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This was good man, I like how you keep to a sound.
Alot of my pieces end up like.. a sound, rhyme it then link it into the next bar, different sound
rhyme it, link it to the next bar, etc...
But for the first part of this you start with sword/core for/floor then switch to swing/thing
then its back to the swore/whore. Creates a good flow because that sound is fresh in your
audiences mind.
Cool concept/topic too.