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Old 12-20-2006, 12:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Oh No Freestyle

First off..

You Said:
nah, ill still be in tha country wit some bos and some reebs

^You talkin bout Girbauds and Reeboks, riiiight?

But yeah, anyways, I felt this piece was ok, nothing special in my eyes..It's a bit simple also, but then again, you did write to a beat and when I write to an instrumental I often have to dumb my rhymes down so they can flow properly..Maybe thats what you did here, too..Anyways, there wasn't really much I liked in there, a few lines..Let me quote em..

You Wrote:
yea...wild in tha streets, even wilder wit freaks
like...play wit yerself wit a mouthfull of me
Haha, just hilarious..

a monkeys uncle from tha jungle, country hustle
just cut this wit that, ya money doubles
there is no tit for tat, just bloody rumbles
me, im only bloody cuz i cut up my knuckles
I also liked this part...Even though it really seems like some shit Cam`Ron would say..I still appreciated the smooth flow..

Yeah, thats all I really got to say, decent read..keep at it, bruh.
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