 Re: Death B4 Dishonor
great topic, I was really feeling the imagery and the emotion on this piece flow was on point, and overall It was a solid written, I enjoy reading your stuff fam, keep doing your thing.
favorite lines
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guards dashed in on the scene as he gathered a swing
took a spear to the knee still he managed to cling
to the sword, in remembering the oath that he swore
"protect the king from enemies and fortunate whores"
and the closing was excellent, keep doing your thing. |