[Vick Slate]

Destined from rubble, gin, cotton its
What got the fix for stomach rumbles
Some would stumble
Love was humbled, sun beat backs
Some bleed black
Some reach back while some just stumble
..imagery is lovely

different type of AV in these collabs you doing, still laid back aproach though, just minus on flow.....lyrics are good and i like your creativity with your imagery!


no psyche above substance
just matter over mind
shatter of the line
grandfathers gathered in the mine
clatter from a mime like
penning with a feather in their time
..your start is very well put together too!

flow is there, lyrics are cool with the imagery

both styles came together as one in this piece, more poetry type than open mic (rap) material
liked your starts better tahn the middle parts, n felt you both ended your verses correctly

good collab!