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Old 05-12-2006, 02:45 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hi, My name is (who) Crit Criti Critic Criticize.
Can i have the attention of the class for 1 minute:

this mw is miniscule, i slaughter fags when killing fools,
coz ul meet death(depth) quicker than steep declines in swimming pools/
i ko'd you last time in the legaue and now my fists nail higer,
coz 8 bars will leave 'clutch wrecked' like 'female drivers'/
il dent-urs in the purist form n leave u wrecked with clenched teeth,
and have your 'flesh saturated in blood' like 'processed mince beef'/
when i fire at random bullets fly sloppy through frames,
only time u 'land'd a chance' was playin monoploly games/

u cant mess with the champ! i batter weak flows,
and my hits 'exlode ya vein(vane) like a shattered ego/
my assults is so inhumane! it shrinks when bitter,
that'l have ya bone catlige dried up like ink in printers/(fill my ink cartridge bitch)
il be grazing ya sections, intaped erasing perfections,
until ya 'insert-in a coma(comma) like grammer corections'/
il make you eat dirt until your records worth dust,
ur best punches r 'medi-core' like da centre of earths crust/



and by the way, tell him i slit his throat in this dream i had.
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