#1 Pembroke Killa(1-1) vs Fluent(8-0)

[Stoic]

#1 Pembroke Killa(0-0) vs Fluent(8-0)
8-12 bars
good luck.

[Fluent]

I'm 9-0 now after beating Dopar.

Check, I'll probably end up spitting really late wednesday because I'm going to be writing 20 pages in 3 days so my time to come up with something half decent will be low.

[Pembroke]

y000.. right on time.

Wanna go 10? i'll match you if you submit first/vice versa

[Fluent]

He wrote a diss to Stockton if anyone didn't know..

Bring on ya lame low rate diss, you lack the game to take this
Admit to me you're wack if you wanna make a claim to greatness
Don't try to overcome my strength when you're too slim to survive
You'll be only be able to show some muscle after I skin you alive
You ain't got moves kid so prepare to catch three mean face lifts
Cuz ya fake ass couldn't even break dance inbetween work shifts
Maybe you did grasp wordplay and passed it onto better handlers
But now it's clear you're past your better days like retired gamblers
My swordplay'll slice this rookie just to hear him tremor in shards
He couldn't get on anyone's level after stealing their memory cards
That LW Tourney is mine and all you can try to be is a late cut
A low metabolism isn't the reason why you can't get ya weight up
His attempt at fame was laughable, he'll never get in a jazzy group
He couldn't get noticed by Stockton if he went up for an alley oop
So you must be a fake who shouldn't try to confront my defense
I'm taking you out of Killer mode and revoking ya hunting license
You never bring fresh ideas so you'll never match my thunder in war
Don't push the envelope, slide ya letter of resignation under my door
Sure he's afraid of losing but his odds of victory are at best suspect
Unless he gives brains to DR's like volunteer lobotomy test subjects

[Pembroke]

Being undisputed takes charisma, and you fall from the Trauma
thats why The voters take one look at Fluent and Buddha/Boo Da Guy, like Siddhartha Guttama.. *
In a textee's life theres a road to stardom, Fluent takes the fake route
Need a loss already? I guess this Calls for the Cajun like Asian Takeout
This is the front lines and i'm the man of these zones
after this battle you won't be a Happy Camper like Stanley in 'Holes'! **
Your half as important as you think you are, don't expect the W yet.
i'll make you wanna Send up the Flair like Ric doing Errands for the W,WF... (Ric Flair)
piercin' this whore in more than his earlobes, for tryna roll with the pharoahs
There'll be Crowes flying over ya Corps like Russel performing an Airshow!

Sorry I hafta do this...

I'm not the red-rose type, as your caskets lowering i'll throw in a eulogy
Fluent tends to Run off the stage like Ashlee Simpson going through Puberty
No guns in those biceps.. similar to your style, so weak and tasteless, its
A wonder why Stoic didn't remove your spot, like Enrique Iglesias..
Run through your crew, they shoulda known your not loyal to shit
retire early, Cuz your Skill? its/Skillets expired like Spoling fish
Fists is cliches.. what comes around goes around with the Hooks
ask god? 'He'll figure/Hilfiger your History' like Tommy going down in the books!
Shit scratch that, you ain't a Rapper! get back in the shade
cause goin' up against Pem, you de'Zaire in/Desirin Death like the African
Plague!!..



* Siddhartha Guttama was the Buddha
** Stanley from the book "Holes"... the book takes place in a prison camp.

G'luck, nice verse

[Con]

Bring on ya lame low rate diss, you lack the game to take this
Admit to me you're wack if you wanna make a claim to greatness

^ok..kinda basic

Don't try to overcome my strength when you're too slim to survive
You'll be only be able to show some muscle after I skin you alive

^..nice

You ain't got moves kid so prepare to catch three mean face lifts
Cuz ya fake ass couldn't even break dance inbetween work shifts

^bad wording on da concept

Maybe you did grasp wordplay and passed it onto better handlers
But now it's clear you're past your better days like retired gamblers

^lol, good

My swordplay'll slice this rookie just to hear him tremor in shards
He couldn't get on anyone's level after stealing their memory cards

^ok

That LW Tourney is mine and all you can try to be is a late cut
A low metabolism isn't the reason why you can't get ya weight up

^ok, ehh on da wording tho

His attempt at fame was laughable, he'll never get in a jazzy group
He couldn't get noticed by Stockton if he went up for an alley oop

^ok flip on da personal

So you must be a fake who shouldn't try to confront my defense
I'm taking you out of Killer mode and revoking ya hunting license

^ehh

You never bring fresh ideas so you'll never match my thunder in war
Don't push the envelope, slide ya letter of resignation under my door

^what da hell does 'pushing da envelope' mean? seen these cycling around
lately..somebody tell me, ok on da flip nontheless

Sure he's afraid of losing but his odds of victory are at best suspect
Unless he gives brains to DR's like volunteer lobotomy test subjects

^lobotomy is done in da bodys lower half..beside that, its aite.



Being undisputed takes charisma, and you fall from the Trauma
thats why The voters take one look at Fluent and Buddha/Boo Da Guy, like Siddhartha Guttama.. *

^Sid was the budda? dont make sense, ok wordplay tho

In a textee's life theres a road to stardom, Fluent takes the fake route
Need a loss already? I guess this Calls for the Cajun like Asian Takeout

^lol, good

This is the front lines and i'm the man of these zones
after this battle you won't be a Happy Camper like Stanley in 'Holes'! **

^ok

Your half as important as you think you are, don't expect the W yet.
i'll make you wanna Send up the Flair like Ric doing Errands for the W,WF... (Ric Flair)

^ok

piercin' this whore in more than his earlobes, for tryna roll with the pharoahs
There'll be Crowes flying over ya Corps like Russel performing an Airshow!

^lmao! this was nice

I'm not the red-rose type, as your caskets lowering i'll throw in a eulogy
Fluent tends to Run off the stage like Ashlee Simpson going through Puberty

^ok

No guns in those biceps.. similar to your style, so weak and tasteless, its
A wonder why Stoic didn't remove your spot, like Enrique Iglesias..

^ehh

Run through your crew, they shoulda known your not loyal to shit
retire early, Cuz your Skill? its/Skillets expired like Spoling fish

^ehh

Fists is cliches.. what comes around goes around with the Hooks
ask god? 'He'll figure/Hilfiger your History' like Tommy going down in the books!

^nice

Shit scratch that, you ain't a Rapper! get back in the shade
cause goin' up against Pem, you de'Zaire in/Desirin Death like the African
Plague!!..

^nice


thought flu came hard, pem seem to come harder. creativity's on pem's side..good job on da improvement to both..but gotta go wit..

v=Pem..came original

[Fluent]

lobotomy=brain surgery that got outlawed and push the envelope means come up with new shit.

[Pembroke]

i always remembered Siddhartha Guttama as the "Enlightened One"/Buddha in my History class.. prolly wrong tho.. Thxs for the vote Con...

1-0

[Hooligan]

^ No you're right, I just did a project on buddhism.

[Malone]

Fluent
---------
Bring on ya lame low rate diss, you lack the game to take this
Admit to me you're wack if you wanna make a claim to greatness
~cool
Don't try to overcome my strength when you're too slim to survive
You'll be only be able to show some muscle after I skin you alive
~cool
You ain't got moves kid so prepare to catch three mean face lifts
Cuz ya fake ass couldn't even break dance inbetween work shifts
~lol
Maybe you did grasp wordplay and passed it onto better handlers
But now it's clear you're past your better days like retired gamblers
~oh nice
My swordplay'll slice this rookie just to hear him tremor in shards
He couldn't get on anyone's level after stealing their memory cards
~eh, this could of been dope
That LW Tourney is mine and all you can try to be is a late cut
A low metabolism isn't the reason why you can't get ya weight up
~naw
His attempt at fame was laughable, he'll never get in a jazzy group
He couldn't get noticed by Stockton if he went up for an alley oop
~played
So you must be a fake who shouldn't try to confront my defense
I'm taking you out of Killer mode and revoking ya hunting license
~naw
You never bring fresh ideas so you'll never match my thunder in war
Don't push the envelope, slide ya letter of resignation under my door
~eh
Sure he's afraid of losing but his odds of victory are at best suspect
Unless he gives brains to DR's like volunteer lobotomy test subjects
~nice


Pembroke
---------------
Being undisputed takes charisma, and you fall from the Trauma
thats why The voters take one look at Fluent and Buddha/Boo Da Guy, like Siddhartha Guttama.. *
~cool
In a textee's life theres a road to stardom, Fluent takes the fake route
Need a loss already? I guess this Calls for the Cajun like Asian Takeout
~nope
This is the front lines and i'm the man of these zones
after this battle you won't be a Happy Camper like Stanley in 'Holes'! **
~naw
Your half as important as you think you are, don't expect the W yet.
i'll make you wanna Send up the Flair like Ric doing Errands for the W,WF... (Ric Flair)
~naw
piercin' this whore in more than his earlobes, for tryna roll with the pharoahs
There'll be Crowes flying over ya Corps like Russel performing an Airshow!
~nice
I'm not the red-rose type, as your caskets lowering i'll throw in a eulogy
Fluent tends to Run off the stage like Ashlee Simpson going through Puberty
~no
No guns in those biceps.. similar to your style, so weak and tasteless, its
A wonder why Stoic didn't remove your spot, like Enrique Iglesias..
~not feelin this at all
Run through your crew, they shoulda known your not loyal to shit
retire early, Cuz your Skill? its/Skillets expired like Spoling fish
~nice
Fists is cliches.. what comes around goes around with the Hooks
ask god? 'He'll figure/Hilfiger your History' like Tommy going down in the books!
~bad wording, cool concept
Shit scratch that, you ain't a Rapper! get back in the shade
cause goin' up against Pem, you de'Zaire in/Desirin Death like the African
Plague!!..
~cool



v - fluent, punches more enjoyable to me .. pem had alot of wordplay but most of it was forced..

[Stoic]

this is the best battle ive read in a long while.
I'll vote when i'm done studying.

[Phonix]

Fluent
Bring on ya lame low rate diss, you lack the game to take this
Admit to me you're wack if you wanna make a claim to greatness

Good

Don't try to overcome my strength when you're too slim to survive
You'll be only be able to show some muscle after I skin you alive

Liked the double usage of as i call them phrases, was a tight bar

You ain't got moves kid so prepare to catch three mean face lifts
Cuz ya fake ass couldn't even break dance inbetween work shifts

Nah, played concept and worded badly imo

Maybe you did grasp wordplay and passed it onto better handlers
But now it's clear you're past your better days like retired gamblers

Tight

My swordplay'll slice this rookie just to hear him tremor in shards
He couldn't get on anyone's level after stealing their memory cards

Wording...heard this before too

That LW Tourney is mine and all you can try to be is a late cut
A low metabolism isn't the reason why you can't get ya weight up

Wack

His attempt at fame was laughable, he'll never get in a jazzy group
He couldn't get noticed by Stockton if he went up for an alley oop

Nooop. good the way u attempting personals but this was poor

So you must be a fake who shouldn't try to confront my defense
I'm taking you out of Killer mode and revoking ya hunting license

Ok

You never bring fresh ideas so you'll never match my thunder in war
Don't push the envelope, slide ya letter of resignation under my door

Push the envelope lines dont appeal to me

Sure he's afraid of losing but his odds of victory are at best suspect
Unless he gives brains to DR's like volunteer lobotomy test subjects

Cool

VS

Pembroke

Being undisputed takes charisma, and you fall from the Trauma
thats why The voters take one look at Fluent and Buddha/Boo Da Guy, like Siddhartha Guttama.. *

Nice wordplay

In a textee's life theres a road to stardom, Fluent takes the fake route
Need a loss already? I guess this Calls for the Cajun like Asian Takeout

Too forced

This is the front lines and i'm the man of these zones
after this battle you won't be a Happy Camper like Stanley in 'Holes'! **

Not liking this, concept was kinda corny

Your half as important as you think you are, don't expect the W yet.
i'll make you wanna Send up the Flair like Ric doing Errands for the W,WF... (Ric Flair)

Cool

piercin' this whore in more than his earlobes, for tryna roll with the pharoahs
There'll be Crowes flying over ya Corps like Russel performing an Airshow!

Sick

I'm not the red-rose type, as your caskets lowering i'll throw in a eulogy
Fluent tends to Run off the stage like Ashlee Simpson going through Puberty

Wack

No guns in those biceps.. similar to your style, so weak and tasteless, its
A wonder why Stoic didn't remove your spot, like Enrique Iglesias..

haha

Run through your crew, they shoulda known your not loyal to shit
retire early, Cuz your Skill? its/Skillets expired like Spoling fish

Tight wordplay

Fists is cliches.. what comes around goes around with the Hooks
ask god? 'He'll figure/Hilfiger your History' like Tommy going down in the books!

Wording let you down fam

Shit scratch that, you ain't a Rapper! get back in the shade
cause goin' up against Pem, you de'Zaire in/Desirin Death like the African
Plague!!..

Nice

Vote = Pembroke, realise this is a crew vote but 100 percent honest

[warrent]

im tryin to get down, and spit somthin holla back and let me know

[Fluent]

Some votes on this to wrap it up would be cool, he's got the #1 regardless, just would rather not have a battle close at 2-1 or something.

[Pembroke]

Word Stoic said he'd vote..