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Default Re: LW#3 Skillosophy(1-0) vs Jack(0-0)

Jacque

Brains splattered,veins shattered,face scattered,thats what sickness is
Show u a bloody matter when i leave ya Head Leakin like syphillis

- Eh

Leave ya ligaments across nations,touching more people than preechers
When your threw out the globe,like wastful geography teachers!

- Threw out the globe... ugh..

Jack sleepin on top bunks ta prove i stay above the Rest
Yu could perform doggy style and wouldnt be Hands Down the best

- Not really

Pull ya Death Card like the inivitable came wit ya visa,& murder u bro
U Stay Catchin The Reepers Interest,but Stumble on Debt Throw/Death Row

- Forced

Kid stayed makin up storys & lies,U never was Ill!& oh did i mention?
He'd rather not show his face like muslim women,kuz Excuses r no longer accepted*

- Weak, set-up ruined the decent Punch

He stay on Top A Dick,he represents what faggots are
Kuz we all know Skills Posted Over Head like his avatar

- K, avatar punches are gay but this works

Rookies uppin you like u somethin ta fear,but how u causin a buzz?
When u got more Room 2 Improve Than tim allen does

- Decent

In an instant jack'll slaughter u,no Questions about it im serious
Kuz like the purpose of tampons nigga,im stoppin you..Period.!

- Played..

Skill

im bout to play "Jack" better then Robin Williams!, you fuccin wit $k!LLo$oPhY?//
not even probably, you gotta-be at least on my level to even bother-me!//

- First line was cool.. rest is Blah

you not-a-"G", and neither is ya crew, but i dont need to remind-yall!//
cuz between you niggas, you got "one stripe" like the pool game "nine-ball"!//

- Wording ruined it

claimin' you killin $k!LL, but couldnt dish-out-the-slaughter!//
now ya verse got Marco yellin' "fish-outta-water"!//

- Okay

J likes to sneek in his sisters room, and see how well he can fit-in-her-skirts!//
it's a fact-jack you rap-wacc, so save me the trouble and get-in-the-hurse!//

- Okay

you spit-it-the-worst!, $k!LL got you colliding-wit-death!//
send this magazine to your lungs till your subscribing-for-breath!//

- No

be careful now Jack!, dont make the wrong-decision!//
or i'll cut you in half vertically to practice my long-division!//

- Not bad

with palm-precision, punches got you shakin like bomb-collisions!//
you wanna play with the "big boys", better get mom's-permission!//

- Weak

the time-is-up, your rhymin-succs, better hope they auction-minutes//
8 bars, and $k!LL son'd Jack quik like drive-thru adoption-clinics!//

- Too simple

v/ $killosophy

Better verse.. both didn't really come original.. Jack's punches were either badly worded or weak punchlines, and Skill had the flow and decent contents to hold it down.. Jack, remember what I told you in the PM..
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