Yo this piece was soooo nasty, shit like this is the reason I get no work done when I'm high lol. Heres the breakdown..
1st Verse - Scheme was advanced but a lil rugged. Word choice and imagery stood out and were dope. Flow was there as well, overall very very solid verse.
Quote:
Love was humbled, sun beat backs
Some bleed black
Some reach back while some just stumble
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That was my favorite part on first verse.
2nd Verse - Second verse was fukkin INSANE with flow. Reading that in my head made butter feel like sand paper it was that smooth. Lyrics were deeper imo than first verse, and imagery was just as good.
Quote:
no psyche above substance
just matter over mind
shatter of the line
grandfathers gathered in the mine
clatter from a mime like
penning with a feather in their time
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Shit was a sick way to open the verse. Ended nice as well.
Very dope collabo. Enjoyable read indeed. I'm assuming order was listed in parenthesis.
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