Some bleed black
Some reach back while some just stumble
Cookies crumble but the dough it sticks
The road can get shaky, so we explored the gift
^^
The Multies Were A Lil Off But The Imagery Was Sick In My Opinion
The Flow Was Raw... Could Catch It... Loved It.
cuz no tsunami tide could storm out hope
they say the poor mans broke
but that’s just the poor mans joke
cuz the poor man knows the true sign of wealth
just check how I breathe in life, sigh and well
^^
Sick... Enough Said.
no psyche above substance
just matter over mind
shatter of the line
grandfathers gathered in the mine
clatter from a mime like
penning with a feather in their time
^^
Sort Sceme Well Put Together... Nice Opener To Get The Hype Back Into The Thing
Proceeds Reading...
fade away n flee the barbed wire
no floor gaspedal stuck inside the mire
onto a pyre path made of tires
leap into ulterior
where tires are inferior; to the yellow brick road
where mozes split dust and adam took an oath
^^
OH Shit
Last Bar Was Murder But Those That Go Before Were Nicely Written As Well
Overall This Was a Sick Piece
I m Glad To Booth Started To Cinder Again....
Return A Favor??
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/jay-f...ou-118157.html (Jay... Ft Archive - Keep A Writer With You)
Or
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/hush-...et-118366.html (Hush... Not Just Yet.) (diss)