 Re: Death B4 Dishonor
loved this piece, it was dope start to finish, the flow was on point and you stayed on topic. fav lines:
he fought a lil more then collapsed to the floor
she screamed as he killed the one her passion was for
He was followed by the Calvary force
Oblivious to the slaughter, as they trampled a corpse
They surrounded Ophylus the head of the knights
One rushed in and got impaled by his knife
very nice piece. keep it up. |