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Old 12-09-2006, 02:34 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Default Re: Whats Good? (AV & Narcist)

AVARICE - What a relaxed, diluted light source with a state of understanding derived from the rhythm. Served with milk, coffee, blood, or contaminated rain water? While you enliven, Narcist animates.

"they say the poor mans broke
but that’s just the poor mans joke
cuz the poor man knows"

You know that I know that this was truth. No strenuous efforts - the effect is there.

Narcist - The rhyme scheme was held back by the nature of limitations, yet the spiritual beacon of image and idea remains. What's goodness? The traffic at daybreak. The promise of a new tomorrow with you guys, as Phade would say, "Rippin' it up" in the open mic section.

noah's arc stood the flood, stating knowledge is the roots
^I would change "roots" to "root." Singularity is key.

Check out the SSC competitions if you have time. Thanks.

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