut ur stomach, ur intestines pop
they drop N i watch ur 'Gut Splash' like a 'Belly Flop'!!
k
ull neva top me, im insane, u babble, i reign in battles
im'a put this herb to shame, cus his 'Words are Played' like a 'Game of Scrabble'!!
lol
the flame i pack dude, with slugs u get pluged with thousands
an when bullets from the tek escape, ull get ur whole mid-'Section Ate' like 'Public Housin'!! (section 8)
damn..
i must be wil'n, but im known to kill it, ur only fear is
ill let u feel it an beat tha 'Hell Outta You' worse than the 'Holy Spirit'!!
nope
i told you idiot u cant see me like ur sight is weak'n
ima spite this hethan cuz his 'Talk is Cheap' like 'Nights and Weekends'!!
nice
i wont fight or pretend, cuz we do have 'Things In Common', im takin the steps to blend
cuz ur 'Break'n ur Neck to Win' an ill commence to 'Break ur Neck and Win'!!
nope
its finished, end'em as i snipe this dork
the Light Belt is 'Highly Held' and too bad 'Lyfe is Short'!!
dope



v - KlutCh, lyfe you had some nice bars but you were lacking consistency. Klutch i think you're punches hit harder than most of lyfe's did so you got it.