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Old 12-11-2006, 03:00 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Default Re: Whats Good? (AV & Narcist)

The road can get shaky, so we explored the gift
Of the future, made it destined to live
and that’s me, so I pass peace through pipes
to my chief, that’s right or through rap beats and mics
cuz no tsunami tide could storm out hope
they say the poor mans broke
but that’s just the poor mans joke
cuz the poor man knows the true sign of wealth
just check how I breathe in life, sigh and well
tell the beaten path that’s down with gravity
let the bad just sleep
give a dap, a peace and ask what’s good?

brilliantly casual.


fade away n flee the barbed wire
no floor gaspedal stuck inside the mire
onto a pyre path made of tires
leap into ulterior
where tires are inferior; to the yellow brick road
where mozes split dust and adam took an oath
judas spoke truth and allah summoned goats
noah's arc stood the flood, stating knowledge is the roots
but, for the simple-minded:
whats poppin', what's happenin', what's good?

flow was off and on but this excerpt is dope as hell.



you guys nailed this. the second verse had a choppy flow from time to time but the lines in both made up for it completely. hit me up for a collab, id be real interested. this blew me away. great topic.
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